Really nicely written. The first thing that really struck me was the clear and powerful emotions that came through with this story. The sense of two "lost" women, teenagers almost, was strong, and it really lets you connect to them and start to care for them and their experiences.
From there, the discovery of the secrets, starting to get a sense of their individual histories, and rather different personalities and approaches where it comes to the pet play aspect of the story is very well done and interesting.
Not as direct or immediate as several stories, but still very well done and very rewarding, and I really do hope that there is more to come, and we can progress further with their shared exploration of the pet play, and the other toys that are suddenly available to both of them
