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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by twistedsmile - Today at 12:01:09 AM07. "Satine" Commentary
Previously considered titles: "Sucker", for the fellatio and for Mark being tricked (again), but that kind of gave away the ending; "Silk", for the material of the maid's outfit. Then I was watching Moulin Rouge, and Satine is the name of Nicole Kidman's character. It kind of makes sense: it's French, and similar to silk, 'satin' alludes to the glossy material of the maid's outfit.
"Boos and Booze" - hi, my name is Twisted S. and I'm a pun-oholic
"Sophie was my sexy French maid" - callback to chapter 3; Mark's prize if he had won that game of Scrabble.
I felt bad about portraying Lottie as a drunken party girl in chapter 3, so she's much more sober and canny here (and who amongst us doesn't get a little sloppy on our birthday?). Zara was previously mentioned in chapter 4, from whose hen-do Sophie got her cowboy hat.
"Better watch your back, Mark" - I think this is the first time the narrator is actually named in the text of the series.
"This may have been a mistake." - I like to think of Sophie and Mark as like Bugs Bunny and Daffy Duck. Bugs is this mischievous imp, who always comes out on top. And if Daffy ever tries to declare that's it's wabbit season, he's going to end up getting shot in the face.
"Breakfast on Pluto" - the section titles are mostly movies beginning with 'B' that are about characters who cross-dress or are trans; Other titles I considered were 'Burning' as in 'Paris is', and 'Bus' as in Priscilla. But those felt like a bit of a stretch.
"She behaved herself all evening, not once breaking character" - we already know that Sophie likes to commit to a bit (chapter 4)
"runner-up prize from Scrabble night" - chapter 3, of course. Mark is being rather charitable framing his loss as being a runner up.
"Monieur, please, it is my first time." - like I said previously, I like to imagine Mark having very basic sexual fantasies, such as taking a woman's virginity. This scene was longer in an earlier draft.
The idea was this - Mark is drunk, so his sexual performance is really bad, but because he's so drunk he thinks his performance is really good. So the question is, how do you depict that, when telling the story from Mark's pov. So solution I came up with was to have Mark describing really good sex, but describing it poorly. Only it turns out there's a fine line between a well written and poorly written sex scene, and the more I exaggerated it to make the badness 'read', the more the whole thing felt like a farce. I think the 7 lines of dialogue get the same point across. And we still get the punchline: "last night was fun" / "you just about managed"
"That's why I 'par-lay fron-say' so well." - I never did an exchange program, but I did study French in school. What appears in this story is about as much as I can remember of it.
"It's not like you have to do an oral exam" - dramatic irony. For anyone unfamiliar, an oral exam is an exam where you have to hold a conversation in French (or whatever language). Naturally, us teenagers back in school had a good old laugh at the word 'oral'.
"she said she'd cut me if I tried to grab her boobs" - I meant this as a warning, like grabbing her boobs would distract her and she might nick him with the razor. Alternatively, you could read it as a threat.
This section does this weird, slipping through time thing. Adding proper connecting passages is just so tedious. "They got out of the bath and got dressed and" who cares! (My attention span is seriously fried)
"You have lovely long eyelashes..." - that's something an optician once said to me. What she meant was 'your eyelashes are getting in the way of the retinal camera'
"my lips painted a familiar shade of red" - Sophie's lipstick from chapter 1
"I was never the most masculine man" - Lola, by The Kinks ("I'm not the world's most masculine man")
"Burlesque" - starring Cher and Christina Aguilera; a film that doesn't seem to know what burlesque is (but what can I say, I have a soft spot for camp). These days, burlesque usually refers to a classy (or silly) striptease. Traditionally, the meaning was more like a parody performance - such as Sophie, dressed as a man, performing a parody of receiving a blowjob and cumming on Mark's face.
"She decided she was going to be French too." - it doesn't really make sense. It's mostly because Sophie has all the best lines
"scrolling on her phone" - foreshadowing (she wasn't just scrolling)
"Bon Appetit" - this one isn't a movie title. Manger, baby!
"I got down on my knees." - Lola, again
"yellow" - the real reason Mark doesn't go through with this is because I didn't want Mark's first pegging to be an after-thought on a crossdressing story - not when it could be a story all on its own! It's also a bit of a bait-and-switch, after all the anal build-up in chapter 6. Funny thing is, that refusal kind of imbues the act with a 'weight'. Like, textually, why is Mark so hesitant about getting pegged?
"Bound" - the Wachowskis' movie. Not crossdressing/trans, but it is a lesbian movie (see below).
"How about a cassoulet?" - a French dish, naturellement
"I didn't know you were into le femme." - I'll say at this point, all my characters are some degree of bisexual (whether they realise it or not). Mostly because it affords more story possibilities. This is - you guessed it - foreshadowing
"enjoying our bilingual game" - bilingual = two tongues. Like in French kissing. That's an etymology pun (I can't help it, it's a sickness)
"The rain... in Spain..." / "By George..." - My Fair Lady
Previously considered titles: "Sucker", for the fellatio and for Mark being tricked (again), but that kind of gave away the ending; "Silk", for the material of the maid's outfit. Then I was watching Moulin Rouge, and Satine is the name of Nicole Kidman's character. It kind of makes sense: it's French, and similar to silk, 'satin' alludes to the glossy material of the maid's outfit.
"Boos and Booze" - hi, my name is Twisted S. and I'm a pun-oholic
"Sophie was my sexy French maid" - callback to chapter 3; Mark's prize if he had won that game of Scrabble.
I felt bad about portraying Lottie as a drunken party girl in chapter 3, so she's much more sober and canny here (and who amongst us doesn't get a little sloppy on our birthday?). Zara was previously mentioned in chapter 4, from whose hen-do Sophie got her cowboy hat.
"Better watch your back, Mark" - I think this is the first time the narrator is actually named in the text of the series.
"This may have been a mistake." - I like to think of Sophie and Mark as like Bugs Bunny and Daffy Duck. Bugs is this mischievous imp, who always comes out on top. And if Daffy ever tries to declare that's it's wabbit season, he's going to end up getting shot in the face.
"Breakfast on Pluto" - the section titles are mostly movies beginning with 'B' that are about characters who cross-dress or are trans; Other titles I considered were 'Burning' as in 'Paris is', and 'Bus' as in Priscilla. But those felt like a bit of a stretch.
"She behaved herself all evening, not once breaking character" - we already know that Sophie likes to commit to a bit (chapter 4)
"runner-up prize from Scrabble night" - chapter 3, of course. Mark is being rather charitable framing his loss as being a runner up.
"Monieur, please, it is my first time." - like I said previously, I like to imagine Mark having very basic sexual fantasies, such as taking a woman's virginity. This scene was longer in an earlier draft.
The idea was this - Mark is drunk, so his sexual performance is really bad, but because he's so drunk he thinks his performance is really good. So the question is, how do you depict that, when telling the story from Mark's pov. So solution I came up with was to have Mark describing really good sex, but describing it poorly. Only it turns out there's a fine line between a well written and poorly written sex scene, and the more I exaggerated it to make the badness 'read', the more the whole thing felt like a farce. I think the 7 lines of dialogue get the same point across. And we still get the punchline: "last night was fun" / "you just about managed"
"That's why I 'par-lay fron-say' so well." - I never did an exchange program, but I did study French in school. What appears in this story is about as much as I can remember of it.
"It's not like you have to do an oral exam" - dramatic irony. For anyone unfamiliar, an oral exam is an exam where you have to hold a conversation in French (or whatever language). Naturally, us teenagers back in school had a good old laugh at the word 'oral'.
"she said she'd cut me if I tried to grab her boobs" - I meant this as a warning, like grabbing her boobs would distract her and she might nick him with the razor. Alternatively, you could read it as a threat.
This section does this weird, slipping through time thing. Adding proper connecting passages is just so tedious. "They got out of the bath and got dressed and" who cares! (My attention span is seriously fried)
"You have lovely long eyelashes..." - that's something an optician once said to me. What she meant was 'your eyelashes are getting in the way of the retinal camera'
"my lips painted a familiar shade of red" - Sophie's lipstick from chapter 1
"I was never the most masculine man" - Lola, by The Kinks ("I'm not the world's most masculine man")
"Burlesque" - starring Cher and Christina Aguilera; a film that doesn't seem to know what burlesque is (but what can I say, I have a soft spot for camp). These days, burlesque usually refers to a classy (or silly) striptease. Traditionally, the meaning was more like a parody performance - such as Sophie, dressed as a man, performing a parody of receiving a blowjob and cumming on Mark's face.
"She decided she was going to be French too." - it doesn't really make sense. It's mostly because Sophie has all the best lines
"scrolling on her phone" - foreshadowing (she wasn't just scrolling)
"Bon Appetit" - this one isn't a movie title. Manger, baby!
"I got down on my knees." - Lola, again
"yellow" - the real reason Mark doesn't go through with this is because I didn't want Mark's first pegging to be an after-thought on a crossdressing story - not when it could be a story all on its own! It's also a bit of a bait-and-switch, after all the anal build-up in chapter 6. Funny thing is, that refusal kind of imbues the act with a 'weight'. Like, textually, why is Mark so hesitant about getting pegged?
"Bound" - the Wachowskis' movie. Not crossdressing/trans, but it is a lesbian movie (see below).
"How about a cassoulet?" - a French dish, naturellement
"I didn't know you were into le femme." - I'll say at this point, all my characters are some degree of bisexual (whether they realise it or not). Mostly because it affords more story possibilities. This is - you guessed it - foreshadowing
"enjoying our bilingual game" - bilingual = two tongues. Like in French kissing. That's an etymology pun (I can't help it, it's a sickness)
"The rain... in Spain..." / "By George..." - My Fair Lady
#2
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by twistedsmile - July 13, 2026, 11:50:00 PM06. "Stretches" Commentary
The title is referring to the literal (muscle) stretches at the start of the story, and also the gradual stretching of Mark's... constitution.
There's a whole avenue of kink that involves putting things in butts. But I can't imagine Mark has had the pleasure when the series starts, and one does not simply jump straight into pegging - you have to ease into it (so to speak). But it didn't seem worth dragging out across multiple stories and besides I didn't have enough plot ideas to justify it. So we end up with three stories in one.
"I'm too tight!" - the old switcharoo. The back stretching is a payoff to the remark in chapter 4: "We'll have to work on that." 'that' being Mark's inflexibility.
"Sex contracts" - no disrespect to people who use such things, but they're a little too formal/serious for Sophie and Mark
"I didn't want you reading those books" - Fifty Shades of Grey. I haven't read them myself, but I remember there being a lot of discussion in the kink community about how it was a poor depiction of a BDSM relationship. Naturally Sophie wouldn't want Mark reading those books and getting the wrong idea.
"they make my inner goddess do backflips" - I remember a lot of jokes about lines like that
"I'm confiscating your tablet." - it was around this point I started to feel like Sophie was acting a bit too 'maternal' towards Mark. I tried to tone it down after that, and maybe made her meaner as a result.
"butt plugs that have an adorable, fluffy tail" - callback to chapter 5: "If she could have given me floppy ears and a tail."
"in the Christian way" - missionary, of course
Woman sticking her finger in a (straight) guy's butt during sex has become a bit of a cliche, I think. I really didn't have a lot to say about this particular act, so I just made a joke and left it at that.
"Come on, baby, just a little more" - the old double-switcheroo
"Like shitting in reverse." - a little gross. But accurate!
"S A F F R O N" - that one isn't going to pay off for a while
The neighbour was originally an older gentleman called George. But I realised it was more 'useful' to make him closer to Sophie and Mark's age (whatever that is). That's foreshadowing, by the way
"she can be a little d-dom" - that's probably too cute
"did she get herself a dog" - toldya that would pay off from chapter 5 ("A light came on in a neighbour's bedroom")
"Fuck you, not cool!" - Mark seems pretty upset. Wonder how Sophie's going to make it up to him in, say, chapter 7
"A L I E N (5 points)" - chapter 9 (I can't help myself)
"Fucking me, doggy style [..] Arching my back. Her lips on my neck." - callback/inversion of the sex scene from chapter 5
This ended up being the shortest chapter, despite technically being 3 stories. If I'm being honest, it was mostly a 'table setting' episode. Although, now that I think of it, there's not a whole lot of butt stuff in the chapters that have been posted to date. Well, I'm sure it'll come back around eventually
---
BTW, my previously mentioned 'other stories' - Brett & Darren - just went up, if you're interested.
The title is referring to the literal (muscle) stretches at the start of the story, and also the gradual stretching of Mark's... constitution.
There's a whole avenue of kink that involves putting things in butts. But I can't imagine Mark has had the pleasure when the series starts, and one does not simply jump straight into pegging - you have to ease into it (so to speak). But it didn't seem worth dragging out across multiple stories and besides I didn't have enough plot ideas to justify it. So we end up with three stories in one.
"I'm too tight!" - the old switcharoo. The back stretching is a payoff to the remark in chapter 4: "We'll have to work on that." 'that' being Mark's inflexibility.
"Sex contracts" - no disrespect to people who use such things, but they're a little too formal/serious for Sophie and Mark
"I didn't want you reading those books" - Fifty Shades of Grey. I haven't read them myself, but I remember there being a lot of discussion in the kink community about how it was a poor depiction of a BDSM relationship. Naturally Sophie wouldn't want Mark reading those books and getting the wrong idea.
"they make my inner goddess do backflips" - I remember a lot of jokes about lines like that
"I'm confiscating your tablet." - it was around this point I started to feel like Sophie was acting a bit too 'maternal' towards Mark. I tried to tone it down after that, and maybe made her meaner as a result.
"butt plugs that have an adorable, fluffy tail" - callback to chapter 5: "If she could have given me floppy ears and a tail."
"in the Christian way" - missionary, of course
Woman sticking her finger in a (straight) guy's butt during sex has become a bit of a cliche, I think. I really didn't have a lot to say about this particular act, so I just made a joke and left it at that.
"Come on, baby, just a little more" - the old double-switcheroo
"Like shitting in reverse." - a little gross. But accurate!
"S A F F R O N" - that one isn't going to pay off for a while
The neighbour was originally an older gentleman called George. But I realised it was more 'useful' to make him closer to Sophie and Mark's age (whatever that is). That's foreshadowing, by the way
"she can be a little d-dom" - that's probably too cute
"did she get herself a dog" - toldya that would pay off from chapter 5 ("A light came on in a neighbour's bedroom")
"Fuck you, not cool!" - Mark seems pretty upset. Wonder how Sophie's going to make it up to him in, say, chapter 7
"A L I E N (5 points)" - chapter 9 (I can't help myself)
"Fucking me, doggy style [..] Arching my back. Her lips on my neck." - callback/inversion of the sex scene from chapter 5
This ended up being the shortest chapter, despite technically being 3 stories. If I'm being honest, it was mostly a 'table setting' episode. Although, now that I think of it, there's not a whole lot of butt stuff in the chapters that have been posted to date. Well, I'm sure it'll come back around eventually
---
BTW, my previously mentioned 'other stories' - Brett & Darren - just went up, if you're interested.
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Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / The Nosy Roommate by CuffMee
Last post by teanndaorsa - July 11, 2026, 11:18:28 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
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Sbf; cuffs; hood; gag; stuck; caught; M/f; F/mf; toys; climax; cons; XX
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Sbf; cuffs; hood; gag; stuck; caught; M/f; F/mf; toys; climax; cons; XX
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Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Brett and Darren by Twisted Sm...
Last post by teanndaorsa - July 11, 2026, 11:17:39 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
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Sbm; mpov; caught; M/m; toys; gag; rope; cd; chastity; buttplug; cuffs; oral; cons; X
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M/m; mpov; M/f; cuffs; Sbf; Sbm; oral; clamps; sex; anal; mast; cons; XX
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Sbm; mpov; caught; M/m; toys; gag; rope; cd; chastity; buttplug; cuffs; oral; cons; X
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M/m; mpov; M/f; cuffs; Sbf; Sbm; oral; clamps; sex; anal; mast; cons; XX
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Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Aunt Sally's Farm by Gromet
Last post by teanndaorsa - July 11, 2026, 11:16:36 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
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F/f; Sbf; objectify; naked; susp; gag; force-feed; mast; caught; bond; rope; tattoo; cons; X
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F/f; Sbf; objectify; naked; susp; gag; force-feed; mast; caught; bond; rope; tattoo; cons; X
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Transformation Stories / The Synthetic Nanite Submissio...
Last post by teanndaorsa - July 11, 2026, 11:15:32 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
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M/m; transform; scifi; latex; M2f; mittens; gag; doll; petplay; mast; hum; conditioning; nc; XXX
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M/m; transform; scifi; latex; M2f; mittens; gag; doll; petplay; mast; hum; conditioning; nc; XXX
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Trashcan Stories / Re: My Trashcan Stories
Last post by Junkyard Society - July 11, 2026, 08:47:13 PMAn 18 year old girl lived alone in an abandoned and remote farm house none had gone into for 50 years. An 18 year old girl lived alone in an abandoned and remote farm house none had gone into for 50 years and one day had the girl been going back to the house with an shiny, clear, white, printed and round balloon she got the opening party for an nearby suburban shop. The sleepy girl with pulled down pants and her visible butt and her visible vagina was sitting on the loudly squealing, shiny, clear, poop stinky, poop covered, pee stinky, pee covered, white, printed and round balloon that laid in an toilet bowl in an stinky bathroom none had cleaned for 50 years from 4AM until 8AM non stop. The sleepy girl with pulled down pants and her visible butt and her visible vagina was sitting again on the loudly squealing, shiny, clear, poop stinky, poop covered, pee stinky, pee covered, white, printed and round balloon that laid in an toilet bowl in an stinky bathroom none had cleaned for 50 years from 22PM until 1AM non stop the next week.
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Looking for a Story / Re: 2 rival witches getting pu...
Last post by Geetwo - July 10, 2026, 10:02:36 PMSwitchMan
No, thank you and I hope you enjoy the old stories and any new ones I post on the Plaza in the future.
Geetwo
No, thank you and I hope you enjoy the old stories and any new ones I post on the Plaza in the future.
Geetwo
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Looking for a Story / Re: 2 rival witches getting pu...
Last post by SwitchMan - July 10, 2026, 03:54:53 PMThanks!
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Looking for a Story / Re: 2 rival witches getting pu...
Last post by icy - July 10, 2026, 01:12:14 PMthe link doesn't work properly. Probably because of the 2nd "https" in it..? You'll have to copy it like a text completely and paste it in the browser. Or maybe the link-tags help..?
https://web.archive.org/web/20241209233057/https://geetwostories.com/
https://web.archive.org/web/20241209233057/https://geetwostories.com/
Quote from: teanndaorsa on July 09, 2026, 10:29:12 PMQuote from: Geetwo on July 09, 2026, 08:39:27 PMSwitchMan
Thanks for that and for letting me know you've read and like my stories. I didn't know archive.org existed. To go to it, do I just enter my site name followed by that? I'm not really into new(ish) tech and my site was run by a friend who is.....!
Geetwo
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