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Title: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on September 01, 2021, 09:05:50 pm
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em1.html
F/f; bond; petgirl; first; latex; bitchsuit; gag; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em2.html
F/f; latex; bitchsuit; bond; collar; leash; outdoors; rom; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em3.html
F/f; fpov; petgirl; bond; clamps; cuffs; toys; collar; leash; latex; bitchsuit; public; outdoors; urine; rom; cons; XX

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em4.html
F/f; FF; public; toys; remote; shop; collar; leash; buttplug; tail; petgirl; naked; denial; rom; cons; reluct; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em5.html
F/f; FF; fpov; naked; shower; oral; shop; bond; straps; harness; chastity; toys; insert; buttplug; collar; remote; rom; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em6.html
F/f; fpov; bond; collar; leash; outdoors; naked; shop; latex; petgirl; catsuit; buttplug; straps; tribbing; rom; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em7.html
F/f; F/f+; fpov; collar; latex; catsuit; bitchsuit; petgirl; mittens; gag; tribbing; rom; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em8.html
F/f+; petgirl; latex; catsuit; bitchsuit; hood; shop; remote; toys; climax; rom; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em9.html
F/f; F+/f; fpov; collar; latex; catsuit; blindfold; shop; training; crop; tickle; tease; climax; rom; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em10.html
F/f; F/f+; petgirl; tease; collar; leash; naked; outdoors; buttplug; tribbing; rom; cons; X

https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em11.html
F/f; fpov; bond; oral; buttplug; naked; blindfold; cuffs; toys; tease; rom; cons; X

https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em12.html
F+/f+; latex; petgirl; costume; convention; chair; cuffs; straps; public; bitchsuit; maid; collar; hood; tease; climax; rom; cons; XX

https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em13.html
F/f; F+/f; fpov; chastity; tease; denial; petgirl; leash; collar; strip; blindfold; gag; buttplug; cuffs; spank; cons; X

https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em14.html
F/f; fpov; chastity; collar; shop; costume; latex; rom; cons; X

https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em15.html
F/f; F/f+; Sbf; fpov; bond; chastity; collar; oral; latex; petsuit; petgirl; gag; hood; shop; caught; rom; cons; X

https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/sam_and_em16.html
F/f; Sbf; fpov; oral; latex; petsuit; petgirl; shop; stuck; mittens; climax; caught; rom; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: Sam and Em by F Nevergood
Post by: dengamle68 on September 02, 2021, 11:33:32 am
What a great story, can't wait to the next  :D
Title: Re: Sam and Em by F Nevergood
Post by: sammy808 on September 03, 2021, 05:20:28 am
i also hope there will be more parts to this story. :)
Title: Re: Sam and Em by F Nevergood
Post by: johnyburner on September 06, 2021, 12:46:12 pm
I'm also putting my vote for this to continue. Such a great start.
Title: Re: Sam and Em by F Nevergood
Post by: teanndaorsa on September 11, 2021, 08:31:50 pm
One more part up tonight
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: dengamle68 on September 13, 2021, 06:45:03 am
Great story - would love to read more  ;D
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: feline on September 23, 2021, 11:50:27 am
Really nicely written.  The first thing that really struck me was the clear and powerful emotions that came through with this story.  The sense of two "lost" women, teenagers almost, was strong, and it really lets you connect to them and start to care for them and their experiences.

From there, the discovery of the secrets, starting to get a sense of their individual histories, and rather different personalities and approaches where it comes to the pet play aspect of the story is very well done and interesting.

Not as direct or immediate as several stories, but still very well done and very rewarding, and I really do hope that there is more to come, and we can progress further with their shared exploration of the pet play, and the other toys that are suddenly available to both of them :)
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on October 23, 2021, 07:33:13 pm
Part 3 up tonight.
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: feline on October 26, 2021, 03:48:11 pm
Definitely moving forward and showing the growing and developing relationship between the two girls.  Fun and interesting, and I am curious to see where this goes from here :)
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on November 14, 2021, 06:50:02 pm
Chapter 4 up tonight, enjoy.
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: feline on November 17, 2021, 04:35:50 pm
Ah, NOW, now we are really hitting our stride, and going places!  We needed the earlier parts to really build the characters, the relationships and to set the ground work, and it is paying off big time!

The remote control was a wicked surprise, but then...  the conversation in the sex shop!  I nearly fell over from laughing, it was hysterical, SO good, and the way it ended...  WOW, loved that :)

This is really coming together and starting to achieve a lot, a wonderful experience, I do hope there are plans for a few more parts!
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on February 16, 2022, 10:12:19 pm
Chapter 5 up tonight, and 6 will follow shortly, enjoy!
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: KayDee88 on February 18, 2022, 05:37:24 pm
Such a nice series, great read all the five parts so far. Such a sweet relationship they have together with Sam, even if it started to drift from sister-sister to dom-sub. I can't figure out yet, if Emily is a switch, or just really now gotten in the fun role of being the dominant, but can't wait to find out.  :)
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: mari0 on February 18, 2022, 06:21:08 pm
Such a cute series. Love both girls tentativeness/enthusiasm
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on February 24, 2022, 08:33:35 pm
Part 6 - enjoy!
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: KayDee88 on February 26, 2022, 06:03:05 pm
I loved this part. Sometimes trying out being submissive is what takes you to be a real dominant, really like the dinamic of their relationship. The getting caught part...please make their Mom both their Mistress...
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: feline on March 01, 2022, 01:12:27 pm
Just finished part 5, and wanted to say a few words before moving onto part 6.

Firstly, the character development is REALLY working.  We needed the history and the difficult moments to draw us in, to help us see and understand who these people are, so we could understand and cherish what they are starting to learn and see about themselves and between themselves.  The sense of a major emotional hurdle, a massive emotional problem to consider is very real.

They are "sisters", but only in the legal sense, not in any form of biological sense, so in that manor there is no reason for them to resist their growing attraction.  Of course that is a coldly clinical statement, and simply ignores the massive emotional elements that "disprove" that, long before you consider the emotional mess of their parents ever getting wind of all of this.

So that was very well done, tender, moving, delicate and sexy, it worked really well, felt natural and moved things along very nicely :)

Then back to the sex shop, seeing them so unable to go through the door, that really made me giggle, so "back to normal", not that that lasted long at all!

The experiences in the sex shop though, talk about a serious role reversal!  I do wonder how much encouraging is coming from the shop keeper, and how much she is simply helping and guiding what is naturally happening and taking place here.  Back to being mean... WOW, priceless moment, but at the same time, we have always known that her sister has a serious submissive side, it just takes a different form and shape is all.

The ending though, that tied things together very well, the massive contrast between the warmth of the mother / daughter and the frigid and rigid coldness of the father / daughter, it shows so much about how these people came to be the people that they are...
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: feline on March 01, 2022, 03:06:50 pm
Part 6 is every bit as good as part 5.  The walk to the shop, quite amazing, and so well done.  The revelation at the shop, making sense of how things have changed, and how much pushing and pressing happened, that explains a great deal, while also setting us up well to move forward and progress from here.

That ending though!!!  Seriously!!!  Talk about a cliff hanger!

Looks like we are going to get to find out how loving, understanding and accepting Mum is.  Certainly likely to go a lot better than being discovered by Dad, but still, this is either going to remove some looming pressure, or blow things up in a terrible way.

I know what sort of thing I want to see here, but the first and most important point is to point out that the author needs to be off to work on the next part of this, this REALLY REALLY is NOT where you get to stop this story!  Just saying, but get on with it, now, please :)
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: Mikel on April 24, 2022, 05:11:13 am
i have actually been keeping up with their adventures, thanks for writing them.

Mikel
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on May 23, 2022, 03:07:34 pm
Part 7 up today, enjoy.
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: KayDee88 on May 25, 2022, 05:40:17 pm
Wow....just wow...this part was just as good, or not better then the ones before. ;D I have slight feeling, that Tanya will make Sam and Em both her little petgirl subs, not that either would mind. Just keep it light hearted, please. Also the next part can't come soon enough, keep'em coming  :D
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: feline on June 30, 2022, 04:01:17 pm
OK, apparently I am running behind again, but I have finally read and really enjoyed part 7.

This is very well done, so full of emotion, but also really quite sad at times.  The sadness needs to be there, you need the emotional depth to really connect and care properly about the girls, but seeing the pain lurking in the background, how the stress of the situation is effecting both of them, the removal of the collar, even if it was done for understandable reasons...

Reacting to the stress of parents finding out, trying to find the way forward, reaching for comfort, desperately searching for comfort, for something, for the happy place that lets and helps you feel safe and warm...

Then the growing relationship and involvement with Tanya, the sadness of her disappointment, but that allows the girls to give something back to the woman who has indeed done so much to try and support and help both of them.  A lot of mixed and complex feelings going on here, but the fact that I am feeling them tells you so much about how well this is written and working.  Please do keep on writing this wonderful story!
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on July 03, 2022, 06:30:36 pm
Part 8 up tonight!
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: KayDee88 on July 07, 2022, 05:31:10 pm
I literally squeeled when I saw part 8 is up, as it didn't show up on the main site yet. Wow, this was quite a doozy. The girls having their own little safespace and "owner" Tanya helping them, seeing their relationship, but the twist end...OMG
You really know how to make cliffhangers, don't you. This series is like a drug, I always need more ;D
Poor Emily she must have quite a rush of emotions, I feel for her and Sammy too. Hope their relationship survives this.
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on August 22, 2022, 09:51:50 pm
Part 9 up tonight, enjoy.
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: flyer404 on August 24, 2022, 11:27:52 am
Are the puppy suits being talked about where the arms and legs are forced closed so they have to craw or can they stand?
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on August 28, 2022, 05:26:17 pm
Are the puppy suits being talked about where the arms and legs are forced closed so they have to craw or can they stand?

Part 1 explicitly references them as "petsuits":
Quote
"It's a petsuit. It's similar to a catsuit, but it forces the wearer to walk on their elbows and knees. I had an ex who was interested in trying petplay but we broke up before we got the chance to try it out."

In the story code tags I'll typically mark those up as bitchsuit (https://grometsplaza.net/search.html?con=bitchsuit) which I thought was the more common term for them, but now I look I can't find any justification for that  ;D Probably because I'm a Reflective Desire (https://reflectivedesire.com/videos/bitchsuit/) fan. There are some marked up as petsuit (https://grometsplaza.net/search.html?con=petsuit) as well, so colour me inconsistent.
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: Quietdragon on September 05, 2022, 10:23:20 pm
The moment you realise, you are emotionally involved in porn...

that's the one thing that came to my mind after I finished chapter 6 and now after 8 again. Many thanks for starting and posting this really beautiful and emotional story here. The pacing, the emotions, the exploration and developing of your characters is really great. That sounds weird, coming from someone who is no writer. Yet, I'm somewhat lost for words to tell how much I cherish this particular series. Emily and Samantha are so relatable!
Personally, I would call Sam and Em "erotic romance", not porn. You always leave much of the details up to the readers fantasy and in my opinion, that's one of the most powerful things, writers can do.

Thank you and please don't stop this series. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter. Actually... this is the kind of story, I'd be looking forward to buy, even if it has to be on kindle.

Kind regards, QD
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on September 28, 2022, 07:49:27 pm
Part 10 up today, enjoy :-)
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on March 26, 2023, 10:14:15 pm
Another part to this romantic little tale tonight, enjoy...
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: nobod4u on April 02, 2023, 02:29:26 am
10 parts and still a joy to read, following from the start and always eager to see and read the next - wonderful - keep going -  Joe  :D
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on April 29, 2023, 07:50:20 pm
Part 12 up tonight, enjoy!
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on August 12, 2023, 05:08:21 pm
And a return to Sam and Em today - part 13 for your enjoyment
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: bentbliss on August 18, 2023, 10:59:40 pm
Glad to see more of this. Hopefully Sam didn't kill her dad with that reveal at the end of 13.
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on November 09, 2023, 09:11:28 pm
A return to our petgirl family this evening in part 14, enjoy!
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: nobod4u on November 12, 2023, 03:51:25 pm
Part 14 and still not tired to read, following from the start and always eager to see and read the next - always checking directly on Your side to skipp the delay here - keep going -  as well as the correction tail - really can't wait ....  ;D Joe   ;)
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on January 14, 2024, 04:10:06 pm
Chapter 15 up today, enjoy!
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: nsfwaccbo on January 21, 2024, 06:40:47 pm
I made an account just to post this. I absolutely love this story! I can’t wait for more!!
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: bentbliss on January 23, 2024, 12:23:40 am
This one continues to draw my attention and I am curious as to how it plays out. Being invested in the characters makes it more desirable to me.
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: T.H. on January 23, 2024, 05:47:39 pm
I'm really happy that Sam is finally out of chastity.
I like chastity when the victim (secretly) likes it, but I can't stand to witness the frustration of someone who doesn't really like it.
It tires me and it stresses me out.

So... Em into chastity, if the masochistic minx likes it,... oh yeah give it to me! :-)
Title: Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
Post by: teanndaorsa on March 09, 2024, 09:54:32 pm
And part 16, back into the petsuit :-D