Author Topic: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered  (Read 3570 times)

Offline KayDee88

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Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
« Reply #15 on: February 26, 2022, 06:03:05 PM »
I loved this part. Sometimes trying out being submissive is what takes you to be a real dominant, really like the dinamic of their relationship. The getting caught part...please make their Mom both their Mistress...

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Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
« Reply #16 on: March 01, 2022, 01:12:27 PM »
Just finished part 5, and wanted to say a few words before moving onto part 6.

Firstly, the character development is REALLY working.  We needed the history and the difficult moments to draw us in, to help us see and understand who these people are, so we could understand and cherish what they are starting to learn and see about themselves and between themselves.  The sense of a major emotional hurdle, a massive emotional problem to consider is very real.

They are "sisters", but only in the legal sense, not in any form of biological sense, so in that manor there is no reason for them to resist their growing attraction.  Of course that is a coldly clinical statement, and simply ignores the massive emotional elements that "disprove" that, long before you consider the emotional mess of their parents ever getting wind of all of this.

So that was very well done, tender, moving, delicate and sexy, it worked really well, felt natural and moved things along very nicely :)

Then back to the sex shop, seeing them so unable to go through the door, that really made me giggle, so "back to normal", not that that lasted long at all!

The experiences in the sex shop though, talk about a serious role reversal!  I do wonder how much encouraging is coming from the shop keeper, and how much she is simply helping and guiding what is naturally happening and taking place here.  Back to being mean... WOW, priceless moment, but at the same time, we have always known that her sister has a serious submissive side, it just takes a different form and shape is all.

The ending though, that tied things together very well, the massive contrast between the warmth of the mother / daughter and the frigid and rigid coldness of the father / daughter, it shows so much about how these people came to be the people that they are...

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Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
« Reply #17 on: March 01, 2022, 03:06:50 PM »
Part 6 is every bit as good as part 5.  The walk to the shop, quite amazing, and so well done.  The revelation at the shop, making sense of how things have changed, and how much pushing and pressing happened, that explains a great deal, while also setting us up well to move forward and progress from here.

That ending though!!!  Seriously!!!  Talk about a cliff hanger!

Looks like we are going to get to find out how loving, understanding and accepting Mum is.  Certainly likely to go a lot better than being discovered by Dad, but still, this is either going to remove some looming pressure, or blow things up in a terrible way.

I know what sort of thing I want to see here, but the first and most important point is to point out that the author needs to be off to work on the next part of this, this REALLY REALLY is NOT where you get to stop this story!  Just saying, but get on with it, now, please :)

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Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
« Reply #18 on: April 24, 2022, 05:11:13 AM »
i have actually been keeping up with their adventures, thanks for writing them.

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Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
« Reply #19 on: May 23, 2022, 03:07:34 PM »
Part 7 up today, enjoy.

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Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
« Reply #20 on: May 25, 2022, 05:40:17 PM »
Wow....just wow...this part was just as good, or not better then the ones before. ;D I have slight feeling, that Tanya will make Sam and Em both her little petgirl subs, not that either would mind. Just keep it light hearted, please. Also the next part can't come soon enough, keep'em coming  :D
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Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
« Reply #21 on: June 30, 2022, 04:01:17 PM »
OK, apparently I am running behind again, but I have finally read and really enjoyed part 7.

This is very well done, so full of emotion, but also really quite sad at times.  The sadness needs to be there, you need the emotional depth to really connect and care properly about the girls, but seeing the pain lurking in the background, how the stress of the situation is effecting both of them, the removal of the collar, even if it was done for understandable reasons...

Reacting to the stress of parents finding out, trying to find the way forward, reaching for comfort, desperately searching for comfort, for something, for the happy place that lets and helps you feel safe and warm...

Then the growing relationship and involvement with Tanya, the sadness of her disappointment, but that allows the girls to give something back to the woman who has indeed done so much to try and support and help both of them.  A lot of mixed and complex feelings going on here, but the fact that I am feeling them tells you so much about how well this is written and working.  Please do keep on writing this wonderful story!

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Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
« Reply #22 on: July 03, 2022, 06:30:36 PM »
Part 8 up tonight!

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Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAltered
« Reply #23 on: July 07, 2022, 05:31:10 PM »
I literally squeeled when I saw part 8 is up, as it didn't show up on the main site yet. Wow, this was quite a doozy. The girls having their own little safespace and "owner" Tanya helping them, seeing their relationship, but the twist end...OMG
You really know how to make cliffhangers, don't you. This series is like a drug, I always need more ;D
Poor Emily she must have quite a rush of emotions, I feel for her and Sammy too. Hope their relationship survives this.

 

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