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#1
Halloween 26 / Re: The Institute 25: Hallowee...
Last post by Hugh_Lyon-Sack - Today at 04:26:51 PM
Another volume complete.

Please don't leave us waiting over a year for the next one.  (please?)
#2
Halloween 26 / Re: Halloween Latex Masks by T...
Last post by lockedup4eva - Today at 01:55:15 PM
I LOVE this so far and cant wait to see which way you take it!
#3
As it happens, I just started reading through Chapters 1-7 yesterday, and I like what I've seen yet :)

You put much effort into making this plausible and believable, the institute could be located in a village around me.

Your characters aren't overly deep yet, but as you choose Judith to be an observer for now, that was to be expected. (This is where your pen-name comes from?)

Anyway, I am looking forward to continue this story :)


BTW: I think you made River talk during the party ;)


#4
Quote from: Caras pet on October 09, 2026, 07:49:20 AM
QuoteAnd while some writers were definitely positive influences (Erika Moak and Tiggerstretch specifically for this story)

Hehe, you realize you just raised my expectations for this story again? ;)



QuoteAnd one of these things to avoid are characters devoid of interiority,

...and again? :P

You can throw dragons at me, trolls, speaking animals, aliens - or, to take your example - characters wearing latex 24/7, as long as the story in itself remains "believable"
So, if you want your character to wear latex 24/7, make the "latex" a parasitic alien (I am currently reading "Parasitic Love", sorry) or of some kind of exotic/advanced material (and the environment futuristic / otherworldly to match this).



well, chapter 25 is now out, I guess it's time to find out if the story is to your liking :)
#5
Trashcan Stories / Re: My Trashcan Stories
Last post by Junkyard Society - November 02, 2026, 09:01:15 PM
An 17 year old homeless girl lived with her 70 year old boyfriend in an suburb with old and run down houses where few lived. An 17 year old homeless girl lived with her 70 year old boyfriend in an suburb with old and run down houses where few lived and one day had the man and the girl been getting an clear, shiny, very wide, very thick, curved, grey and spotted balloon at an party store that had an anniversary party. The girl and the man who could not sleep was from 2AM until 6AM non stop pressing the loudly squealing, clear, shiny, very wide, very thick, curved, doodoo stinky,doodoo covered, grey and spotted balloon against an very wide, stinky, old and very thick doodoo that laid in the grass with trash and needles in the empty and dark suburb with old and run down houses where few lived. The girl and the man was then from 6AM until 9AM non stop grabbing the loudly squealing, clear, shiny, very wide, very thick, curved, doodoo stinky,doodoo covered, grey and spotted balloon in an quiet, empty, mold, dust and asbestos smelly dark house where trash laid everywhere. One wewek later  was the girl and the man who could not sleep was from 5AM until 8AM non stop pressing the loudly squealing, clear, shiny, very wide, very thick, curved, doodoo stinky,doodoo covered, grey and spotted balloon against an bunch of very wide, stinky, old and very thick doodoos that laid in the grass with trash and needles in the empty suburb with old and run down houses where few lived.
#6
Intros / Re: Greetings
Last post by Caras pet - November 02, 2026, 07:12:37 PM
Welcome aboard!

Its always nice to have the authors here to interact with :)
#7
Halloween 26 / Re: Hex Appeal by Jason Hunter
Last post by Caras pet - November 02, 2026, 07:09:05 PM
So, welcome then!

I feel honored tat you thought of me while writing this story, and even though its by far your longest story yet, a part 2 won't hurt ;)

...and if you ever need a proofreader, I may know someone who would sacrifice themselves for this ;D
#8
Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Re: Full Moon by MaypoleWalker
Last post by Jason Hunter - November 02, 2026, 07:02:05 PM
I really enjoyed this story, the anticipation and fear that Lisa felt during that first night and the silent pursuit really drew me in.
#9
Halloween 26 / Re: Don't Go in the Basement b...
Last post by Jason Hunter - November 02, 2026, 06:52:40 PM
Thanks for the feedback folks.

I wanted to try a story that leaned more heavily into the horror elements to honour the spookier side of the season, but I couldn't help rooting for April as the story continued. I started with the darker ending and started re-writing it before settling on keeping the two optional endings.

April seemed like a fighter to me, wanted to make sure she got her chance to get free.
#10
Halloween 26 / Re: Hex Appeal by Jason Hunter
Last post by Jason Hunter - November 02, 2026, 06:41:08 PM
Thanks for the feedback, it is greatly appreciated. I only just created this account, but I have followed the comments you've left for my other stories so far. I didn't start out with much of a plan when I started writing this one, but I did think of you as the word count started to climb higher and higher, and this is definitely the longest story that I've published to date. Hopefully this was a more satisfying read than some of my short ones ;)

Glad to hear that you liked the story and the characters, something tells me that they'll be re-appearing in the future for a follow-up.
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