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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by twistedsmile - July 20, 2026, 11:50:25 PM09. "Succubus" Commentary
A succubus is a demon that steals a man's sperm while he's asleep. Self-explanatory title, really.
The original title was 'Sci-fi', but I didn't want to say that up front. I wanted to put reader on the back foot about what the hell was going on.
So the question was, how do you tell a sci-fi story in a 'grounded' series? Making it a dream sequence is an obvious workaround. The tricky thing with dream stories, though, is if you don't do it right, it can feel like a middle finger to the readers; like, why did you just waste my time with a story that doesn't count?
There are two things going on here. Firstly, events in the dream reflect things that are happening (to Mark) in the real world - such as getting his dick sucked.
Second, dreams are usually made up of variations and remixes of memories. So this story could be viewed as a kind of clip show. For that reason, it was originally going to be chapter 10. But the story that became chapter 10 (Sub) has much more impact, and following that with a dream story felt like an anti-climax to the season.
Along similar lines, dreams tend to be populated by people we know in the real world. In my head, 'Flecher' is Charlotte Fletcher (aka Lottie), Garret is a male friend of Mark that I haven't found a place for yet (Gary). And 'Arbee' is a pun: R-B (Rob, the neighbour).
I wanted to take the actual sci-fi story 'seriously'. I didn't want it to be a sci-fi coat of paint on a regular story, or just a couple of sci-fi sex scenes with perfunctory connecting material. There's actual plot, and characters with clear motivations. But, at the same time, this is pornography, so I didn't want the plot to over-power what people are actually here for (the kinky stuff).
To that end, the plot passages are very 'efficient', and we jump from scene to scene, skipping over boring connecting bits. I think I can get away with it here because dreams do kind of behave like that; and it's by no means incoherent for doing it.
I started with the face-hugger scene, and figured I might as well lean into the Alien riff for the plot. I've seen all the Alien movies, but I've seen each of them only once, so this is all based on vague memories. It mostly pulls from Alien, Prometheus, and Alien: Covenant (I think).
"MSTRUS" - the 'mistress' equivalent of Alien's MUTHUR. I don't necessarily think of MSTRUS as a representation of Sophie, since Sophie is the xenomorph. And plus, Mark has never referred to Sophie as 'mistress'. It's more a pure plot device.
"4-Sigma-s" - I looked up actual naming conventions for exoplanets. 4-Sigma would be the 4th star in the Sigma constellation (which doesn't exist), and 's' would make this the 13th planet orbiting it; following the Flamsteed Designation. But more to the point, the acronym is 4Ss (I hear that place stinks!)
"a hefty fine for the salvage company" - as usual, the real villain in an Alien story is capitalism
"Fletcher took a long, slow drag on her cigarette" - reference to characters smoking on a spaceship in the original Alien, which seems kind of weird these days. But also I thought it would be a funny affect to give one of the characters
"The Sigman sky was dense with clouds of ice crystals" - I had a technical problem: the ship needed to be damaged during the landing, but also needed to be able to leave again unharmed. I imagined an atmosphere of ice clouds, similar to that one planet in Chris Nolan's Interstellar. The ice can damage the ship on the way in, but be melted to give them a clean exit.
"Sigma was in syzygy with its binary stars" - i.e. one of the stars was hiding behind the other. This is slightly contrived, but the idea is, when it emerges, its additional heat melts the ice in the atmosphere.
"the perigean star" - the one closest to the planet
"There's a demon here" - a semen demon!
"What do you make of that, Captain?" - Mark is portrayed as the captain of the ship, mostly because it's his dream and he's the one driving the action. I was unsure if that made sense psychologically - that a submissive would dream of himself in a command role. Maybe we can call that foreshadowing again
"'I can detect no signs of life [..] besides your own,' returned Arbee." - 'your' own is meant to imply Arbee has no life sign (because he's a robot). There are various other hints before the reveal, like his slightly stilted pattern of speech (no contractions, etc)
"It is safe to breathe" - can't get face-hugged with a helmet on
"Garret never came back" - A ship needs a crew of more than one, and an alien needs red shirts to kill, so I had to introduce a handful of characters. Then I systematically killed them off so I didn't have to keep track of them all.
"tequila" - callback to chapter 3
"like he'd been sucked dry [..] almost looked like he was happy" -
"yonic orifice" - like a vagina
"a strange, crab-like creature" - I was watching the Alien: Earth series, and when the guy got face-hugged I was thinking you could model a bondage gag/mask after a face-hugger. Like an elaborate penis gag, with legs that buckle behind the head, and a tail that wraps and buckles around the throat. Thinking about that got me weirdly aroused, so now you have to deal with that too.
"I tried to push it back with my tongue" - I actually added the penis gag to chapter 8 retroactively, so that the face-hugger could be a 'callback'.
"raging priapism" - erection. The story was originally just face-hugger and xenomorph, but it felt like it needed something in the middle. When you get an erection in your sleep, sometimes that manifests within the dream.
"She belonged amongst the stars." - I decided Fletcher's motivation was she just loves being a mechanic, even tho should doesn't need to do it for money. I wanted a more poetical way of saying that and came up with this line. Then I thought: well, I guess now I have to throw her out of an air lock.
"The scans show no anomalies." - if you've seen an Alien movie you know what's going on here; the robot is always conspiring with the evil company to bring a xenomorph sample back to earth.
"Cave spores, maybe?" - but wait, didn't Arbee already say no toxins or hallucinogens in the air!
So there's two questions at this point - why is Mark dreaming about being jerked off by a male-coded robot, and why one specifically modelled after his neighbour? On the first point, you could argue that Mark doesn't view Arbee as 'male', but rather as a machine, performing a purely medical function; its gender presentation is irrelevant. On the second point... erm...
"His grip was a little firm" - callback to chapter 4
"he spat a gelatinous fluid" - that was a bit cheeky
"WHY WASN'T THIS WORKING?!" - in my experience, you can't cum in a dream unless you also cum in real life, and that usually requires physical stimulation (in the real world)
"applied pressure just so. Like magic, I actually felt myself soften" - chapter 1, of course
"devices such as these were known as 'chastity cages'" - just to make it unambiguous what the 'containment device' is. Chapter 1/2 callback
"Come on, baby [..] Just a little more..." - callback to chapter 6
"demon... save... demon... save" - Arbee is echoing the original distress signal, but what he's actually saying is "save [the] demon" (so it can be brought back to Earth)
"Its skin was pitch black, and had a sheen like latex" - I really put myself in a corner with the money-conscious thing. Otherwise I might have done an actual latex story.
"shutting herself into the airlock" - the thing about blowing Fletch out of an airlock is you have to get her in there in the first place. After some thought I decided it was easiest to have her put herself in, to escape the xenomorph
"Let me try the override, 1-9-7-9" - that's probably a bit too cute (year the first Alien film was released)
"Come on, MSTRUS [..] We've got a fuckin' monster to slay." - and with that, she sealed her fate.
"My hands were held together above my head, my ankles pulled apart" - callback to chapter 1
"The alien woman" - as Mark gets closer to waking, the image of the alien blurs more and more into Sophie
"She bit down, violently, on the containment device" - chapter 8
"The small mouth plunged, consuming my penis" - presumably this is when Sophie starts her assault in the real world
"I felt the sensation of [her tail's] ridged surface" - alike the buttplug in chapter 6 part 2
"My chest was pounding [..] SOMETHING was pounding on my chest" - in the real world this is the feeling of his heartbeat, manifested in the dream as the chest-burster trying to break free
"I couldn't move my arms [..] stretched out above my head [..] something holding them in place." - sleeping in bondage, perhaps that's why he had such a kinky dream?
"She wiped her mouth" - implies that she swallowed, if you care about that sort of thing.
"With apologies to Ridley Scott and H R Giger" - I'm not sure they'd approve of what I did with their creations :p This was also to underscore the fact that this was an intentional Alien riff, and that I wasn't trying to hide that fact.
---
BTW, thanks for the encouragement, Caras pet. I always appreciate it
A succubus is a demon that steals a man's sperm while he's asleep. Self-explanatory title, really.
The original title was 'Sci-fi', but I didn't want to say that up front. I wanted to put reader on the back foot about what the hell was going on.
So the question was, how do you tell a sci-fi story in a 'grounded' series? Making it a dream sequence is an obvious workaround. The tricky thing with dream stories, though, is if you don't do it right, it can feel like a middle finger to the readers; like, why did you just waste my time with a story that doesn't count?
There are two things going on here. Firstly, events in the dream reflect things that are happening (to Mark) in the real world - such as getting his dick sucked.
Second, dreams are usually made up of variations and remixes of memories. So this story could be viewed as a kind of clip show. For that reason, it was originally going to be chapter 10. But the story that became chapter 10 (Sub) has much more impact, and following that with a dream story felt like an anti-climax to the season.
Along similar lines, dreams tend to be populated by people we know in the real world. In my head, 'Flecher' is Charlotte Fletcher (aka Lottie), Garret is a male friend of Mark that I haven't found a place for yet (Gary). And 'Arbee' is a pun: R-B (Rob, the neighbour).
I wanted to take the actual sci-fi story 'seriously'. I didn't want it to be a sci-fi coat of paint on a regular story, or just a couple of sci-fi sex scenes with perfunctory connecting material. There's actual plot, and characters with clear motivations. But, at the same time, this is pornography, so I didn't want the plot to over-power what people are actually here for (the kinky stuff).
To that end, the plot passages are very 'efficient', and we jump from scene to scene, skipping over boring connecting bits. I think I can get away with it here because dreams do kind of behave like that; and it's by no means incoherent for doing it.
I started with the face-hugger scene, and figured I might as well lean into the Alien riff for the plot. I've seen all the Alien movies, but I've seen each of them only once, so this is all based on vague memories. It mostly pulls from Alien, Prometheus, and Alien: Covenant (I think).
"MSTRUS" - the 'mistress' equivalent of Alien's MUTHUR. I don't necessarily think of MSTRUS as a representation of Sophie, since Sophie is the xenomorph. And plus, Mark has never referred to Sophie as 'mistress'. It's more a pure plot device.
"4-Sigma-s" - I looked up actual naming conventions for exoplanets. 4-Sigma would be the 4th star in the Sigma constellation (which doesn't exist), and 's' would make this the 13th planet orbiting it; following the Flamsteed Designation. But more to the point, the acronym is 4Ss (I hear that place stinks!)
"a hefty fine for the salvage company" - as usual, the real villain in an Alien story is capitalism
"Fletcher took a long, slow drag on her cigarette" - reference to characters smoking on a spaceship in the original Alien, which seems kind of weird these days. But also I thought it would be a funny affect to give one of the characters
"The Sigman sky was dense with clouds of ice crystals" - I had a technical problem: the ship needed to be damaged during the landing, but also needed to be able to leave again unharmed. I imagined an atmosphere of ice clouds, similar to that one planet in Chris Nolan's Interstellar. The ice can damage the ship on the way in, but be melted to give them a clean exit.
"Sigma was in syzygy with its binary stars" - i.e. one of the stars was hiding behind the other. This is slightly contrived, but the idea is, when it emerges, its additional heat melts the ice in the atmosphere.
"the perigean star" - the one closest to the planet
"There's a demon here" - a semen demon!
"What do you make of that, Captain?" - Mark is portrayed as the captain of the ship, mostly because it's his dream and he's the one driving the action. I was unsure if that made sense psychologically - that a submissive would dream of himself in a command role. Maybe we can call that foreshadowing again
"'I can detect no signs of life [..] besides your own,' returned Arbee." - 'your' own is meant to imply Arbee has no life sign (because he's a robot). There are various other hints before the reveal, like his slightly stilted pattern of speech (no contractions, etc)
"It is safe to breathe" - can't get face-hugged with a helmet on
"Garret never came back" - A ship needs a crew of more than one, and an alien needs red shirts to kill, so I had to introduce a handful of characters. Then I systematically killed them off so I didn't have to keep track of them all.
"tequila" - callback to chapter 3
"like he'd been sucked dry [..] almost looked like he was happy" -
"yonic orifice" - like a vagina
"a strange, crab-like creature" - I was watching the Alien: Earth series, and when the guy got face-hugged I was thinking you could model a bondage gag/mask after a face-hugger. Like an elaborate penis gag, with legs that buckle behind the head, and a tail that wraps and buckles around the throat. Thinking about that got me weirdly aroused, so now you have to deal with that too.
"I tried to push it back with my tongue" - I actually added the penis gag to chapter 8 retroactively, so that the face-hugger could be a 'callback'.
"raging priapism" - erection. The story was originally just face-hugger and xenomorph, but it felt like it needed something in the middle. When you get an erection in your sleep, sometimes that manifests within the dream.
"She belonged amongst the stars." - I decided Fletcher's motivation was she just loves being a mechanic, even tho should doesn't need to do it for money. I wanted a more poetical way of saying that and came up with this line. Then I thought: well, I guess now I have to throw her out of an air lock.
"The scans show no anomalies." - if you've seen an Alien movie you know what's going on here; the robot is always conspiring with the evil company to bring a xenomorph sample back to earth.
"Cave spores, maybe?" - but wait, didn't Arbee already say no toxins or hallucinogens in the air!
So there's two questions at this point - why is Mark dreaming about being jerked off by a male-coded robot, and why one specifically modelled after his neighbour? On the first point, you could argue that Mark doesn't view Arbee as 'male', but rather as a machine, performing a purely medical function; its gender presentation is irrelevant. On the second point... erm...
"His grip was a little firm" - callback to chapter 4
"he spat a gelatinous fluid" - that was a bit cheeky
"WHY WASN'T THIS WORKING?!" - in my experience, you can't cum in a dream unless you also cum in real life, and that usually requires physical stimulation (in the real world)
"applied pressure just so. Like magic, I actually felt myself soften" - chapter 1, of course
"devices such as these were known as 'chastity cages'" - just to make it unambiguous what the 'containment device' is. Chapter 1/2 callback
"Come on, baby [..] Just a little more..." - callback to chapter 6
"demon... save... demon... save" - Arbee is echoing the original distress signal, but what he's actually saying is "save [the] demon" (so it can be brought back to Earth)
"Its skin was pitch black, and had a sheen like latex" - I really put myself in a corner with the money-conscious thing. Otherwise I might have done an actual latex story.
"shutting herself into the airlock" - the thing about blowing Fletch out of an airlock is you have to get her in there in the first place. After some thought I decided it was easiest to have her put herself in, to escape the xenomorph
"Let me try the override, 1-9-7-9" - that's probably a bit too cute (year the first Alien film was released)
"Come on, MSTRUS [..] We've got a fuckin' monster to slay." - and with that, she sealed her fate.
"My hands were held together above my head, my ankles pulled apart" - callback to chapter 1
"The alien woman" - as Mark gets closer to waking, the image of the alien blurs more and more into Sophie
"She bit down, violently, on the containment device" - chapter 8
"The small mouth plunged, consuming my penis" - presumably this is when Sophie starts her assault in the real world
"I felt the sensation of [her tail's] ridged surface" - alike the buttplug in chapter 6 part 2
"My chest was pounding [..] SOMETHING was pounding on my chest" - in the real world this is the feeling of his heartbeat, manifested in the dream as the chest-burster trying to break free
"I couldn't move my arms [..] stretched out above my head [..] something holding them in place." - sleeping in bondage, perhaps that's why he had such a kinky dream?
"She wiped her mouth" - implies that she swallowed, if you care about that sort of thing.
"With apologies to Ridley Scott and H R Giger" - I'm not sure they'd approve of what I did with their creations :p This was also to underscore the fact that this was an intentional Alien riff, and that I wasn't trying to hide that fact.
---
BTW, thanks for the encouragement, Caras pet. I always appreciate it
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General Discussion / Re: Thought I'd Have a Heart A...
Last post by le Bouc - July 20, 2026, 10:28:01 PMWe don't have the space or privacy for a "red-room" in our house (for now). Though we do have a "red-couple-of-drawers-and-under-the-bed". I'm always a little panicky when we have friends/family housesitting when we're out of town for extended periods, as a curious soul would be surprised and abashed, of that I'm sure.
There's also the danger when I give my phone to my wife to use, if I've forgotten to close the 'private browsing' windows.
Je suis sidéré!
Le Bouc
There's also the danger when I give my phone to my wife to use, if I've forgotten to close the 'private browsing' windows.
Je suis sidéré!
Le Bouc
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: From Vanilla Girlfriend to...
Last post by le Bouc - July 20, 2026, 10:16:00 PMQuote from: lockedup4eva on January 07, 2026, 01:07:41 PMChapter 12 is under way folks....
So here we are, over 6 months from your last 'tease' of the conclusion. If your Mistress/Domme would be so kind to deny your personal fetish/kink for this amount and any additional time we are kept in suspense... perhaps it would hurry you along.
Bonne écriture,
Le Bouc
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Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Cargo of Desire by Gromet
Last post by a thing for rubber (Marcus) - July 20, 2026, 07:03:09 PMExcellent story! Thank you for sharing ❤
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Moroccan Vacation by TagsA...
Last post by restrained - July 20, 2026, 11:10:11 AMQuote from: teanndaorsa on April 05, 2026, 10:00:17 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:Thanks for sharing another story! The tags give a good idea of what to expect, which is always helpful before starting to read. I'll check it out when I have some free time and come back to leave more detailed feedback after I've finished it.
https://www.boundstories.net/storieslr/moroccan_vacation.html run 3
MF+/f; slave; mast; collar; gag; leash; cage; training; whip; oral; sex; cons; XX
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Two Friends and Their Bond...
Last post by restrained - July 20, 2026, 04:41:27 AMQuote from: teanndaorsa on February 07, 2026, 06:49:11 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:Thanks for sharing the story! I always appreciate these recommendation threads because they're an easy way to discover new content I might have missed. The tags are also helpful for knowing what to expect before reading. I'll give it a read when I have some free time and come back with more detailed feedback afterward.
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/two_friends_and_their_bondage_game.html driving directions
Sbf; F/f; rope; collar; cuffs; breathplay; bond; blindfold; enclosed; gag; electro; cons; XX
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks
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Last post by Caras pet - July 19, 2026, 07:14:21 PMPart 8 is up, with more lectures
I wonder if we end up having to take an exam
I wonder if we end up having to take an exam
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Last post by Caras pet - July 19, 2026, 07:10:08 PMThanks for the links
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by Caras pet - July 19, 2026, 03:33:03 PMPart twelve is up, no Sophie this time...
When the cat's away the mice will play
When the cat's away the mice will play
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