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Latex Website Stories Feedback / Re: A Conjugal Compromise by M...
Last post by a thing for rubber (Marcus) - Today at 09:31:34 PMQuote from: ahimnobody on Today at 06:45:29 PMWhat an interesting mix of motives you've created. I hope we get to see that meeting and how deep Mizuki is willing to go.Thanks!
I have an idea of a second part but not something I'm working on right now but might some day 😉
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Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Re: Brett and Darren by Twiste...
Last post by twistedsmile - Today at 07:31:32 PM02. "Believer" Commentary
By the time I finished chapter 1, I didn't actually have a concrete plan for chapter 2. I knew that it was going to be from Darren's perspective, that it would follow the same Before/Now/Later structure, and that it would explain Darren's backstory/motivation and continue the 'relationship'.
I also dropped a few breadcrumbs for myself in chapter 1 (per the previous commentary): Darren being 'straight', friends settling down while he's drinking alone, and why the image of Brett tied up was "some shit I dreamed about. But in real life!"
"One Month Later" - hopefully it was clear this meant 1 month after chapter 1, not 1 month after the 'Now' section of chapter 2
"I should probably be in fuckin' jail for what I did" - morally, I couldn't let it go unacknowledged. Even if you accept that the sex was consensual (ultimately), he could at least be charged with unlawful entry.
"Probably uses, like, moisturiser and shit" - mirror of Brett saying in chapter 1 "He might even look handsome, with a little self-care." Speaking as someone who does moisturise, I would recommend it.
"I've got my own shit going on, you know?" / "That gets him beggin' (heh)." - he tries to act aloof, but he's actually into this thing he has with Brett
"that lad can't half talk" - Darren doesn't seem to realise he's made a new friend. The image I have in my head is, I think it was in Tom and Jerry, the big, tough bull dog and the tiny, energetic dog that follow him around.
"told me about this football [anime]" - the one I had in mind was "Blue Lock". And Darren actually watches and enjoys it
"not 'together' like that" - internalised homophobia
"I don't know why he keeps coming down the pub" - One of the things I like about first person is you can play with what the narrator does and doesn't know. Brett clearly has a crush on Darren at this point. Darren is completely oblivious, or perhaps won't allow himself to see it.
"Guess he must be lonely." - projection/dramatic irony
"Before" - the original draft of this section was about Darren's dating history with BDSM, and all the girls that wanted him to tie them up because they thought he was a 'bad boy'. It never felt quite right (and was also a little depressing). Back then, this chapter was going to be called "Brute".
I think the inspiration for this version came from watching the series "Maximum Pleasure Guaranteed". The webcam/POV angle fit perfectly with the title "Believer", which was a better thematic match to chapter 1 (and allowed me to make the Monkee's reference).
I've never actually done any cam sessions myself; I don't like the idea of my porn looking back at me. And having watched 'Maximum Pleasure Guaranteed', I especially don't like the idea of being blackmailed. The descriptions here are based on videos recorded from cam-sessions, plus speculation.
The 'joke' of this section is that the sessions keep getting more idealised and more intimate; but they can never be 'real'.
"You come home to find your girlfriend in bondage (POV)" - this is Darren's recurring motif, equivalent to Brett's "I imagine..."
In my early 20s, I read a lot of Chuck Palahniuk books, and that guy loves a motif: "I am Jack's disappointment" (Fight Club), "Give me pity, give me empathy" (Invisible Monsters), etc. I think Palahniuk has been a pretty big influence on my writing style.
The thing with camming and POV porn is, they're formats that are supposed to make the porn feel more 'real'. But by calling out these key moments like they're the titles of POV porn videos, it's ironically drawing attention to how UNreal they are.
"I whip out my cock, and tracksuit guy does the same" - I think of this like that scene in Blade Runner 2049, where the sex worker and the hologram are 'synchronising'. Darren precedes to describe the scene as if he's actually there in the room.
"oh yes, please cum on my face, Darren." - Nadja's dialogue is intentionally stilted. And she keeps saying Darren's name, which I've heard is a technique for making a person like you. Ironically, whenever I notice someone saying my name a lot, I can't help feeling like they're trying to manipulate me.
"Mmm, it feels so good, Darren. You're so big." - I think this counts as a joke: the cam girls all telling Darren how big his dick is.
"I give her a massive tip, everything I won on the fruit machines" - callback to chapter 1, meaning this is the same night Darren first saw Brett (with the fluffy tail).
"Katie kisses you on the cheek (POV) [4K]" - this is a moment that should be really intimate, even romantic. The [4K] is rather cruelly undercutting it. No matter how high definition the image is, you're still just on your own looking at a screen.
"Your best mate sets you up with your future wife (POV)" - another fantasy he wants to believe
"You see a woman in bondage..." - not (POV) because it's really happening. Kind of. What if your fantasy came true, but not in the way you expected...
"She wants you to come inside" - he's just been presented with a possible future where he gets a wife and settles down. And yet, he's willing to throw all of that away for a fantasy. You could read him going inside as a self-destructive act; resisting a happy ending out of spite, or I don't know what.
"he's wearing that pink wig, and this, like, Japanese school girl sailor dress" - more femboy-coding. Brett is crossdressing because he knows Darren will find it more enticing if he presents as feminine. Which I guess would make him more of a 'trap'.
At one point I considered making Brett trans as a way to resolve the "Darren isn't gay" problem. But I realised that would be problematic - either it falls into the autogynophilia trope, or it presents Brett as wanting to change his gender for a man (not for himself).
"The bottle of lube looks brand new. Reckon it's probably his first time." - obviously it's not. We saw Brett using a butt plug in chapter 1. I think, in the same way that Darren is playing up the role of cruel Dom, Brett is playing up the role of innocent sub.
"I always keep a rubber in my wallet" - it just occurred to me that Brett probably would (should) have provided his own condoms. Very reckless. At least one of them's got some sense.
"mutters something like 'I love it, Darren'" - oh look, Brett's doing the name thing as well
"Who told you you could fuckin' cum?" - maybe Brett could learn a thing or two from Katie
"We have a safe word... He doesn't use it." - don't worry, gentle reader, it's all above board.
"Not like I'm gonna hang around for a cuddle." - more distancing. He could probably be happy with Brett, if he'd only let himself.
"I can see myself actually marrying this bird." - he's found this seemingly perfect woman, who is apparently also into being tied up. So why is he still fucking around with Brett?
---
I don't have immediate plans for any more stories. The ending of chapter 2 is setting up an obvious car crash. Likely it would be told from Sally's perspective, with her discovering Brett (in bondage?). I'm just not sure how to play it out in a way that isn't a total bummer. I can't see the story having a happy ending for Brett and Darren as a couple.
But in the meantime, as mentioned in a previous post, Brett does pop up elsewhere. And maybe Darren will too.
By the time I finished chapter 1, I didn't actually have a concrete plan for chapter 2. I knew that it was going to be from Darren's perspective, that it would follow the same Before/Now/Later structure, and that it would explain Darren's backstory/motivation and continue the 'relationship'.
I also dropped a few breadcrumbs for myself in chapter 1 (per the previous commentary): Darren being 'straight', friends settling down while he's drinking alone, and why the image of Brett tied up was "some shit I dreamed about. But in real life!"
"One Month Later" - hopefully it was clear this meant 1 month after chapter 1, not 1 month after the 'Now' section of chapter 2
"I should probably be in fuckin' jail for what I did" - morally, I couldn't let it go unacknowledged. Even if you accept that the sex was consensual (ultimately), he could at least be charged with unlawful entry.
"Probably uses, like, moisturiser and shit" - mirror of Brett saying in chapter 1 "He might even look handsome, with a little self-care." Speaking as someone who does moisturise, I would recommend it.
"I've got my own shit going on, you know?" / "That gets him beggin' (heh)." - he tries to act aloof, but he's actually into this thing he has with Brett
"that lad can't half talk" - Darren doesn't seem to realise he's made a new friend. The image I have in my head is, I think it was in Tom and Jerry, the big, tough bull dog and the tiny, energetic dog that follow him around.
"told me about this football [anime]" - the one I had in mind was "Blue Lock". And Darren actually watches and enjoys it
"not 'together' like that" - internalised homophobia
"I don't know why he keeps coming down the pub" - One of the things I like about first person is you can play with what the narrator does and doesn't know. Brett clearly has a crush on Darren at this point. Darren is completely oblivious, or perhaps won't allow himself to see it.
"Guess he must be lonely." - projection/dramatic irony
"Before" - the original draft of this section was about Darren's dating history with BDSM, and all the girls that wanted him to tie them up because they thought he was a 'bad boy'. It never felt quite right (and was also a little depressing). Back then, this chapter was going to be called "Brute".
I think the inspiration for this version came from watching the series "Maximum Pleasure Guaranteed". The webcam/POV angle fit perfectly with the title "Believer", which was a better thematic match to chapter 1 (and allowed me to make the Monkee's reference).
I've never actually done any cam sessions myself; I don't like the idea of my porn looking back at me. And having watched 'Maximum Pleasure Guaranteed', I especially don't like the idea of being blackmailed. The descriptions here are based on videos recorded from cam-sessions, plus speculation.
The 'joke' of this section is that the sessions keep getting more idealised and more intimate; but they can never be 'real'.
"You come home to find your girlfriend in bondage (POV)" - this is Darren's recurring motif, equivalent to Brett's "I imagine..."
In my early 20s, I read a lot of Chuck Palahniuk books, and that guy loves a motif: "I am Jack's disappointment" (Fight Club), "Give me pity, give me empathy" (Invisible Monsters), etc. I think Palahniuk has been a pretty big influence on my writing style.
The thing with camming and POV porn is, they're formats that are supposed to make the porn feel more 'real'. But by calling out these key moments like they're the titles of POV porn videos, it's ironically drawing attention to how UNreal they are.
"I whip out my cock, and tracksuit guy does the same" - I think of this like that scene in Blade Runner 2049, where the sex worker and the hologram are 'synchronising'. Darren precedes to describe the scene as if he's actually there in the room.
"oh yes, please cum on my face, Darren." - Nadja's dialogue is intentionally stilted. And she keeps saying Darren's name, which I've heard is a technique for making a person like you. Ironically, whenever I notice someone saying my name a lot, I can't help feeling like they're trying to manipulate me.
"Mmm, it feels so good, Darren. You're so big." - I think this counts as a joke: the cam girls all telling Darren how big his dick is.
"I give her a massive tip, everything I won on the fruit machines" - callback to chapter 1, meaning this is the same night Darren first saw Brett (with the fluffy tail).
"Katie kisses you on the cheek (POV) [4K]" - this is a moment that should be really intimate, even romantic. The [4K] is rather cruelly undercutting it. No matter how high definition the image is, you're still just on your own looking at a screen.
"Your best mate sets you up with your future wife (POV)" - another fantasy he wants to believe
"You see a woman in bondage..." - not (POV) because it's really happening. Kind of. What if your fantasy came true, but not in the way you expected...
"She wants you to come inside" - he's just been presented with a possible future where he gets a wife and settles down. And yet, he's willing to throw all of that away for a fantasy. You could read him going inside as a self-destructive act; resisting a happy ending out of spite, or I don't know what.
"he's wearing that pink wig, and this, like, Japanese school girl sailor dress" - more femboy-coding. Brett is crossdressing because he knows Darren will find it more enticing if he presents as feminine. Which I guess would make him more of a 'trap'.
At one point I considered making Brett trans as a way to resolve the "Darren isn't gay" problem. But I realised that would be problematic - either it falls into the autogynophilia trope, or it presents Brett as wanting to change his gender for a man (not for himself).
"The bottle of lube looks brand new. Reckon it's probably his first time." - obviously it's not. We saw Brett using a butt plug in chapter 1. I think, in the same way that Darren is playing up the role of cruel Dom, Brett is playing up the role of innocent sub.
"I always keep a rubber in my wallet" - it just occurred to me that Brett probably would (should) have provided his own condoms. Very reckless. At least one of them's got some sense.
"mutters something like 'I love it, Darren'" - oh look, Brett's doing the name thing as well
"Who told you you could fuckin' cum?" - maybe Brett could learn a thing or two from Katie
"We have a safe word... He doesn't use it." - don't worry, gentle reader, it's all above board.
"Not like I'm gonna hang around for a cuddle." - more distancing. He could probably be happy with Brett, if he'd only let himself.
"I can see myself actually marrying this bird." - he's found this seemingly perfect woman, who is apparently also into being tied up. So why is he still fucking around with Brett?
---
I don't have immediate plans for any more stories. The ending of chapter 2 is setting up an obvious car crash. Likely it would be told from Sally's perspective, with her discovering Brett (in bondage?). I'm just not sure how to play it out in a way that isn't a total bummer. I can't see the story having a happy ending for Brett and Darren as a couple.
But in the meantime, as mentioned in a previous post, Brett does pop up elsewhere. And maybe Darren will too.
#3
Latex Website Stories Feedback / Re: A Conjugal Compromise by M...
Last post by ahimnobody - Today at 06:45:29 PMWhat an interesting mix of motives you've created. I hope we get to see that meeting and how deep Mizuki is willing to go.
#4
Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Scanned, Printed, and Sealed p...
Last post by baron law - Today at 05:03:07 AMHello loyal readers,
Part 7 is finally written and ready to be uploaded. I've sent it to Teann and they will post it soon.
Thanks for your patience.
Baron Law.
Part 7 is finally written and ready to be uploaded. I've sent it to Teann and they will post it soon.
Thanks for your patience.
Baron Law.
#5
Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / A Bondage Stroll through the P...
Last post by teanndaorsa - August 15, 2026, 09:46:59 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
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Latex Website Stories Feedback / A Conjugal Compromise by Marcu...
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Machine Stories / Lifelong Mistake by t92
Last post by teanndaorsa - August 15, 2026, 09:44:10 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Cuffed, Caged, Tied and Tormen...
Last post by teanndaorsa - August 15, 2026, 09:43:41 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / At the Opera by Zoe Cordelier
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#10
General Discussion / Re: Switch stories
Last post by twistedsmile - August 15, 2026, 01:16:48 AMQuote from: Caras pet on August 14, 2026, 06:44:02 AMPlease don't over interpret my feedback on that part
All good, I got your meaning
And I appreciate you sticking with the series through that episode.SMF spam blocked by CleanTalk