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Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Re: Escape by Mikel

« Last post by feline on November 20, 2024, 03:50:53 pm »

I find myself with mixed feelings here.  I love how this story starts, such a wickedly simple idea, yet the mental image of everyone around her being so used to her bondage / escape practice that they just ignore her bound form and walk off, leaving her there...  yep, that's a fascinating way to start, and a wonderful idea!

But very soon she is playing with rope around her neck, that's a mental image that bothers and upsets me.  FAR to easy for that to go wrong.  I know its fantasy, its only a story, and I agree, but its still not a mental image that fills me with warm, happy and sexy thoughts.

I found great delight in her sleep / storage box, but found the story, and her use of the box felt a bit mechanical.  There wasn't a lot of feeling and emotion here, even though its such a lovely mental image, and so very fun.

Offering herself up as a slave if anyone can restrain her, well, it was inevitable that someone would pull that off sooner or later *sigh* silly girl, but on the other hand, she did get exactly what she wanted.

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Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Re: Reluctant Cam Girl by Servant Joanna

« Last post by feline on November 20, 2024, 01:29:43 pm »

I did enjoy this, although I felt the ending was a bit mean and excessive.  The rest of the story is very "light and fluffy", so it was a surprising ending.

There is no real sense of you being a fan of bondage in the story, but looking at the position, the talk of practice with the release method, it all screams quite a history with self bondage games, which adds an interesting bit of depth and history to the story.

As for the motivation comment, stories of people being driven by their fantasies and desires are common, and here the fantasy, the desire makes plenty of sense to me as an idea.  The work and planning that went into this, over quite a long time, speak to the depth of the desire.  The desire doesn't shine through in the story, but to me that makes sense, since the whole point is a very shy and body conscious woman trying to find a way to explore this desire and these feelings, which can only be done by "accident", by being "forced" into it.  So for me the actions speak for the desire.

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Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Re: Reluctant Cam Girl by Servant Joanna

« Last post by jackierabbit1 on November 20, 2024, 08:47:32 am »

I could so be up for about eighty percent of that, but with a hood on and no way to identify me in public though. Stretched out, bound and struggling, on display, helpless to cover up; all super hot elements to either be doing yourself, or even watching somebody else do them.

A fun follow up part-two might be getting called into HR at the office and being fired Monday morning, and then having to resort to being a cam-girl full time for a new career, possibly making a lifetime worth of cash in just a few short years. Imagine the sweet irony, canned from a forty grand a year position to earn ten times that while getting kinky just a few hours a week in fantastic locations, with a proper camera crew to both record the adventure and for safety. Then maybe for very special high paying customers doing custom scripted things, scenarios that they dreamed up, and you acted out for them. Strung up and playfully whipped, or tickled, or anything else you could dream up; so many possibilities...

Anyway, thanks for sharing a fun fantasy, Jackie.

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Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Re: Reluctant Cam Girl by Servant Joanna

« Last post by thepinkbishop on November 20, 2024, 07:57:06 am »

What a great short story. I loved the predicament and the twist at the end. My only quibble is with her motivation to do this stunt - I wasn’t completely convinced - but I’m glad she did.
I bet she’s in for an interesting few weeks as this goes viral.

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Erotic Stories Website Feedback / Re: The Handyman by Guy le Bouc

« Last post by le Bouc on November 19, 2024, 08:51:52 pm »

Apologies to anyone awaiting the next installment  ... I have the next chapter started but have just started a new career which is taking up all my time. I have also been struggling with some writers-block on how to move through the middle of Becky's prequel to the series. I have an ending in mind but getting from part 1 to part 3 (?) is taking some serious mapping (maybe I'm overthinking it). In any event I hope to make it both dramatic and fun, not to let anyone down. Thanks to all the readers! Any suggestions would be warmly appreciated 
Le Bouc

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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Too Clever By Half by Guy le Bouc

« Last post by le Bouc on November 19, 2024, 08:42:13 pm »

Thank you Bishop for the feedback!

This was a one-off for me as I’m the Dom in my relationship. I was inspired by Lockedup4eva's series (and hope to be reading more/new from him soon). I tried a 'less is more' approach with a focus on the character's interactions, and what is hidden, to build off of. I utilized Sofia Vergara as my muse for Alex, so hot when she's angry.

Au Revior,
Le Bouc

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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Subspace - Emma's Fetish Cruise Adventure

« Last post by teanndaorsa on November 19, 2024, 07:55:33 pm »

Part 23 up tonight, a little bit more denial for our protagonist :-)

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Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Reluctant Cam Girl by Servant Joanna

« Last post by teanndaorsa on November 19, 2024, 07:53:29 pm »

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storieslr/reluctant_cam_girl.html
Sbf; naked; cuffs; spreader; exhib; hum; reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

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Erotic Stories Website Feedback / Re: Late Night Ocean Skinny-Dip by Jackie Rabbit

« Last post by feline on November 19, 2024, 05:37:41 pm »

I am going to think on this, and see where my thoughts take me...  this is a very interesting question to consider...

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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sally's Subject by Jack Peacock

« Last post by feline on November 19, 2024, 04:12:02 pm »

After part 2 I am still mystified as to what is going on, still not at all sure what I think, but at the same time, I am fascinated by the questions all of this is raising.

The precautions taken when Denny visits, this is not normal behaviour.  Caution, keeping a secret, yep, that's understandable.  But this...  it doesn't tell us much at all, but it doesn't half hint at things!  Then we have the vague comments from Sally about what her investigations revealed.  Her guess comment at the end about his wife and his car...  we know he removed tracking from his car, but the comment and the reaction all suggest a great deal more happened.

There is nothing here to really suggest Sally is anything other than a monster in human form, but the little pieces and hints about Danny are starting to suggest, to hint, that he is far from the "innocent victim" that he seemed more like at the start.  But Sally didn't know all of this when he was selected, so we don't even have the justification of evil preying on known evil...

Perhaps more answers will appear with the next part, and perhaps not.