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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Leatherbound Hearts by Dar...
Last post by throwaway140124 - June 25, 2026, 08:49:36 PMEpilogue? Nooo! 
As ever though, so many things here to love. Ending it at the start of the convention bookends this really nicely, and allows for plenty of options on where to go next, or bid adieu to this world altogether (though I really really hope that's not the case!). Having Elise's pov for the epilogue works really well too - it's hard to look back and see one's own growth, so to have Claire looking back wouldn't have the same punch, I don't think.
The giving of rings was a lovely gesture, and I love comparing and contrasting the two rings. Obviously they're very different themes to one another, but then neither are the classic smooth metal band (plus or minus gemstones). And then the aforementioned styles are fun, giving a nice insight into Elise's two different relationships - obviously there are strong indicators of who have which ring, but I like the choice not to say it outright. I like the ambiguity that that leaves.
Having Talia as a girl in a box is fun, nice classic image, and it's fun to have a character who leans into the "willing helplessness/pseudo-cnc element of kink. It also ties in really nicely with her awkwardness asking to try particular kinks - I'm sure we all want, to varying degrees - someone to take some decisions out of our hands! Also having the breathing tube silence someone so completely is a fun idea I'd never considered!
Elise & Talia's foreplay, so to speak, is wonderfully imagined and excellently written, but that's a mean position to put a sub in. Free permission to cum, but not enough stimulation to get you there, and no way to get any further!
And then that brief fantasising session from Elise is so good! Obviously so much of these two relationships is theatre (not unexpected from dating a professional domme) but I love how much more obvious that is to Talia than to Claire. We've mentioned comparisons to TTRPGs before (it feels like an appropriate anecdote is the idea that, behind the screen, all the GM has is a piece of paper reading "gnomes???" underlined three times and then "MAKE IT UP" at the bottom) and I love that Elise is consciously keeping up the mask of the professional domme because it's what her girlfriends want, so she does that as a service to them. Plus, as a bonus, keeping to her role allows her to indulge her personal predilection for tying up pretty girls! Win win! But then Elise has her own desires as well, slips into her own fantasy, but it's shaped in such a way that while she's cumming like a rat with an orgasm button, she's still in command/Claire and/or Talia are still literally or metaphorically beneath her. (I've also got so many thoughts about kink/ttrpgs and being "in control" - wanna talk about those?)
The bizzare facets of Claire and Talia's relationship are delightful (Elise being able to compare Elise to her mother in her dirty talk, Claire smirking at the sight of her fruitlessly rutting daughter), and the way Claire described Brianna was fun. It felt like she was rambling a bit, which contrasts nicely with her aforementioned growth in confidence to show how much that meeting affected her, which Elise seems to pick up on too. Nice then to follow it up with Elise putting Claire in her place, in multiple senses. Interesting that Elise then consciously shuts down her idea of having both Claire and Elise service her at once. One has to wonder - if Claire and/or Elise voiced the same idea, which would win out, Elise's aversion, or desire to indulge her subs? (and we're right back to "domme as a position of service")
And then a delightfully sweet ending, and 10/10 punning on "tie things up". Thank you so much for writing and sharing these. It's incredible work, and very kind of you to share them for free. Thank you, and good luck with whatever comes next!
As ever though, so many things here to love. Ending it at the start of the convention bookends this really nicely, and allows for plenty of options on where to go next, or bid adieu to this world altogether (though I really really hope that's not the case!). Having Elise's pov for the epilogue works really well too - it's hard to look back and see one's own growth, so to have Claire looking back wouldn't have the same punch, I don't think.
The giving of rings was a lovely gesture, and I love comparing and contrasting the two rings. Obviously they're very different themes to one another, but then neither are the classic smooth metal band (plus or minus gemstones). And then the aforementioned styles are fun, giving a nice insight into Elise's two different relationships - obviously there are strong indicators of who have which ring, but I like the choice not to say it outright. I like the ambiguity that that leaves.
Having Talia as a girl in a box is fun, nice classic image, and it's fun to have a character who leans into the "willing helplessness/pseudo-cnc element of kink. It also ties in really nicely with her awkwardness asking to try particular kinks - I'm sure we all want, to varying degrees - someone to take some decisions out of our hands! Also having the breathing tube silence someone so completely is a fun idea I'd never considered!
Elise & Talia's foreplay, so to speak, is wonderfully imagined and excellently written, but that's a mean position to put a sub in. Free permission to cum, but not enough stimulation to get you there, and no way to get any further!
And then that brief fantasising session from Elise is so good! Obviously so much of these two relationships is theatre (not unexpected from dating a professional domme) but I love how much more obvious that is to Talia than to Claire. We've mentioned comparisons to TTRPGs before (it feels like an appropriate anecdote is the idea that, behind the screen, all the GM has is a piece of paper reading "gnomes???" underlined three times and then "MAKE IT UP" at the bottom) and I love that Elise is consciously keeping up the mask of the professional domme because it's what her girlfriends want, so she does that as a service to them. Plus, as a bonus, keeping to her role allows her to indulge her personal predilection for tying up pretty girls! Win win! But then Elise has her own desires as well, slips into her own fantasy, but it's shaped in such a way that while she's cumming like a rat with an orgasm button, she's still in command/Claire and/or Talia are still literally or metaphorically beneath her. (I've also got so many thoughts about kink/ttrpgs and being "in control" - wanna talk about those?)
The bizzare facets of Claire and Talia's relationship are delightful (Elise being able to compare Elise to her mother in her dirty talk, Claire smirking at the sight of her fruitlessly rutting daughter), and the way Claire described Brianna was fun. It felt like she was rambling a bit, which contrasts nicely with her aforementioned growth in confidence to show how much that meeting affected her, which Elise seems to pick up on too. Nice then to follow it up with Elise putting Claire in her place, in multiple senses. Interesting that Elise then consciously shuts down her idea of having both Claire and Elise service her at once. One has to wonder - if Claire and/or Elise voiced the same idea, which would win out, Elise's aversion, or desire to indulge her subs? (and we're right back to "domme as a position of service")
And then a delightfully sweet ending, and 10/10 punning on "tie things up". Thank you so much for writing and sharing these. It's incredible work, and very kind of you to share them for free. Thank you, and good luck with whatever comes next!
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Moroccan Vacation by TagsA...
Last post by feline - June 23, 2026, 04:40:47 PMI have quite mixed feelings here, about the content of the story. The story its self is told very well, it flows very smoothly, plenty of feeling and emotions, and even a twist or two that I simply didn't see coming, which keeps things interesting 
I do enjoy the idea of someone seeking out to explore and experience their fantasy, but it is the one way, and deeply permanent nature of these fantasies that bothers me. It isn't something you get to explore and then you get to return to your life as before, instead it was a one way journey with no way back. So seeing the woman as an intelligent and likable woman, this was sad, while the journey was erotic and sexy.
I do enjoy the idea of someone seeking out to explore and experience their fantasy, but it is the one way, and deeply permanent nature of these fantasies that bothers me. It isn't something you get to explore and then you get to return to your life as before, instead it was a one way journey with no way back. So seeing the woman as an intelligent and likable woman, this was sad, while the journey was erotic and sexy.
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Jill Owned by her Roommate...
Last post by feline - June 23, 2026, 03:51:04 PMA well written and interesting story. I will admit to mixed feelings here, mainly about how "fast" things went, how quickly Jill seemed to be rushing into full fledged sexual slavery. But what makes this so interesting, and well told, is that as we learn more about the history, as things are filled in a bit at a time, we learn that Jill isn't really rushing into things unprepared as much as we first thought.
There is a bigger and longer history here, so while it starts by feeling crazy and rushed, it isn't as crazy or rushed.
There is a lot to enjoy here, and I do so enjoy seeing the household find happiness and contentment in their roles
There is a bigger and longer history here, so while it starts by feeling crazy and rushed, it isn't as crazy or rushed.
There is a lot to enjoy here, and I do so enjoy seeing the household find happiness and contentment in their roles
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Leatherbound Hearts by Dar...
Last post by Caras pet - June 23, 2026, 07:02:38 AMI anticipated that you would choose a merge into A Conventional Affair as the ending of this one, but I really hoped for more Elise & Claire dynamics before that would happen 😿
Anyway, you did a really good job writing this, thanks for sharing.
Anyway, you did a really good job writing this, thanks for sharing.
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by Caras pet - June 22, 2026, 07:43:40 AMPart nine is up - andit's a dream
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Looking for a Story / Re: Looking for a story about ...
Last post by black_falcon_2002 - June 21, 2026, 10:12:46 PM #7
Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: How I Became Just Another ...
Last post by teanndaorsa - June 21, 2026, 10:02:46 PMAnother few episodes in our protagonist's indulgences up tonight, with a couple more in the queue. Enjoy!
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Latex Website Stories Feedback / Re: Leon City Stories by TheLa...
Last post by teanndaorsa - June 21, 2026, 10:00:50 PMAnother city story tonight, enjoy!
#9
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Leatherbound Hearts by Dar...
Last post by teanndaorsa - June 20, 2026, 10:29:10 PMLast part up tonight, enjoy!
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: W and The Lady of the Lake...
Last post by teanndaorsa - June 20, 2026, 10:25:17 PMPart 5 up tonight, enjoy!
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