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Quote from: throwaway140124 on June 25, 2026, 08:49:36 PMEpilogue? Nooo!
Quote from: throwaway140124 on June 25, 2026, 08:49:36 PMThe giving of rings was a lovely gesture, and I love comparing and contrasting the two rings. Obviously they're very different themes to one another, but then neither are the classic smooth metal band (plus or minus gemstones). And then the aforementioned styles are fun, giving a nice insight into Elise's two different relationships - obviously there are strong indicators of who have which ring, but I like the choice not to say it outright. I like the ambiguity that that leaves.
Quote from: throwaway140124 on June 25, 2026, 08:49:36 PMHaving Talia as a girl in a box is fun, nice classic image, and it's fun to have a character who leans into the "willing helplessness/pseudo-cnc element of kink. It also ties in really nicely with her awkwardness asking to try particular kinks - I'm sure we all want, to varying degrees - someone to take some decisions out of our hands!
Quote from: throwaway140124 on June 25, 2026, 08:49:36 PMAlso having the breathing tube silence someone so completely is a fun idea I'd never considered!
Quote from: throwaway140124 on June 25, 2026, 08:49:36 PMElise & Talia's foreplay, so to speak, is wonderfully imagined and excellently written, but that's a mean position to put a sub in. Free permission to cum, but not enough stimulation to get you there, and no way to get any further!
Quote from: throwaway140124 on June 25, 2026, 08:49:36 PMAnd then that brief fantasising session from Elise is so good! Obviously so much of these two relationships is theatre (not unexpected from dating a professional domme) but I love how much more obvious that is to Talia than to Claire.
Quote from: throwaway140124 on June 25, 2026, 08:49:36 PM(I've also got so many thoughts about kink/ttrpgs and being "in control" - wanna talk about those?)
Quote from: throwaway140124 on June 25, 2026, 08:49:36 PMThe bizarre facets of Claire and Talia's relationship are delightful (Elise being able to compare Elise to her mother in her dirty talk, Claire smirking at the sight of her fruitlessly rutting daughter), and the way Claire described Brianna was fun. Interesting that Elise then consciously shuts down her idea of having both Claire and Elise service her at once. One has to wonder - if Claire and/or Elise voiced the same idea, which would win out, Elise's aversion, or desire to indulge her subs? (and we're right back to "domme as a position of service")
Quote from: throwaway140124 on June 25, 2026, 08:49:36 PMAnd then a delightfully sweet ending, and 10/10 punning on "tie things up". Thank you so much for writing and sharing these. It's incredible work, and very kind of you to share them for free. Thank you, and good luck with whatever comes next!
Quote from: black_falcon_2002 on June 21, 2026, 10:12:46 PMMight beThanks, but that is something completely different
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emmasentombment.html
Seems at least close.

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