Sam and Em by ForeverAltered

[KayDee88]

I loved this part. Sometimes trying out being submissive is what takes you to be a real dominant, really like the dinamic of their relationship. The getting caught part...please make their Mom both their Mistress...

[feline]

Just finished part 5, and wanted to say a few words before moving onto part 6.

Firstly, the character development is REALLY working.  We needed the history and the difficult moments to draw us in, to help us see and understand who these people are, so we could understand and cherish what they are starting to learn and see about themselves and between themselves.  The sense of a major emotional hurdle, a massive emotional problem to consider is very real.

They are "sisters", but only in the legal sense, not in any form of biological sense, so in that manor there is no reason for them to resist their growing attraction.  Of course that is a coldly clinical statement, and simply ignores the massive emotional elements that "disprove" that, long before you consider the emotional mess of their parents ever getting wind of all of this.

So that was very well done, tender, moving, delicate and sexy, it worked really well, felt natural and moved things along very nicely

Then back to the sex shop, seeing them so unable to go through the door, that really made me giggle, so "back to normal", not that that lasted long at all!

The experiences in the sex shop though, talk about a serious role reversal!  I do wonder how much encouraging is coming from the shop keeper, and how much she is simply helping and guiding what is naturally happening and taking place here.  Back to being mean... WOW, priceless moment, but at the same time, we have always known that her sister has a serious submissive side, it just takes a different form and shape is all.

The ending though, that tied things together very well, the massive contrast between the warmth of the mother / daughter and the frigid and rigid coldness of the father / daughter, it shows so much about how these people came to be the people that they are...

[feline]

Part 6 is every bit as good as part 5.  The walk to the shop, quite amazing, and so well done.  The revelation at the shop, making sense of how things have changed, and how much pushing and pressing happened, that explains a great deal, while also setting us up well to move forward and progress from here.

That ending though!!!  Seriously!!!  Talk about a cliff hanger!

Looks like we are going to get to find out how loving, understanding and accepting Mum is.  Certainly likely to go a lot better than being discovered by Dad, but still, this is either going to remove some looming pressure, or blow things up in a terrible way.

I know what sort of thing I want to see here, but the first and most important point is to point out that the author needs to be off to work on the next part of this, this REALLY REALLY is NOT where you get to stop this story!  Just saying, but get on with it, now, please

[Mikel]

i have actually been keeping up with their adventures, thanks for writing them.

Mikel

[teanndaorsa]

Part 7 up today, enjoy.

[KayDee88]

Wow....just wow...this part was just as good, or not better then the ones before. I have slight feeling, that Tanya will make Sam and Em both her little petgirl subs, not that either would mind. Just keep it light hearted, please. Also the next part can't come soon enough, keep'em coming 

[feline]

OK, apparently I am running behind again, but I have finally read and really enjoyed part 7.

This is very well done, so full of emotion, but also really quite sad at times.  The sadness needs to be there, you need the emotional depth to really connect and care properly about the girls, but seeing the pain lurking in the background, how the stress of the situation is effecting both of them, the removal of the collar, even if it was done for understandable reasons...

Reacting to the stress of parents finding out, trying to find the way forward, reaching for comfort, desperately searching for comfort, for something, for the happy place that lets and helps you feel safe and warm...

Then the growing relationship and involvement with Tanya, the sadness of her disappointment, but that allows the girls to give something back to the woman who has indeed done so much to try and support and help both of them.  A lot of mixed and complex feelings going on here, but the fact that I am feeling them tells you so much about how well this is written and working.  Please do keep on writing this wonderful story!

[teanndaorsa]

Part 8 up tonight!

[KayDee88]

I literally squeeled when I saw part 8 is up, as it didn't show up on the main site yet. Wow, this was quite a doozy. The girls having their own little safespace and "owner" Tanya helping them, seeing their relationship, but the twist end...OMG
You really know how to make cliffhangers, don't you. This series is like a drug, I always need more
Poor Emily she must have quite a rush of emotions, I feel for her and Sammy too. Hope their relationship survives this.

[teanndaorsa]

Part 9 up tonight, enjoy.

[flyer404]

Are the puppy suits being talked about where the arms and legs are forced closed so they have to craw or can they stand?

[teanndaorsa]

Are the puppy suits being talked about where the arms and legs are forced closed so they have to craw or can they stand?

Part 1 explicitly references them as "petsuits":

"It's a petsuit. It's similar to a catsuit, but it forces the wearer to walk on their elbows and knees. I had an ex who was interested in trying petplay but we broke up before we got the chance to try it out."

In the story code tags I'll typically mark those up as bitchsuit which I thought was the more common term for them, but now I look I can't find any justification for that  Probably because I'm a Reflective Desire fan. There are some marked up as petsuit as well, so colour me inconsistent.

[Quietdragon]

The moment you realise, you are emotionally involved in porn...

that's the one thing that came to my mind after I finished chapter 6 and now after 8 again. Many thanks for starting and posting this really beautiful and emotional story here. The pacing, the emotions, the exploration and developing of your characters is really great. That sounds weird, coming from someone who is no writer. Yet, I'm somewhat lost for words to tell how much I cherish this particular series. Emily and Samantha are so relatable!
Personally, I would call Sam and Em "erotic romance", not porn. You always leave much of the details up to the readers fantasy and in my opinion, that's one of the most powerful things, writers can do.

Thank you and please don't stop this series. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter. Actually... this is the kind of story, I'd be looking forward to buy, even if it has to be on kindle.

Kind regards, QD

[teanndaorsa]

Part 10 up today, enjoy :-)

[teanndaorsa]

Another part to this romantic little tale tonight, enjoy...