Subspace - Emma's Fetish Cruise Adventure

[teanndaorsa]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure1.html
F/f; fpov; bond; chastity; cruise; collar; public; cuffs; corset; hobble; clamps; cons; X

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure2.html
F/f; fpov; bond; chastity; maid; cuffs; clamps; boots; hood; sendep; collar; oral; buttplug; public; gag; predicament; tens; crop; electro; permanent; corset; cons; XX

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure3.html
F/f; latex; corset; chastity; feet; public; mast; hum; cuffs; chain; collar; gag; bodymod; lactate; switch; cons; reluct; XX

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure4.html
F/f+; bond; chastity; public; hum; bodymod; lactate; switch; corset; gag; milking; collar; cuffs; costume; buttplug; catgirl; naked; cage; messy; cruise; cons; XX

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure5.html
F/f; F+/f; fpov; chastity; bond; susp; cuffs; shave; feet; tickle; naked; maid; strapon; anal; pegging; gag; cons; XX

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure6.html
F/f; F/mf; F/f+; fpov; bond; chastity; strip; public; switch; pillory; bench; cuffs; cane; fucking-machine; machine; oral; straps; armbinder; strappado; crop; competition; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

[teanndaorsa]

Part 2 up tonight.

[bentbliss]

Thank you Teanna for posting them.

I know one person sent feedback that was forwarded to me.

As she pointed out the second part should be up and parts 3 and 4 have been submitted. I am half way through my first rough draft of part 5. Hopefully plenty more to come for those who like it so far.

[jjoobb]

I just wanted to say "Wow, thank you". I have a real soft spot for switches and I'm loving this

Thanks

[bentbliss]

Thanks. There is more to come.

[teanndaorsa]

Indeed, parts 3 and 4 to enjoy tonight...

[deffake]

Enjoyed this. Coming more?

[bentbliss]

Enjoyed this. Coming more?

Thanks. The next two parts are in queue. With Halloween, server changes, and it sounded like a lot of submissions at once they will hopefully be up soon.

[teanndaorsa]

Enjoyed this. Coming more?

Thanks. The next two parts are in queue. With Halloween, server changes, and it sounded like a lot of submissions at once they will hopefully be up soon.

  Sooooo many submissions. Bear with me.

[Pklus]

I absolutely love this one. To be honest the only reason I made an acc for the Forum is to comment on this one. Sub space is quite unique in combining the different perspectives and the story is so fluent. Please keep going and write some more

[bentbliss]

Thank you for the response. I am glad you enjoyed it enough to make an account. There is definitely more coming.  I am still writing the next scene and it is getting pretty long. So it will likely be broken up into 2 or 3 parts by the time I finish. There will be plenty more to follow as I plan to cover the entire cruise which is averaging 4 stories per day of the cruise. Though I expect some of the days to be slower. I also have ideas for Emma and some other characters post cruise if I wished to continue her story after but will finish the cruise adventure first and see where things are at.

[Pklus]

That’s good to hear. I’ve been checking regularly for updates. Is there some way to get notified?
Anyways you have my respect for writing so much and so well. It must take up a lot of your time.

And yes please write about the whole cruise even if it takes many years.

[bentbliss]

I tend to check the forums most everyday but I don't post updates much unless someone asks. There are some who have sent email feedback and have continued with asking for feedback and I have at times given them a preview whether it's an early or partial draft or my submitted form. So if anyone really wants they can ask at [email protected] I am pretty good at responding if it isn't in my junk folder and is clear you are asking about one of the stories.

As far as an update to where the next stories, part 7 and 8 have been mostly written for a few weeks  now. I had held off submitting  and actually added a small bit to part 7 last night that I think helps with what is going on in the first half of part 9 that I have written. Parts 7 and 8 are pretty intense compared to the others so far. Emma’s experience with Miss Keys sets a new tone between them and some other twists involved.

I will review part 7 again, likely today and submit it today or the next few days. I will hold off on part 8 for a bit longer though I don't plan to make any more changes other than a few rereads to catch any errors that i missed from my earlier ones. But I am not looking to pressure Teann or anyone else as there seems to be a lot of stories that came in which is a positive for the site. More stories for us to read. That also means I can't give an estimate when it would hit the site either.

As far as how much and how long it takes to write stories for me varies. I am a flawed individual with plenty of issues starting with my health both physical and mental. All my joints are pretty much toast. Last April I had joint replacement and fusion surgery in my left hand, which was the better of my two hands in terms of damage. I have a new surgeon, who is pushing for surgery on my right hand next month. He is moving slower in breaking up what is done which could mean multiple surgeries if I choose to keep going with more. So in that way it takes me more time than an average person to even type this out basically one finger at a time. So I imagine I will slow down more while I recover from that.

That is just one aspect of my slowness. Time, well I probably have more than most. I write so slowly due to physical limitations my mind tends to be so far ahead and distracted that it slows me down quite often. But these are just my own sob personal issues to deal with. I  am not a professional writer nor very good at it. I am still new and learning on top of it. So I do this for fun and to try and give back for the many stories I have read to give my own take on a genre that I am heavily interested in.

But thank you for responding. It is nice to hear interest and reminds me of how terrible I have been for years not offering kind words for many of the stories I have truly enjoyed. Though I have been trying to change that lately.

[Pklus]

That's nice and sad to hear at the same time.

I do understand the feeling of not having reached out to amazing authors. Like you I've never reached out for some kind words and I will definitely change that.

[bentbliss]

Not that I plan to do this often but I will give a bit of an update. My surgery is just hours away with the recovery and other stuff going on for the next couple of months left me to think about how I wanted to do things.

As of last last night, I have finished up to part 10 of Subspace: Emma's Fetish Cruise Adventure. As I don't know how long it will take me to actively write again, I plan to release them separately over time spreading out when they appear here. That will hopefully shorten time between each new story before I get the next written.

For now It's Good to be the Queen part 3 should come out first before Subspace part 7. They both have been submitted with part 7 resubmitted with the email glitch Teann had. I know many don't read the other series as it is quite different and not everyones flavor. But figured I would mention it if you notice it first and wonder where the next part of this series is. They are coming, I don't know how many other stories are submitted in between from other authors. I don't have solid dates between submissions but I figure part 8 will be submitted in the next couple weeks if not earlier.

As to some of my other thoughts on this series, I will start with Emma is the focus of those titled with Emma's Fetish Cruise. But my intention was also to also write other people's stories during this and possibly future and past cruises. Most of the well characters have backgrounds and stories to share. You will meet plenty of people who will likely have their own stories told, maybe not as extensive as Emma's. The crux I have is wanting to share and open up people's various pasts without drowning out the stories about Emma you want to read. Some of backgrounds can be written in a form that works for the site and others less so unless I get creative enough. At least when I read books and stories, I often want to know certain insights and past history that is alluded to by other characters As of now I have ideas for a couple of those I have introduced and one for one introduced in part 9. Problem with some of these stories is they are totally darker which I get requests for but many also don't want. I will probably write some or most just for those who want character depth of some while trying to balance motivation and past histories of each individual relevant to the stories without it being a boring wall of text or completely detracting from the story. It's something I've seen done once in awhile while wishing it was done more often. So it is new territory to try for me.

While this will remain my main series until I finish the cruise, I have a list with 15 ideas for other stories that don't fit in this one at the moment along with a second series already here. My next dilemma is to figure out what I write next. Taking small breaks from this series helps at times especially when I get frustrated. In part 9 there is a lot of emotions that trigger negative ones in me so much that I literally didn't touch it for nearly a week nor did any other writing. So while I have the core of the next 4 or so stories pretty solidly mapped out, I still might write one or two other stories before I finish those. I know some people are hoping for faster. If it starts to feel like work or pressured, the less fun it is and likely the worse the story will be.

I shall see how I feel when things settle down in a few months. Maybe I will have written more for this by then. Mostly, I was letting those who care know the next 4 are getting delayed releases with the first (part 7) already submitted.