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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Bitche by Zoe Cordelier

Last post by teanndaorsa - Today at 10:08:02 PM

The story is pretty much exactly my favorite topic of all, but like several of Zoe's recently published stories, the scent of AI writing is all over it and it's missing the touch of a human.  Too many sentences which don't really match what's going on, and repetitive generic statements about the feeling of confinement.

I'm not against using AI to help with creative writing, but it requires a lot of careful prompting and editing to keep it from just being generically boring.

Really? I must confess that 'kinky dungeon tour guide' is a trope I have a soft spot for, so I gave this one a much closer read than most in the editing read-through, and that wasn't the impression it gave me. I get a fair few AI submissions these days, and they stick out like a sore thumb; the repetition they tend to most obviously is over-use of a limited set of euphemisms. They typically have a weird dichotomy where they draw from a much wider vocabulary, so you see words and phrases that stand out as unusual, and yet at the same time keep repeating patterns of phrases. Human writers do that as well, especially when there's a strong theme, but AI writing doesn't seem to have the self-consciousness that works to rein in overuse of any one word or phrase.

Anyway, I've seen a very broad gamut of writing styles, from authors of vastly differing talent levels, and more than a few written in a way that makes me wonder if the writer was feeling any passion at all while writing them. This one, however, to me seems very much "touched by a human", so much so that I have already read ahead the next two parts, and I can tell you that is rare, given the length of the editing queue! Each to their own, though.

#2

Trashcan Stories / Re: My Trashcan Stories

Last post by Junkyard Society - Today at 09:26:42 PM

An 18 year old homeless girl lived alone in an empty and quiet suburb where trash laid everywhere on the streets. An 18 year old homeless girl lived alone in an empty and quiet suburb where trash laid everywhere on the streets and one day had the girl been getting an shiny, blue,very thick, very wide and printed balloon at an downtown toy store that lay far away that had an opening party. The sleepy girl that could not sleep was from 4.00 AM until 8AM non stop brushing the shiny, loudly squealing, blue,doodoo covered, doodoo stinky, very thick, very wide and printed balloon that laid on an huge and very old doodoo that laid in the grass on an empty, dark and quiet street outside an old and ruined house. The sleepy girl that could not sleep was one week later from 8.00 AM until 12PM non stop again brushing the shiny, loudly squealing, blue,doodoo covered, doodoo stinky, very thick, very wide and printed balloon that laid on an huge and very old doodoo that laid in the grass on an empty, dark and quiet street outside an old and ruined house.

#3

BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Bitche by Zoe Cordelier

Last post by Kinkykusco - Today at 06:57:02 PM

The story is pretty much exactly my favorite topic of all, but like several of Zoe's recently published stories, the scent of AI writing is all over it and it's missing the touch of a human.  Too many sentences which don't really match what's going on, and repetitive generic statements about the feeling of confinement.

I'm not against using AI to help with creative writing, but it requires a lot of careful prompting and editing to keep it from just being generically boring.

#4

BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...

Last post by Caras pet - Today at 08:59:24 AM

Up to part 17 now, enjoy!

#5

BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: BDSM Boot Camp by The Tech...

Last post by Caras pet - Today at 08:57:54 AM

Up to part 14 now, enjoy!

#6

Latex Website Stories Feedback / Re: The Institute by Observer

Last post by Caras pet - Today at 08:57:14 AM

Up to chapter 21, enjoy

#7

Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Re: Davinda and Goliath by Nic...

Last post by teanndaorsa - Today at 12:07:53 AM

And should the author be reading here, you should know that I can't email you back to confirm it's been posted, or pass on feedback, because your email provider refuses to accept emails from me, treating them as spam. :-(

#8

Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Davinda and Goliath by NickHC

Last post by teanndaorsa - September 26, 2026, 11:45:20 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesad/davinda_and_goliath.html
MF/mf; ponygirl; ponyboy; crop; outdoors; costume; reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

#9

Dollstories.net stories feedback / Re: Premium Playthings by Bubu...

Last post by teanndaorsa - September 26, 2026, 11:45:05 PM

Returning to Premium Playthings this evening, couple more parts in the queue as well.

#10

BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / The Ex-Girlfriend by MisterWon...

Last post by teanndaorsa - September 26, 2026, 11:42:48 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/the_ex_girlfriend.html
F/m; FM/f; fpov; bond; straps; toys; mast; oral; rope; gag; buttplug; sex; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks