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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by anonhandle - Today at 08:18:38 AMI feel compelled to provide my $0.02 worth of feedback.
Right from chapter 1 I was invested in this couple. Essentially a loving couple (with issues) begin their journey into kink with motivation driven by Sophie and charming cluelessness from Mark. Every adventure enlightens Mark to his own submissive desires, but also has him trying to switch (albeit spectacularly crappy at it - at this stage
). Meanwhile Sophie is trying to push him into his role " I am the domme, you're the sub"- yeh right like we haven't seen a glimpse. The love, the manipulation, the to and fro - all delightful.
My fantasy couple was smashed in 13 - a third party, cuckolding and humiliation - all without discussion or explicit consent. I was devastated. Thank you for resurrecting my faith in 14 and 15.
You have an engaging writing style. Brief stories potted between each other, perhaps out of temporal sequence, but within each story a commanding flow. I think you said in one of your synopses you considered writing it in a "he's said - she said" style. I for one am glad you didn't. I like jumping between Mark and Sophie, losing track of who is saying what and having to actually concentrate on what I am reading.
Your synopses in the feedback discussions are excellent. You highlight for us your thinking and motivation and why you wrote certain things. This has forced me to reread your chapters many times in light of that new information - oh yeh that's why he wrote that .... subtle .... Keep the synopses up please.
I am looking forward to the rest of this dance between Sophie the protagonist and the ever less clueless Mark. However by the time we get to Chapter 20 for the love of God somebody teach Mark how to tie a knot!
Right from chapter 1 I was invested in this couple. Essentially a loving couple (with issues) begin their journey into kink with motivation driven by Sophie and charming cluelessness from Mark. Every adventure enlightens Mark to his own submissive desires, but also has him trying to switch (albeit spectacularly crappy at it - at this stage
). Meanwhile Sophie is trying to push him into his role " I am the domme, you're the sub"- yeh right like we haven't seen a glimpse. The love, the manipulation, the to and fro - all delightful.My fantasy couple was smashed in 13 - a third party, cuckolding and humiliation - all without discussion or explicit consent. I was devastated. Thank you for resurrecting my faith in 14 and 15.
You have an engaging writing style. Brief stories potted between each other, perhaps out of temporal sequence, but within each story a commanding flow. I think you said in one of your synopses you considered writing it in a "he's said - she said" style. I for one am glad you didn't. I like jumping between Mark and Sophie, losing track of who is saying what and having to actually concentrate on what I am reading.
Your synopses in the feedback discussions are excellent. You highlight for us your thinking and motivation and why you wrote certain things. This has forced me to reread your chapters many times in light of that new information - oh yeh that's why he wrote that .... subtle .... Keep the synopses up please.
I am looking forward to the rest of this dance between Sophie the protagonist and the ever less clueless Mark. However by the time we get to Chapter 20 for the love of God somebody teach Mark how to tie a knot!
#2
Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Re: Art and Pets by Rotaugur
Last post by Caras pet - Today at 07:41:12 AMUp to part 11, featuring Kat as a model.
#3
Maidbots.net stories feedback / Re: Boomerang Maidbot by Objec...
Last post by teanndaorsa - August 10, 2026, 06:42:39 PMPart 5 is delivered, I think you will not be surprised that you called it correctly. Enjoy!
#4
Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Aunt Sally's Farm by Grome...
Last post by teanndaorsa - August 10, 2026, 06:41:49 PMAnd the last part up today, enjoy!
#5
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / The Contortionist's Homecoming...
Last post by teanndaorsa - August 10, 2026, 06:39:56 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_contortionists_homecoming.html
F/f; predicament; bond; cuffs; naked; outdoors; clamps; mast; hum; collar; cane; oral; tease; denial; irritant; enclosed; rom; cons; XX
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_contortionists_homecoming.html
F/f; predicament; bond; cuffs; naked; outdoors; clamps; mast; hum; collar; cane; oral; tease; denial; irritant; enclosed; rom; cons; XX
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks
#6
Looking for a Story / Re: dental braces or brackets.
Last post by SwitchMan - August 10, 2026, 06:09:14 PMHere are results from a quick Google search for "dental bondage braces":
https://pseudobraces.weebly.com/captive-in-braces.html
https://toychris.livejournal.com/4015.html
https://www.deviantart.com/bizarrefixations/art/Locking-Orthodontic-Bondage-Head-Harness-1062609686
https://pseudobraces.weebly.com/captive-in-braces.html
https://toychris.livejournal.com/4015.html
https://www.deviantart.com/bizarrefixations/art/Locking-Orthodontic-Bondage-Head-Harness-1062609686
#7
Looking for a Story / dental braces or brackets.
Last post by LydiaB - August 10, 2026, 10:59:41 AMI am looking for stories or videos showing the permanent installation of dental braces or brackets.
#8
Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAlter...
Last post by sammy808 - August 10, 2026, 03:51:33 AMi can't believe it's been nearly five years since the first chapter came out. took me a bit of time to get through the last few as well, but it was definitely worth it. <3
#9
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: BDSM Boot Camp by The Tech...
Last post by Caras pet - August 09, 2026, 09:17:29 AMUp to part 7 now.
#10
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by Caras pet - August 09, 2026, 08:58:39 AMPart 15 is up, with a little romance this time.
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