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#81

Looking for a Story / Ninja Queen story

Last post by teanndaorsa - April 21, 2025, 04:52:19 PM

So my search skills and archive hunts are failing me, which makes me think that I am perhaps wrong on some of the remembered details for this one.

Basic plot was the female protagonist hired as a model for a studio that made games or some such thing, but the designers needed a live model to pose in the scene for reference. She would be dressed up as the main character, who I want to say was called "Erica the Ninja Queen", in various revealing latex costumes, then in progressively tighter bondage. After the shoot wrapped up she'd be left in bondage on her own and then some other costumed character would come in and molest her, before eventually getting released. She would go home at night and dream about the situations, and it turned out the studio owner was manipulating all of this and conditioning her into latex / kink. In later chapters she would take revenge on the female model / character who'd taken advantage of her, as well as acting domme to the male character ("The Hammer" maybe?)

Sound familiar to anyone? It's definitely not on the Plaza or GaggedUtopia, even in the Wayback Machine, so it was either never on those sites, or was up for a short period while and then pulled.

#82

Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Mage's Dilemma by Frosted Moon...

Last post by teanndaorsa - April 21, 2025, 04:37:03 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storieslr/mages_dilemma.html
Sbf; majick; fantasy; straps; harness; mittens; rope; reluct; X

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#83

TrashcanStories Feedback / Scrapped Desires by Targon

Last post by teanndaorsa - April 21, 2025, 04:36:40 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.trashcanstories.net/storiessz/scrapped_desires.html
MF; death; compacted; scrapyard; edgeplay; caution; cons; XXX

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#84

Transformation Stories / The Zoo by Albarez9

Last post by teanndaorsa - April 21, 2025, 04:36:17 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/world/transformation/storiessz/the_zoo.html
M/f; M+/f+; F/f; transform; bodymod; mermaid; slave; rape; trick; collar; electro; milk; straps; sex; mast; hum; group; gag; armbinder; incest; nc; extreme; XXX

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#85

BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Not Just Your Regular Shop...

Last post by HijoDS - April 21, 2025, 02:55:27 PM

Excellent writing. 

#86

BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Dungeons and Dragons by th...

Last post by thepinkbishop - April 21, 2025, 08:35:58 AM

Thanks for your comment. This is a fantasy novel. If it wasn't as long as Lord of the Rings nobody would take it seriously. It felt better for the site to serialise it in 10,000 word chunks (and fairer to the site editor) than to dump 260,000 words in one go.
I also quite like the idea of a cliffhanger. 
I'm glad you and others are enjoying the adventure and the setting. I've been wanting to write something like this for a while but it took some time to get it right.

#87

BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Dungeons and Dragons by th...

Last post by nightgerbil - April 21, 2025, 02:25:25 AM

oh good. glad to see more. One thing I'd say is it feels disjointed as a reader and a little unrewarding? I think inside a larger text this will work, jumping character to character like this but as it stands it doesn't bring any kind of closure for a reader. Like a middle chapter if you will. You cut off the two stories you were writing as they entered the find out phase. I think it might have been more rewarding for a reader to develop at least one story to a conclusion inside this chapter.

 Perhaps in a few months time if theres part 4,5,6,7 and 8 out there my critique will no longer be relevant, but for now its just left me feeling unsatisfied, like theres no "mini conclusion"?

 Fun twists with the worldbuilding, be interesting to see where you take the story next.

#88

Dollstories.net stories feedback / Re: Premium Playthings by Bubu...

Last post by ace54858 - April 20, 2025, 09:21:57 PM

Part 5 of this up tonight, 6 and 7 are in the queue.

glad to see part 5 been waiting/hoping for more    and good to see there are 2 more coming as well. 

so can't wait to read part 6 after reading part 5 left ya wonding what the they talked about and agrred on to be done with lauren kinda reminds me i think of part 2 or 3 when it left out what was to be done with Amber and then there is the fact that it was mentioned about the daughter come's home every other weeked from collage what her reaction is going to be about her mom possibly missing.

#89

Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / The Rainstorm by Frosted Moonw...

Last post by teanndaorsa - April 19, 2025, 10:44:10 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storieslr/the_rainstorm.html
Sbf; rope; naked; outdoors; crotchrope; stuck; supernatural; climax; cons; X

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#90

Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Caught in a Compromising Spot ...

Last post by teanndaorsa - April 19, 2025, 10:43:28 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesad/caught_in_a_compromising_spot.html
Sbm; F+/m; bond; gag; caught; diaper; cuffs; mittens; inf; chairtie; climax; reluct; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks