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#1
General Discussion / Re: Switch stories
Last post by Caras pet - Today at 07:23:09 AMFor me, it's more a question of the overall focus and how a change fits into the story.
In "Sophie and Mark," the change from F/m to M/f was something natural and expected; the two are experimenting, so maybe they'll swap roles for a test, a change of perspective or whatever.
The introduction of a third person as Mark's passive "savior" was also expected, but expanding his role to nc M/m didn't fit the story for me.
To answer your direct questions: I still read the whole part, and the part that followed, but with less motivation. I wouldn't skip a chapter because of "wrong storycodes".
In "Sophie and Mark," the change from F/m to M/f was something natural and expected; the two are experimenting, so maybe they'll swap roles for a test, a change of perspective or whatever.
The introduction of a third person as Mark's passive "savior" was also expected, but expanding his role to nc M/m didn't fit the story for me.
To answer your direct questions: I still read the whole part, and the part that followed, but with less motivation. I wouldn't skip a chapter because of "wrong storycodes".
#2
Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Just Another Box by Grimm ...
Last post by Harlock - Today at 05:49:33 AMУуу, как же хочется увидеть продолжение! Одна из первых прочитанных работ на этом сайте, но до сих пор одна из любимейших!
#3
Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Found in a Suitcase by Gro...
Last post by Harlock - Today at 04:54:40 AMМне гораздо больше понравилась первая версия, с мрачным финалом. Хочется еще такое увидеть. Но может теперь из разряда petplay?
#4
Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Aunt Sally's Farm by Grome...
Last post by Harlock - Today at 04:51:45 AMУх, очень нравятся подобные рассказы! Особенно хорошо вышла последняя часть со всей этой драмой! Побольше бы таких, где разврат абсолютно доброволен, но приводит к драме.
Если учитываются пожелания читателей, то очень хотелось бы увидеть историю игры в мясную девушку между парнем и девушкой, которые только начали экспериментировать в постели и это их первая серьезная игра. Конечно, добавится драма, что девушку перепутают с другими мясными девушками и ее парню придется ее искать. Ну а в это время героиню найдет другая девушка и решит забрать себе как рабыню.
Хотелось бы увидеть несколько финалов в таком случае: парень находит свою девушку; девушка остается как рабыня у новой госпожи; либо девушку вообще не находят и она проходит полный путь мясной девушки, а под конец ее парень ест мясо и каким-то образом понимает, что это его девушка. Понимаю, что последний финал уж очень мрачный, но в ваших рассказах действительно не хватает конечной детали. Постоянно упоминается, что девушки используются как пища, но ни одного готового «продукта».
Если учитываются пожелания читателей, то очень хотелось бы увидеть историю игры в мясную девушку между парнем и девушкой, которые только начали экспериментировать в постели и это их первая серьезная игра. Конечно, добавится драма, что девушку перепутают с другими мясными девушками и ее парню придется ее искать. Ну а в это время героиню найдет другая девушка и решит забрать себе как рабыню.
Хотелось бы увидеть несколько финалов в таком случае: парень находит свою девушку; девушка остается как рабыня у новой госпожи; либо девушку вообще не находят и она проходит полный путь мясной девушки, а под конец ее парень ест мясо и каким-то образом понимает, что это его девушка. Понимаю, что последний финал уж очень мрачный, но в ваших рассказах действительно не хватает конечной детали. Постоянно упоминается, что девушки используются как пища, но ни одного готового «продукта».
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by twistedsmile - Today at 12:31:59 AMThank you for the kind words, anonhandle, I'm genuinely moved 
I'm glad you're enjoying the series and have gotten so much out of it.
I'm only sorry that there will be a bit of a wait before chapter 16 (don't you just hate when work gets in the way of your hobby
)
But in the meantime there will be more commentaries (and a couple of non- Sophie & Mark stories) to hold you over...
I'm glad you're enjoying the series and have gotten so much out of it.
I'm only sorry that there will be a bit of a wait before chapter 16 (don't you just hate when work gets in the way of your hobby
)But in the meantime there will be more commentaries (and a couple of non- Sophie & Mark stories) to hold you over...
#6
General Discussion / Switch stories
Last post by twistedsmile - August 11, 2026, 11:33:26 PMIn my Sophie & Mark series, most of the chapters are F/m, but one switches to M/f. I'm currently working on another story that does a similar role flip.
I'm a bi switch, so that sort of thing is neither here nor there to me. But I'm curious how other readers approach such stories?
Like, suppose there's a story where chapter 1 is F/m and chapter 2 is M/f:
- For people who are only into F/m, would you read chapter 1 and not continue with chapter 2?
- For people only into M/f, would you read chapter 1 before 2, or skip straight to chapter 2, or just not bother with the story at all?
Along similar lines, one chapter of Sophie & Mark switches to M/m, and I'm interested in how (hetero) readers feel about stuff like that?
I'm a bi switch, so that sort of thing is neither here nor there to me. But I'm curious how other readers approach such stories?
Like, suppose there's a story where chapter 1 is F/m and chapter 2 is M/f:
- For people who are only into F/m, would you read chapter 1 and not continue with chapter 2?
- For people only into M/f, would you read chapter 1 before 2, or skip straight to chapter 2, or just not bother with the story at all?
Along similar lines, one chapter of Sophie & Mark switches to M/m, and I'm interested in how (hetero) readers feel about stuff like that?
#7
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: The Contortionist's Homeco...
Last post by Caras pet - August 11, 2026, 01:18:29 PMA good start, but screaming for a part 2 
Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for sharing!
#8
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by anonhandle - August 11, 2026, 08:18:38 AMI feel compelled to provide my $0.02 worth of feedback.
Right from chapter 1 I was invested in this couple. Essentially a loving couple (with issues) begin their journey into kink with motivation driven by Sophie and charming cluelessness from Mark. Every adventure enlightens Mark to his own submissive desires, but also has him trying to switch (albeit spectacularly crappy at it - at this stage
). Meanwhile Sophie is trying to push him into his role " I am the domme, you're the sub"- yeh right like we haven't seen a glimpse. The love, the manipulation, the to and fro - all delightful.
My fantasy couple was smashed in 13 - a third party, cuckolding and humiliation - all without discussion or explicit consent. I was devastated. Thank you for resurrecting my faith in 14 and 15.
You have an engaging writing style. Brief stories potted between each other, perhaps out of temporal sequence, but within each story a commanding flow. I think you said in one of your synopses you considered writing it in a "he's said - she said" style. I for one am glad you didn't. I like jumping between Mark and Sophie, losing track of who is saying what and having to actually concentrate on what I am reading.
Your synopses in the feedback discussions are excellent. You highlight for us your thinking and motivation and why you wrote certain things. This has forced me to reread your chapters many times in light of that new information - oh yeh that's why he wrote that .... subtle .... Keep the synopses up please.
I am looking forward to the rest of this dance between Sophie the protagonist and the ever less clueless Mark. However by the time we get to Chapter 20 for the love of God somebody teach Mark how to tie a knot!
Right from chapter 1 I was invested in this couple. Essentially a loving couple (with issues) begin their journey into kink with motivation driven by Sophie and charming cluelessness from Mark. Every adventure enlightens Mark to his own submissive desires, but also has him trying to switch (albeit spectacularly crappy at it - at this stage
). Meanwhile Sophie is trying to push him into his role " I am the domme, you're the sub"- yeh right like we haven't seen a glimpse. The love, the manipulation, the to and fro - all delightful.My fantasy couple was smashed in 13 - a third party, cuckolding and humiliation - all without discussion or explicit consent. I was devastated. Thank you for resurrecting my faith in 14 and 15.
You have an engaging writing style. Brief stories potted between each other, perhaps out of temporal sequence, but within each story a commanding flow. I think you said in one of your synopses you considered writing it in a "he's said - she said" style. I for one am glad you didn't. I like jumping between Mark and Sophie, losing track of who is saying what and having to actually concentrate on what I am reading.
Your synopses in the feedback discussions are excellent. You highlight for us your thinking and motivation and why you wrote certain things. This has forced me to reread your chapters many times in light of that new information - oh yeh that's why he wrote that .... subtle .... Keep the synopses up please.
I am looking forward to the rest of this dance between Sophie the protagonist and the ever less clueless Mark. However by the time we get to Chapter 20 for the love of God somebody teach Mark how to tie a knot!
#9
Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Re: Art and Pets by Rotaugur
Last post by Caras pet - August 11, 2026, 07:41:12 AMUp to part 11, featuring Kat as a model.
#10
Maidbots.net stories feedback / Re: Boomerang Maidbot by Objec...
Last post by teanndaorsa - August 10, 2026, 06:42:39 PMPart 5 is delivered, I think you will not be surprised that you called it correctly. Enjoy!
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