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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: The Chateau by Budman
« Last post by feline on July 22, 2024, 02:41:00 pm »
And we have reached the end.  It was interesting, a little sad, but well drawn from a character point of view, seeing and learning about Paula's history, and how she cannot have a husband who would let her be in control.  Tempting to point out how extreme the reaction is, but she has always said she was a switch, and the scars the deaths left were clearly massive and very deep.

It is good that the story has been wrapped up and actually reached a finish point.  The conclusions reached make sense, it is good to see how everyone has moved on, and how such a good revenue generator for the village has changed how the local businesses work and handle customers.  Logical and reasonable.

By now this feels a lot more like a general story, and a look at characters, but for me, personally, it has lost the sexy elements.  I don't feel emotionally invested or caught up in things.

Seeing steps being put into place for the slut to have a retirement fund does work though, and feels deeply important and sensible.  The fact that they make so much money from people who insist on giving her orgasms makes me giggle.

The final line seems an odd way to finish the story.  It is fitting to have this information, but it feels like something that should be in the middle, rather than as the final line of such a long work.
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Trashcan Discussion / Re: New to the plaza
« Last post by garbagebag on July 22, 2024, 12:49:59 pm »
Sorry I was gone so long. Got pretty busy. But for the story I was thinking some accidentally disposal. It's the the summer holidays and a young man is home alone, and decides to have some fun. He ties himself up and gets himself snuggly into an empty trashcan in the kitchen, unknown to him. His stepmother and some older friends are coming back for a bit of a party. Leading to him being buried in a lot of different trash and waste. Only to be taken out for pickup later the next morning. If you're a fan give me some feed back on this premise, as this will be my first story.

A great idea. If you wish, feel free to add a trash bag to the kitchen bin.
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Latex Website Stories Feedback / Re: To Fill A Need by latexsubmale
« Last post by Observer on July 22, 2024, 07:40:39 am »
A very potent story, well written. 
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Devoured Stories / Re: Feeding Trixie’s Sack Worm by Steff
« Last post by Observer on July 22, 2024, 07:35:51 am »
Fun story - perhaps it could have been "stretched out" a little bit more.  This sack-worm has potential! 
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Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Uh-oh by Geetwo
« Last post by teanndaorsa on July 21, 2024, 11:19:42 pm »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storiessz/uh_oh.html
Sbf; F/f; gag; cuffs; collar; caught; tease; denial; reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
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Latex Website Stories Feedback / To Fill A Need by latexsubmale
« Last post by teanndaorsa on July 21, 2024, 11:19:03 pm »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.latexstories.net/storiessz/to_fill_a_need.html
F/m; mpov; milk; latex; hood; catsuit; clamps; buttplug; toys; electro; tease; gag; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
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Devoured Stories / Feeding Trixie’s Sack Worm by Steff
« Last post by teanndaorsa on July 21, 2024, 11:18:00 pm »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.devouredstories.net/storiesek/feeding_trixies_sack_worm.html
FF; Other/f; vore; swallow; insert; cocoon; lab; basement; iso; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: The Chateau by Budman
« Last post by teanndaorsa on July 21, 2024, 11:16:35 pm »
And with that...

Fin
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Latex Website Stories Feedback / Re: Critter Squad by Tigerstretch
« Last post by Observer on July 21, 2024, 04:22:11 pm »
I too am looking forward to the conclusion of this story
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Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Re: Pet Correction by ForeverAltered
« Last post by Observer on July 21, 2024, 08:16:49 am »
It's definitely been an intriguing story so far, looking forward to seeing where this is going!
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