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Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Scanned, Shipped, Printed ...
Last post by feline - Today at 02:15:37 PMNow look here, I am not that easy to bribe!
*considers*...
OK... maybe I am
*considers*...
OK... maybe I am
#2
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Belted by Zoe Cordelier
Last post by feline - Today at 02:14:44 PMI am starting to write my thoughts on this while half way through reading the story, since I have already collected quite a few thoughts, and want to start getting them into order, since more thoughts keep on appearing 
To start with, we feel dropped into the middle of things, but that isn't a bad thing, since we start with a great deal of emotion, feeling, torment, and raw sexiness, with the massive torment, this teasing, the punishment, this is a very harsh situation! The belt and its settings seem FAR worse than Helen is prepared for, but Helen did this to herself, by herself, it seems. Didn't she have some idea, even a small one, of what she was doing and getting into here? This really isn't clear at the moment.
I am confused as to why the belt seems to punish her when it hears people talking around her. Not against this at all, it is a VERY wicked, delightfully wicked setting and behaviour, but I am wondering where it came from, and what the thinking is behind it. It just seems a random thing. If it was punishing Helen for talking then it would make more sense, since that would be another form of control and dominance from the belt's settings. But why anyone talking around her? Then again, it does produce massive torment as she is trying to get to meet Amelie at the cafe, which is delightfully evil!
Then we have the choice of her key holder. Why choose a friend who seems so set on punishing her? Why choose someone who seems to angry at the role of unasked, of surprise key holder?
Next another "why" question - when Amelie sees the belt she seems to know what to do, how to control it, how to remove the remote control instantly, and her way around the settings. This seems a strange level of knowledge, but there is so much we don't know yet that I don't know what to make of this. But looking at how the belt's settings are changed, Amelie really knows how to work the belt, and is seriously pissed!
Helen dressing up to visit Amelie and beg, loving the slutty outfit, but again, the instructions to dress like that, it speaks to Amelie's anger level. When Helen gets to the apartment, things start to make a bit more sense. For whatever reason, Amelie is clearly very familiar with the belt and the other tools that come with it, since she has other tools for Helen to wear, and be punished by, and we get a better insight into why she is so angry, so upset!
The thigh cuffs, Helen being shocked so much for trying to take a bigger stride is a wicked surprise, but also, look at how much delight Amelie takes in this suffering and punishment! Talk about either a brilliant, or a MASSIVELY STUPID choice of a key holder!
Watching Helen sleeping next to Amelie, how her submission is deepening, it does make me wonder how much of this was the "intention" all along. Not deliberately it seems, but sub-consciously, setting herself up to fall under Amelie's control, her total, domineering and cruel control...
Finally released, the strength of the conditioning, even after only a week, is striking! But the story makes clear how strong the conditioning pattern was, how she was constantly teased, pushed to the edge, then punished and denied! But this also brings out the caring, gentle and loving side of Amelie... but even then, she is looking at Helen and thinking of her as a chaste submissive...
The ending... this actually wraps things up very well, brings us full circle, and answers many of the questions that I had formed while reading this. This is good, without the answers this would be quite irritating. But with the answers, what really stands out is the sheer intensity of the emotions, feelings and torment that the story is full of and describes, such strong and delicious emotions and torments!
To start with, we feel dropped into the middle of things, but that isn't a bad thing, since we start with a great deal of emotion, feeling, torment, and raw sexiness, with the massive torment, this teasing, the punishment, this is a very harsh situation! The belt and its settings seem FAR worse than Helen is prepared for, but Helen did this to herself, by herself, it seems. Didn't she have some idea, even a small one, of what she was doing and getting into here? This really isn't clear at the moment.
I am confused as to why the belt seems to punish her when it hears people talking around her. Not against this at all, it is a VERY wicked, delightfully wicked setting and behaviour, but I am wondering where it came from, and what the thinking is behind it. It just seems a random thing. If it was punishing Helen for talking then it would make more sense, since that would be another form of control and dominance from the belt's settings. But why anyone talking around her? Then again, it does produce massive torment as she is trying to get to meet Amelie at the cafe, which is delightfully evil!
Then we have the choice of her key holder. Why choose a friend who seems so set on punishing her? Why choose someone who seems to angry at the role of unasked, of surprise key holder?
Next another "why" question - when Amelie sees the belt she seems to know what to do, how to control it, how to remove the remote control instantly, and her way around the settings. This seems a strange level of knowledge, but there is so much we don't know yet that I don't know what to make of this. But looking at how the belt's settings are changed, Amelie really knows how to work the belt, and is seriously pissed!
Helen dressing up to visit Amelie and beg, loving the slutty outfit, but again, the instructions to dress like that, it speaks to Amelie's anger level. When Helen gets to the apartment, things start to make a bit more sense. For whatever reason, Amelie is clearly very familiar with the belt and the other tools that come with it, since she has other tools for Helen to wear, and be punished by, and we get a better insight into why she is so angry, so upset!
The thigh cuffs, Helen being shocked so much for trying to take a bigger stride is a wicked surprise, but also, look at how much delight Amelie takes in this suffering and punishment! Talk about either a brilliant, or a MASSIVELY STUPID choice of a key holder!
Watching Helen sleeping next to Amelie, how her submission is deepening, it does make me wonder how much of this was the "intention" all along. Not deliberately it seems, but sub-consciously, setting herself up to fall under Amelie's control, her total, domineering and cruel control...
Finally released, the strength of the conditioning, even after only a week, is striking! But the story makes clear how strong the conditioning pattern was, how she was constantly teased, pushed to the edge, then punished and denied! But this also brings out the caring, gentle and loving side of Amelie... but even then, she is looking at Helen and thinking of her as a chaste submissive...
The ending... this actually wraps things up very well, brings us full circle, and answers many of the questions that I had formed while reading this. This is good, without the answers this would be quite irritating. But with the answers, what really stands out is the sheer intensity of the emotions, feelings and torment that the story is full of and describes, such strong and delicious emotions and torments!
#3
General Discussion / Re: More stories
Last post by Observer - Today at 12:57:54 AMQuote from: Rachelsiss on September 18, 2026, 01:39:51 AMWhat what what where do I search these!?with this search feature https://grometsplaza.net/search.html
enjoy!
#4
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: The Disappearance of Ella ...
Last post by DV-artkink - September 24, 2026, 08:24:14 PMReally liked the story. I'd be interested to see an alternate ending where Ella's neighbor was successful in his plans to turn her into his cat.
#5
Book Reviews / Re: Eudeamon
Last post by boundbinder - September 24, 2026, 01:40:15 PMI've read that. It's not normally my cup of tea, kink-wise, but it kept me interested. I loved it. It was very well-written. I did not realize it was an actual book.
#6
Book Reviews / Re: What Is Your Favorite 'How...
Last post by Observer - September 23, 2026, 07:36:25 PMI highly recommend "SM 101" - it's over 20 years old, but it's still a great source of pragmatic advice.
The author, Jay Wiseman, unfortunately passed away recently.
The author, Jay Wiseman, unfortunately passed away recently.
#7
Book Reviews / Eudeamon
Last post by Observer - September 23, 2026, 07:35:09 PMI'm surprised that no one has mentioned this book here before.
Erika Moak's story was first published on the web in the late 2000s, and caused a bit of a splash at the time - remember "banes" - that's her creation. It is now available in book form.
This is a story about a reporter who decides to investigate a new alternate form of incarceration, banishment, by going through the process herself. This involves being poured into a latex-like suit and oval helmet that cuts off the prisoner from society (the "banes" - those banished).
This story is what convinced me to write. It covers themes of love, identity; it's a critique of how we treat criminals and the homeless, of the dangers of corporate answers to government problems. All that *and* it's a very kinky story too, covering latex, total enclosure, mind control... a must read for any fan of heavy rubber or droning.
Link to the author's profile and purchasing option here: https://bsky.app/profile/evildolly.bsky.social/post/3ltpa5v6xl22x
Erika Moak's story was first published on the web in the late 2000s, and caused a bit of a splash at the time - remember "banes" - that's her creation. It is now available in book form.
This is a story about a reporter who decides to investigate a new alternate form of incarceration, banishment, by going through the process herself. This involves being poured into a latex-like suit and oval helmet that cuts off the prisoner from society (the "banes" - those banished).
This story is what convinced me to write. It covers themes of love, identity; it's a critique of how we treat criminals and the homeless, of the dangers of corporate answers to government problems. All that *and* it's a very kinky story too, covering latex, total enclosure, mind control... a must read for any fan of heavy rubber or droning.
Link to the author's profile and purchasing option here: https://bsky.app/profile/evildolly.bsky.social/post/3ltpa5v6xl22x
#8
Latex Website Stories Feedback / Re: The Institute by Observer
Last post by Observer - September 22, 2026, 11:20:09 PMQuote from: crystal verbeana on September 22, 2026, 01:36:39 PMThis has got to be one of my favorite series. The story is structured and feels like it is real , happening .... the characters are great and there keep have new layers added both of mystery and eroticism.
Fantasy stories are great too but having it based in potential reality makes it more immersive.
thankyou
Thank you for your kind words! I have been striving for a certain level of realism, both in my characters being real people and in the kink being plausible, at least somewhat. This is why I was very hesitant to introduce Nadia, as her "snake trick" is well, not realistic at all (she shows up again in Tome 4
)There are still a few more layers coming! It will all be resolved in tome 7
cheers,
Observer
#9
Personals / Re: Seeing what's out there in...
Last post by bound4fun - September 22, 2026, 10:49:28 PMWhat are you looking for?
#10
Latex Website Stories Feedback / Re: The Institute by Observer
Last post by Observer - September 22, 2026, 10:38:48 PMQuote from: Caras pet on September 22, 2026, 06:45:23 AMAnother three tomes?
Well, I thought the Halloween part would be the final one...
With four tomes in two years, I might have to wait another 1.5 years...
In this case I might go with teanndaorsa and start after tome 4 is finished
You aren't 100% wrong about tome 4 being an "end", as it is the "end" of the first "half" of this story. After this, the pacing will change (each tome was about a week, tome 5 will cover the period between Halloween and mid-winter, so about 4 months), and new narrators will sometimes take over.
How long will it take? I don't know. Tome 5 is already 50% written. Tome 3 took 3 months, tome 4 took over a year, so it's hard to give firm prediction - I didn't expect tome 4 to take so long!
Enjoy and thank you for your patience!
Observer
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