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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by Caras pet - Today at 12:51:42 PMPart 13 is up, this time featuring a threesome (not my cup of tea, sorry)
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: How Ethan Met Claire by Zo...
Last post by Zoé Cordelier - Today at 11:58:38 AMQuote from: feline on July 22, 2026, 04:52:56 PMTo the author, many thanks for posting the links! If I ever get caught up on my reading list backlog *snort* I shall have to have a look, since this is captivating, fascinating, and something quite special in the making!
Well, thanks I guess! *blush*
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Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Re: The Nosy Roommate by CuffM...
Last post by Caras pet - Today at 06:16:30 AMA nice start, thanks for sharing!
... maybe you have mentioned the terms "Hiatt" and "18 inches" one or two times too often?
... maybe you have mentioned the terms "Hiatt" and "18 inches" one or two times too often?
#4
Looking for a Story / Re: Stories About Twins
Last post by Caras pet - July 26, 2026, 05:57:57 PMIf you liked "The Box", you might also want to read the prequel: One Year At A Time
#5
Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / This Ride Never Stops by Zeedr...
Last post by teanndaorsa - July 26, 2026, 04:14:22 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.selfbound.net/storiessz/this_ride_never_stops.html
Sbf; machine; cuffs; dildo; clamps; toys; caught; F/f; rom; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks
https://www.selfbound.net/storiessz/this_ride_never_stops.html
Sbf; machine; cuffs; dildo; clamps; toys; caught; F/f; rom; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks
#6
Mummified Stories feedback / Games Couples Play by Jason Hu...
Last post by teanndaorsa - July 26, 2026, 04:13:57 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.mummified.net/storiesek/games_couples_play.html
M/f; mum; wrap; oral; blindfold; cuffs; bond; naked; collar; gag; spank; toys; sex; hood; rom; cons; XX
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks
https://www.mummified.net/storiesek/games_couples_play.html
M/f; mum; wrap; oral; blindfold; cuffs; bond; naked; collar; gag; spank; toys; sex; hood; rom; cons; XX
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks
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Dollstories.net stories feedback / The Vicar's Secret Doll by Gro...
Last post by teanndaorsa - July 26, 2026, 04:13:11 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.dollstories.net/storiessz/the_vicars_secret_doll.html
M/f; latex; doll; catsuit; hood; objectify; bond; straps; gag; rom; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks
https://www.dollstories.net/storiessz/the_vicars_secret_doll.html
M/f; latex; doll; catsuit; hood; objectify; bond; straps; gag; rom; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks
#8
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: The Good Neighbor by Finda...
Last post by teanndaorsa - July 26, 2026, 04:12:13 PMReturning to our neighbours tonight; part 12 will follow later in the week, enjoy!
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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: How Ethan Met Claire by Zo...
Last post by teanndaorsa - July 26, 2026, 04:11:32 PMQuote from: Zoé Cordelier on July 19, 2026, 05:33:11 PMThe other parts are in the queue, I hope.
They are indeed, second part of three is up tonight, enjoy!
#10
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by twistedsmile - July 24, 2026, 12:34:57 AM10. "Sub" Commentary
Sub - substitute, submissive
Alternative title: 'Switch', but that felt too obvious.
I love a story where a dom(me) is placed in the sub role. Taking power away from someone who is so used to being in control is extra delicious. Not to play armchair psychologist, but I think a desire for control is often defensive, and when you take that away, people don't handle it so well.
This one had to walk a fine line. We can't have Mark being 'too' good at being a Dom, or else readers would be left wonder why he doesn't do it more often, or why he 'settles' for being a sub. On the other hand, if he's outright bad at it, the whole story becomes one big joke. That's partly why this is three stories in one - we get to see him being bad at it, then slowly getting better; up until Sophie puts a stop to it.
"Red" - I originally had Mark using the 'red' safe-word back in chapter 7, when he declines being pegged. But I decided I wanted to save that for the start of this story, so that it could be used as a joke. I mean, if Mark is ever sincerely saying 'red' then something has gone very wrong; and it's just not that kind of series.
"Reversal" - but who's reversal-ing who?
"any idiot can tie a reef knot" - dramatic irony
"No, baby. You're doing great." - bit patronising
"sexy black lingerie [..] I'd gotten her one Valentines; the one that she'd only worn once" - I dunno why I'm so mean to Mark
"that cheap collar, the one that was too small on me" - chapter 5
"I had a plan" / "The gag was too small." - not a great plan. I mean, he's clearly making it up as he goes.
"What've you lost, baby?" - definitely not taking him seriously
"Remember, we did the--" / "Oh yeah!" - I always liked in Doctor Who when they imply that The Doctor and companion had adventures off-screen that we the viewers never get to see. Makes the world feel 'bigger'.
"I couldn't find it in th--" - she was definitely lying about the vibrator being in the bathroom. She just wanted to get him out of the room so she could escape.
"back in the garage. Deja vu." - chapter 1
"without the heels the ceiling chain wasn't long enough" - I like the idea of Sophie dominating Mark while being physically a lot smaller than him. I dunno, I just find it really endearing. I was going to mention it in chapter 1, but couldn't find a place for it that didn't feel clunky.
"what now, 'master'?" - she's trying to be patronising to hide the fact she's genuinely off-balance
"an expression of quiet confidence, a little smirk, like a movie star." - I should have said 'like James Bond'. Would have been a good foreshadowing for chapter 12
"turnabout's fair play, darling." - I dunno why Mark's dom-sona is so camp
"Jammy dodger" - don't know if they have those outside of the UK. It's a type of biscuit with - get this - jam in the middle! Lovely with a cup of tea.
"we-moo fiss fuckin kahg." - stories often have gagged characters making indistinct 'mphf' sounds, but I find you can be quite articulate if you're determined enough
"I was still the one in charge here." - if you say so, buddy
"stick to what you're good at - being my sexy play thing" - she's being a little manipulative here. Because he did almost get her and she knows it. She really doesn't want him to try again.
"Red" - this title is an intentional fake-out; it's a callback to chapter 4, where section title 'Yellow' presaged the use of that safe word. In this case, 'red' alternately refers to the red of Sophie's spanked arse, or perhaps her embarrassed/flushed face.
"please... stop." - it took me a while to figure out the ending. There's a lot going on behind those two words:
In the first story, she's clearly not taking it seriously. In the second she starts off not taking it seriously, but Marks actually gets her a little... until he messes it up. But when we get to the third story, she's fully trapped, no escape, and in this very vulnerable, exposed position. The spanking takes her by surprise - not the thing itself, but her reaction to it.
I think people can get a lot of arousal from cognitive dissonance. You have this image of yourself, such as, you're the dom(me), you're the one in charge. And then, when you're tied down, helpless, and spanked, that violation of your sense of self is distressing in a way that is, paradoxically, intensely sexually arousing.
By the end, Sophie's actually caught up in it, and she's about to orgasm. But Mark tells her that if she wants to orgasm she has to ask permission - she has to truly submit to him. And that, she cannot do.
So what choice does she have? She can't use the safe word - or rather, she won't - because the safe word is a tool of the submissive (and perhaps she thinks it would make her look weak). Instead, she just says "stop". No safe word, just stop. Because she knows Mark will do as she says. Because she is still his Domme - she's still the one in control. And he stops.
"It had put bad thoughts in her head." - without putting to fine a point on it, the situation she was in was evocative of being sexually assaulted. At the same time, I didn't want that to be the reason she wanted to stop; that'd be a bit dark for this series. The "kind of exciting" comment was hedging that point.
"I didn't really like being spanked either" - she's clearly lying
"I told her it was because I'm a feminist." - listen, I'm not about to mansplain feminism. I guess the point/joke was that feminism doesn't mean treating all women like delicate little princesses. If a woman wants to be spanked then the feminist thing is to go ahead and give a good old spanking.
10.5 "Inspiration" Commentary
This was basically me (the writer) working through possible stories ideas. Anything they agree on may come up later, anything they reject is unlikely to come up (but you never know). As always, I'm not trying to yuck anyone's yum.
"that scene where fox robin hood was in chains" - I think Disney's Robin Hood was a furry awakening for a lot of people. And there really was something about when he was in chains; he just looked so defeated. I got a similar 'funny feeling' about the jester getting chained up in Hunchback
"I find toes weird" - sorry
"vore" - I'm not ruling it out
"how would you like to be spit roasted" - that was a bit of a forced transition to get to the threesome foreshadowing
"Ponygirl." - I can't help myself
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That's the last one for now. I'll be back some time after Chapter 15 goes up...
Sub - substitute, submissive
Alternative title: 'Switch', but that felt too obvious.
I love a story where a dom(me) is placed in the sub role. Taking power away from someone who is so used to being in control is extra delicious. Not to play armchair psychologist, but I think a desire for control is often defensive, and when you take that away, people don't handle it so well.
This one had to walk a fine line. We can't have Mark being 'too' good at being a Dom, or else readers would be left wonder why he doesn't do it more often, or why he 'settles' for being a sub. On the other hand, if he's outright bad at it, the whole story becomes one big joke. That's partly why this is three stories in one - we get to see him being bad at it, then slowly getting better; up until Sophie puts a stop to it.
"Red" - I originally had Mark using the 'red' safe-word back in chapter 7, when he declines being pegged. But I decided I wanted to save that for the start of this story, so that it could be used as a joke. I mean, if Mark is ever sincerely saying 'red' then something has gone very wrong; and it's just not that kind of series.
"Reversal" - but who's reversal-ing who?
"any idiot can tie a reef knot" - dramatic irony
"No, baby. You're doing great." - bit patronising
"sexy black lingerie [..] I'd gotten her one Valentines; the one that she'd only worn once" - I dunno why I'm so mean to Mark
"that cheap collar, the one that was too small on me" - chapter 5
"I had a plan" / "The gag was too small." - not a great plan. I mean, he's clearly making it up as he goes.
"What've you lost, baby?" - definitely not taking him seriously
"Remember, we did the--" / "Oh yeah!" - I always liked in Doctor Who when they imply that The Doctor and companion had adventures off-screen that we the viewers never get to see. Makes the world feel 'bigger'.
"I couldn't find it in th--" - she was definitely lying about the vibrator being in the bathroom. She just wanted to get him out of the room so she could escape.
"back in the garage. Deja vu." - chapter 1
"without the heels the ceiling chain wasn't long enough" - I like the idea of Sophie dominating Mark while being physically a lot smaller than him. I dunno, I just find it really endearing. I was going to mention it in chapter 1, but couldn't find a place for it that didn't feel clunky.
"what now, 'master'?" - she's trying to be patronising to hide the fact she's genuinely off-balance
"an expression of quiet confidence, a little smirk, like a movie star." - I should have said 'like James Bond'. Would have been a good foreshadowing for chapter 12
"turnabout's fair play, darling." - I dunno why Mark's dom-sona is so camp
"Jammy dodger" - don't know if they have those outside of the UK. It's a type of biscuit with - get this - jam in the middle! Lovely with a cup of tea.
"we-moo fiss fuckin kahg." - stories often have gagged characters making indistinct 'mphf' sounds, but I find you can be quite articulate if you're determined enough
"I was still the one in charge here." - if you say so, buddy
"stick to what you're good at - being my sexy play thing" - she's being a little manipulative here. Because he did almost get her and she knows it. She really doesn't want him to try again.
"Red" - this title is an intentional fake-out; it's a callback to chapter 4, where section title 'Yellow' presaged the use of that safe word. In this case, 'red' alternately refers to the red of Sophie's spanked arse, or perhaps her embarrassed/flushed face.
"please... stop." - it took me a while to figure out the ending. There's a lot going on behind those two words:
In the first story, she's clearly not taking it seriously. In the second she starts off not taking it seriously, but Marks actually gets her a little... until he messes it up. But when we get to the third story, she's fully trapped, no escape, and in this very vulnerable, exposed position. The spanking takes her by surprise - not the thing itself, but her reaction to it.
I think people can get a lot of arousal from cognitive dissonance. You have this image of yourself, such as, you're the dom(me), you're the one in charge. And then, when you're tied down, helpless, and spanked, that violation of your sense of self is distressing in a way that is, paradoxically, intensely sexually arousing.
By the end, Sophie's actually caught up in it, and she's about to orgasm. But Mark tells her that if she wants to orgasm she has to ask permission - she has to truly submit to him. And that, she cannot do.
So what choice does she have? She can't use the safe word - or rather, she won't - because the safe word is a tool of the submissive (and perhaps she thinks it would make her look weak). Instead, she just says "stop". No safe word, just stop. Because she knows Mark will do as she says. Because she is still his Domme - she's still the one in control. And he stops.
"It had put bad thoughts in her head." - without putting to fine a point on it, the situation she was in was evocative of being sexually assaulted. At the same time, I didn't want that to be the reason she wanted to stop; that'd be a bit dark for this series. The "kind of exciting" comment was hedging that point.
"I didn't really like being spanked either" - she's clearly lying
"I told her it was because I'm a feminist." - listen, I'm not about to mansplain feminism. I guess the point/joke was that feminism doesn't mean treating all women like delicate little princesses. If a woman wants to be spanked then the feminist thing is to go ahead and give a good old spanking.
10.5 "Inspiration" Commentary
This was basically me (the writer) working through possible stories ideas. Anything they agree on may come up later, anything they reject is unlikely to come up (but you never know). As always, I'm not trying to yuck anyone's yum.
"that scene where fox robin hood was in chains" - I think Disney's Robin Hood was a furry awakening for a lot of people. And there really was something about when he was in chains; he just looked so defeated. I got a similar 'funny feeling' about the jester getting chained up in Hunchback
"I find toes weird" - sorry
"vore" - I'm not ruling it out
"how would you like to be spit roasted" - that was a bit of a forced transition to get to the threesome foreshadowing
"Ponygirl." - I can't help myself
---
That's the last one for now. I'll be back some time after Chapter 15 goes up...
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