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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: The Promise of the Holodec...

Last post by 2m - Today at 03:35:04 AM

neat it is going good still a bit tame i was thinking about the ball in the new one was going to end up somewhere else

i guess i am hung up on the diabolical uses of the transporter

like inflate a balloon in someone then beam a steel ball in the middle instant unremovable object (until you beam it out)

ooh and imagine someone peeing and you keep beaming in more pee so they cant stop it would be like that shampoo prank

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Maidbots.net stories feedback / Re: No Longer Alone by Gromet

Last post by Melissa M - December 13, 2025, 09:29:31 PM

Thank you for sharing.

The denial of release coupled with the whisper "You don't get to decide when" is the hottest part! It represents that exquisite, shiver-inducing feeling of being overridden sensually and safely. The power of being fully consumed and cared for by relinquishing all control is what makes that scene so compelling.

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Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Re: Testing the Queen's Pony G...

Last post by Melissa M - December 13, 2025, 08:31:06 PM

Wow, the sensory details are incredible: the tight armbinder, the blinders, the agonizing feet, the internal pressure from the intruders. I was completely immersed in Sylvae's intense experience. It really captured the feeling of being fully bound and challenged. Thank you for sharing.

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TrashcanStories Feedback / Domme Disposal Date by Shokola...

Last post by teanndaorsa - December 13, 2025, 07:45:06 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.trashcanstories.net/storiesad/domme_disposal_date.html
F/m; mpov; bagged; cuffs; breathplay; messy; food; sex; cons; X

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Maidbots.net stories feedback / No Longer Alone by Gromet

Last post by teanndaorsa - December 13, 2025, 07:44:13 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.maidbots.net/storieslr/no_longer_alone.html
F/f; MF/f; sexbot; bond; rope; blindfold; gag; toys; tease; climax; collar; slave; crop; punish; piercing; paddle; cons; X

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Transformation Stories / Stuff Me, Fill Me by Andie

Last post by teanndaorsa - December 13, 2025, 07:38:48 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/world/transformation/storiessz/stuff_me_fill_me.html
F/m; mpov; majick; bodymod; merge; cuckold; exhib; climax; mast; toys; tease; denial; sex; nc; XX

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Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Testing the Queen's Pony Gear ...

Last post by teanndaorsa - December 13, 2025, 07:37:52 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/testing_the_queens_pony_gear.html
F/f; majick; fantasy; ponygirl; armbinder; harness; corset; collar; buttplug; training; electro; gag; climax; toys; cons; X

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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Mona and Craig's Last Cam Show...

Last post by teanndaorsa - December 13, 2025, 07:35:51 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storieslr/mona_and_craigs_last_cam_show.html
F/m; Sbf; Sbm; remote; predicament; chastity; oral; collar; cuffs; toys; electro; clamps; gag; oral; stuck; cons; XX

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Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Re: Questionable Room Service ...

Last post by teanndaorsa - December 12, 2025, 10:16:06 AM

I know the premise of the hotel is very much far-fetched. I've always really enjoyed a good discovered in self-bondage story set in a hotel, but when writing my own version, I needed to add some element of explanation for it to feel a little less crazy to me, I guess. I went with it being unofficial with some of the staff seeing it as more of a chore, or even something they didn't participate in, with the hopes that would ground it a bit more and make it ever so slightly more plausible. 100 percent accurate and realistic though is not my style when writing smut, but I do still try to ground the stories somewhat.

Definitely more plausible and grounded than my own fantastical hotel setting. But then what is fantasy if not an excuse to hand-wave past practicality, budget and plausibility to get to the more interesting stuff that would follow on? We can imagine a world where someone has unlimited budget, time and a lack of constraints, and combines that with their kinks to let other people indulge too.

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Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Re: Questionable Room Service ...

Last post by Zeedrot - December 12, 2025, 08:54:06 AM

@feline:

Thank you so much for the wonderful and thorough comment. It means a lot that you took so much care and thought to write out your feelings on this story.

So a few things in response.

First off, there is indeed a sequel and it is in the queue for this site. Might be a little bit before it shows up though. A little tempering of expectations though. I did not originally have a sequel planned for this, but when enough people over on DA pushed for a sequel I happily obliged. The second part might feel a bit different though as a result. There are some more hand wavy moments and some tonal shifts I feel like. One could even say that I jumped the shark a little with it, and it has one or two twists that might not land well depending on a reader's tastes. *shrugs* People still seemed to like it over there, though, so hopefully you'll like it when it drops here.

As to your first question, I never really canonized who the person was that recommended the hotel. That said, my personal head canon (are writers allowed to call it that when it's their own story? Lol) is that the person was a longtime male business acquaintance she knew from her work and who had confided about their interest in bondage and the hotel over drinks at a recent professional conference. So, it was someone she wasn't attracted to, and who she wouldn't want to risk further muddying the waters in regards to professionalism. Honestly, Laura having the guts to go through with this is sort of insane in my book as well lol.

I know the premise of the hotel is very much far-fetched. I've always really enjoyed a good discovered in self-bondage story set in a hotel, but when writing my own version, I needed to add some element of explanation for it to feel a little less crazy to me, I guess. I went with it being unofficial with some of the staff seeing it as more of a chore, or even something they didn't participate in, with the hopes that would ground it a bit more and make it ever so slightly more plausible. 100 percent accurate and realistic though is not my style when writing smut, but I do still try to ground the stories somewhat.

This was actually the first time I tried to write with alternating viewpoints in the same single piece of erotic fiction. It was a good exercise for me, and I am really happy to see people seemed to respond well to the format. It did take me a bit longer than usual to write as a result, especially when editing to keep everything fairly cohesive across the perspectives. And the format also really helped me play into how these two characters were mirroring each other by assuming things about the other while having their own self-doubts on display.

As to Jo, I'm really glad people seem to like her and sympathize with her. She was a lot of fun to try to bring to life. And I really love to mix up expectations about how a dominant or submissive should be. We all pretty much expect a dominant/top to be confident and self-assured, I mean that is part of the allure often, but I think it is more fun, and arguably realistic, when on occasion a writer gives us a depiction of an unsure or self-doubting dominant, especially when the dominant character is new at it. It crops up a bit in my stories as a result.

And really happy to see someone appreciate the AC repair subplot/call back. I thought it would be a nice touch that would be hopefully a little humorous while also bringing a certain tightness to the narrative.

Also, thanks for the editing note! Always looking to improve. I'll go back to the original file and see about correcting it there.

Again, thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. It was really something to basically get to read a person's reactions to each part of the story as they went through it. Really means a lot to me. Thank you! And always feel free to ask questions.



@ teanndaorsa:

Glad to hear Jo felt fresh. And yeah there is definitely a need to suspend our disbelief about the premise of the hotel being kink friendly this way lol. Thanks for editing and posting it on here for me! This site has long held a special place in my kinky heart, so thank you for all you do to keep it going!



@ thepinkbishop:

Aww, happy to hear you enjoyed it. And I agree about Laura lol.