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Bondage => BoundStories Website Stories Feedback => Topic started by: teanndaorsa on September 01, 2022, 03:43:52 pm
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You can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure1.html
F/f; fpov; bond; chastity; cruise; collar; public; cuffs; corset; hobble; clamps; cons; X
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure2.html
F/f; fpov; bond; chastity; maid; cuffs; clamps; boots; hood; sendep; collar; oral; buttplug; public; gag; predicament; tens; crop; electro; permanent; corset; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure3.html
F/f; latex; corset; chastity; feet; public; mast; hum; cuffs; chain; collar; gag; bodymod; lactate; switch; cons; reluct; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure4.html
F/f+; bond; chastity; public; hum; bodymod; lactate; switch; corset; gag; milking; collar; cuffs; costume; buttplug; catgirl; naked; cage; messy; cruise; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure5.html
F/f; F+/f; fpov; chastity; bond; susp; cuffs; shave; feet; tickle; naked; maid; strapon; anal; pegging; gag; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure6.html
F/f; F/mf; F/f+; fpov; bond; chastity; strip; public; switch; pillory; bench; cuffs; cane; fucking-machine; machine; oral; straps; armbinder; strappado; crop; competition; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure7.html
F/f; F/f+; fpov; bond; chastity; cuffs; chain; fisting; collar; leash; prison; punish; naked; toys; buttplug; gag; dream; corset; public; oral; chair; straps; piercing; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure8.html
F/f; fpov; bond; electro; chastity; punish; whip; extreme; crop; rope; susp; collar; cuffs; spreader; oral; climax; cons; XXX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure9.html
F/f; fpov; bond; chastity; straps; naked; public; cuffs; drug; gag; latex; lactate; susp; doll; fucking-machine; chain; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure10.html
F/f+; M/f; bond; chastity; costume; gag; hucow; lactate; milk; ponygirl; hood; harness; cuffs; public; display; anal; oral; buttplug; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure11.html
F/mf; M+F+/f; bond; chastity; collar; leash; latex; catsuit; corset; cd; M2f; nipple; clamps; climax; tease; costume; cuffs; mittens; hood; gag; buttplug; cockring; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure12.html
F/mf+; F/f; bond; chastity; costume; collar; cuffs; yoke; gag; latex; hood; public; frame; clamps; mast; whip; catsuit; climax; anal; pillory; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure13.html
F/f; fpov; bond; chastity; straps; doll; maid; costume; Sbm; hood; electro; toys; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure14.html
F/f; F/mf+; bond; chastity; chastity-bra; cd; M2f; collar; leash; cuffs; bench; spank; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure15.html
F/mf+; bond; chastity; chastity-bra; cuffs; collar; public; pillory; feet; frame; toys; buttplug; tg; M2f; fisting; clamps; cons; reluct; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure16.html
F/f+; bond; chastity; cuffs; oral; susp; rimming; naked; cane; doll; F2doll; straitjacket; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure17.html
F/f; bond; chastity; enclosed; gasmask; enclosed; lactate; bodymod; enema; cuffs; electro; prison; armbinder; clamps; spandex; cons; XXX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure18.html
F+/f+; F+/m; bond; chastity; armbinder; leash; prison; cuffs; chain; toys; whip; machine; tentacles; gag; chair; predicament; torment; susp; mask; milking; sawhorse; clamps; hood; buttplug; punish; oral; cons; reluct; XXX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/subspace_emmas_fetish_cruise_adventure19.html
F/f+; M+/f; chastity; doll; electro; maid; costume; naked; corset; oral; punishment; strapon; switch; feet; bond; cons; reluct; nc; XX
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks ;)
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Part 2 up tonight.
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Thank you Teanna for posting them.
I know one person sent feedback that was forwarded to me.
As she pointed out the second part should be up and parts 3 and 4 have been submitted. I am half way through my first rough draft of part 5. Hopefully plenty more to come for those who like it so far.
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I just wanted to say "Wow, thank you". I have a real soft spot for switches and I'm loving this
Thanks
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Thanks. There is more to come.
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Indeed, parts 3 and 4 to enjoy tonight...
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Enjoyed this. Coming more?
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Enjoyed this. Coming more?
Thanks. The next two parts are in queue. With Halloween, server changes, and it sounded like a lot of submissions at once they will hopefully be up soon.
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Enjoyed this. Coming more?
Thanks. The next two parts are in queue. With Halloween, server changes, and it sounded like a lot of submissions at once they will hopefully be up soon.
:'( Sooooo many submissions. Bear with me.
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I absolutely love this one. To be honest the only reason I made an acc for the Forum is to comment on this one. Sub space is quite unique in combining the different perspectives and the story is so fluent. Please keep going and write some more
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Thank you for the response. I am glad you enjoyed it enough to make an account. There is definitely more coming. I am still writing the next scene and it is getting pretty long. So it will likely be broken up into 2 or 3 parts by the time I finish. There will be plenty more to follow as I plan to cover the entire cruise which is averaging 4 stories per day of the cruise. Though I expect some of the days to be slower. I also have ideas for Emma and some other characters post cruise if I wished to continue her story after but will finish the cruise adventure first and see where things are at.
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That’s good to hear. I’ve been checking regularly for updates. Is there some way to get notified?
Anyways you have my respect for writing so much and so well. It must take up a lot of your time.
And yes please write about the whole cruise even if it takes many years.
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I tend to check the forums most everyday but I don't post updates much unless someone asks. There are some who have sent email feedback and have continued with asking for feedback and I have at times given them a preview whether it's an early or partial draft or my submitted form. So if anyone really wants they can ask at [email protected]. I am pretty good at responding if it isn't in my junk folder and is clear you are asking about one of the stories.
As far as an update to where the next stories, part 7 and 8 have been mostly written for a few weeks now. I had held off submitting and actually added a small bit to part 7 last night that I think helps with what is going on in the first half of part 9 that I have written. Parts 7 and 8 are pretty intense compared to the others so far. Emma’s experience with Miss Keys sets a new tone between them and some other twists involved.
I will review part 7 again, likely today and submit it today or the next few days. I will hold off on part 8 for a bit longer though I don't plan to make any more changes other than a few rereads to catch any errors that i missed from my earlier ones. But I am not looking to pressure Teann or anyone else as there seems to be a lot of stories that came in which is a positive for the site. More stories for us to read. That also means I can't give an estimate when it would hit the site either.
As far as how much and how long it takes to write stories for me varies. I am a flawed individual with plenty of issues starting with my health both physical and mental. All my joints are pretty much toast. Last April I had joint replacement and fusion surgery in my left hand, which was the better of my two hands in terms of damage. I have a new surgeon, who is pushing for surgery on my right hand next month. He is moving slower in breaking up what is done which could mean multiple surgeries if I choose to keep going with more. So in that way it takes me more time than an average person to even type this out basically one finger at a time. So I imagine I will slow down more while I recover from that.
That is just one aspect of my slowness. Time, well I probably have more than most. I write so slowly due to physical limitations my mind tends to be so far ahead and distracted that it slows me down quite often. But these are just my own sob personal issues to deal with. I am not a professional writer nor very good at it. I am still new and learning on top of it. So I do this for fun and to try and give back for the many stories I have read to give my own take on a genre that I am heavily interested in.
But thank you for responding. It is nice to hear interest and reminds me of how terrible I have been for years not offering kind words for many of the stories I have truly enjoyed. Though I have been trying to change that lately.
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That's nice and sad to hear at the same time.
I do understand the feeling of not having reached out to amazing authors. Like you I've never reached out for some kind words and I will definitely change that.
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Not that I plan to do this often but I will give a bit of an update. My surgery is just hours away with the recovery and other stuff going on for the next couple of months left me to think about how I wanted to do things.
As of last last night, I have finished up to part 10 of Subspace: Emma's Fetish Cruise Adventure. As I don't know how long it will take me to actively write again, I plan to release them separately over time spreading out when they appear here. That will hopefully shorten time between each new story before I get the next written.
For now It's Good to be the Queen part 3 should come out first before Subspace part 7. They both have been submitted with part 7 resubmitted with the email glitch Teann had. I know many don't read the other series as it is quite different and not everyones flavor. But figured I would mention it if you notice it first and wonder where the next part of this series is. They are coming, I don't know how many other stories are submitted in between from other authors. I don't have solid dates between submissions but I figure part 8 will be submitted in the next couple weeks if not earlier.
As to some of my other thoughts on this series, I will start with Emma is the focus of those titled with Emma's Fetish Cruise. But my intention was also to also write other people's stories during this and possibly future and past cruises. Most of the well characters have backgrounds and stories to share. You will meet plenty of people who will likely have their own stories told, maybe not as extensive as Emma's. The crux I have is wanting to share and open up people's various pasts without drowning out the stories about Emma you want to read. Some of backgrounds can be written in a form that works for the site and others less so unless I get creative enough. At least when I read books and stories, I often want to know certain insights and past history that is alluded to by other characters As of now I have ideas for a couple of those I have introduced and one for one introduced in part 9. Problem with some of these stories is they are totally darker which I get requests for but many also don't want. I will probably write some or most just for those who want character depth of some while trying to balance motivation and past histories of each individual relevant to the stories without it being a boring wall of text or completely detracting from the story. It's something I've seen done once in awhile while wishing it was done more often. So it is new territory to try for me.
While this will remain my main series until I finish the cruise, I have a list with 15 ideas for other stories that don't fit in this one at the moment along with a second series already here. My next dilemma is to figure out what I write next. Taking small breaks from this series helps at times especially when I get frustrated. In part 9 there is a lot of emotions that trigger negative ones in me so much that I literally didn't touch it for nearly a week nor did any other writing. So while I have the core of the next 4 or so stories pretty solidly mapped out, I still might write one or two other stories before I finish those. I know some people are hoping for faster. If it starts to feel like work or pressured, the less fun it is and likely the worse the story will be.
I shall see how I feel when things settle down in a few months. Maybe I will have written more for this by then. Mostly, I was letting those who care know the next 4 are getting delayed releases with the first (part 7) already submitted.
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Just put part 7 up for everyone to enjoy
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Demmmm this is good. I dont know what gonna happened but i just hoping at the end of the longggggh stories , emma and miss keys will be together ;D
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Glad you enjoyed it so far.
Since the initial idea of the story in my head, Emma and Miss Keys ending has been pretty consistent. Some minor details have changed in how it ends especially with the changes of other characters as they come along. There is already planned resolution as well for Ophelia, Victoria, and Kit. Originally Nix was going to play a bigger part in things and will definitely be returning. I wrote myself into a hole on that one. For now Ophelia and Kit will be providing most of what I was planning long term for Nix.
There are more new characters to meet and more interaction with some from previous stories. As the title says, this is an adventure in which Emma will meet knew people and explore things. This will lead to different tones between stories and sometimes within. There will be twists and turns and ups and downs. There is more emotional and physical stories coming and more depth into many characters including Emma.
With that said, part 8 is the conclusion of the scene part 7 starts. I know some people are not keen to the intensity and maybe too violent for some. Just remember this is all consensual and Emma is a painslut and there will be stories that emphasize that. But this is a heads up for those who look forward to or concerned at slightly more extreme content than what you have seen so far. Part 8 which is titled, the Apprentice And The Three Lovers, finishes out the day that started in part 5.
Part 9 begins a new day as is much like part 5 in dealing with the aftermath of the previous day and setting up future events. It is a much more emotional story that starts delving into the background of one character and introduces another character and more. Don't want to give away too much. But the tone takes a drastic shift after 7 and 8s already massive change. Part 10 gets the first visit to the ranch. Part 11 is mostly written, just trying to get the ending in a way I like so I can finish the scene in part 12.
We are still very early into Emma's journey. Hopefully I can keep entertaining those who enjoy it through out.
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Another part up tonight for your enjoyment...
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Hey,
In hope your surgery went well and that you are on your way to recovery.
Loved the two new parts and looking forward to more
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Thanks for the thoughts. While I am still in recovery, my hand is a bit better than before and hopefully will continue. But it was only a partial fix so I will see what the future holds on that.
Part 9 which is titled An Unworthy Development is nearing the top of the queue and should be up soon. Part 10 is also submitted more recently but will give Emma’s first foray into the ranch on ship. Part 11 and 12 are written but still being cleaned up.
I also wrote a side story to a new character first introduced in part 9. It is currently its own stand alone story. But it is an origin story of sorts for the character and also introduces another potential future character. The story also adds a bit of background on Miss Keys that hasn't been explored yet. I haven't submitted it yet as I don't feel it is quite right. So I am sitting on it a bit to see if I feel I can improve it to felt better about it.
I have started part 13 and continue to add ideas and characters to potentially use as my notes continue to extend.
I am curious to see if people want to see more of certain characters or learn more about them possibly in their own stories.
But I am still working on the overall story, just a slower pace than I want. It's mostly a mental issue. Definitely moving forward with more coming.
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Part 10 up tonight, enjoy!
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A bit of an update as one year ago today the first two parts of this series were published on this site. It had a surprising positive reaction from a small group of people which was nice. As expected as it seems to happen to pretty much every other writer or story, the initial reaction dies off for various reasons. But I figure a few people at least wouldn't mind an update where things are at.
While only 10 stories have made it here so far, 11 and 12 have been submitted with 13 coming soon. I expect 11 to be available soon but I don't know how many stories from others are in queue ahead of it. I am currently trying to finish 15 in which I am at the end of the initial writing and debating some choices that would need rewriting.
The next portion of the story after 10 is split into two parts as their was more than expected again. Part 11 which I believe is titled 'Titclits and Footsie' introduces Greg and Macy as the submissive couple who won the draw for the date with Emma at the show later that evening. This story takes place with their initial meeting and goes through the events of dinner.
Part 12 which ended up titled 'Variety Show' continues with Greg and Macy's date through the show and the results of the little competition set up in 11 and ending with what had been a difficult day for Emma.
Part 13, 'Maid Duty' leaves Emma dealing with the aftermath of the previous day before earning her maid uniform. Emma also witnesses the lunch between Ophelia and Victoria where there is more background found out about both including how Ophelia ended up with Victoria in the first place.
The same happened for 14 and 15 as 7 and 8 and 11 and 12 even though when I started 14 I wasn't sure I had enough to write a full story properly. Turned out there was a lot of interaction and dialog with plenty of characters from previous stories as well as new ones. Two new worshipers are inducted during the Unicorn Goddess chastity drive. Mostly it advances the stories to a few side characters especially from 6 and sets up future possibilities.
I have not officially started part 16 as I haven't finished 15 fully yet though it is close. I have thought about it extensively and wouldn't be surprised if it becomes two parts as well. Emma will be a guest for this first fashion show but she will have a special escort for it and the after party.
I have been updating my document for this series as it is a huge help in tracking things as long as I maintain it. I would estimate at the current pace of my writing, I have written about 20 to 25 percent of the story I plan to tell. Since you haven't seen all that I have written it means you have read significantly less. The calendar is useful as I slot in scenes. Their are plenty of open slots still but that is intentional for now. Major scenes that are time sensitive are slotted. Important scenes that are not time sensitive have been slotted and get changed on when they will be written based on new ideas or decisions made as I write stories. There is constantly new ideas for things to do and I have a list of those and not all things will make it in but better to have too many ideas than not enough.
Tracking and keeping bios of main characters and the side characters has been useful so I don't have to go back as often to refresh who and what people are and what I intended them to be. There is a balance I am still learning and working on as I want my characters to feel real and less generic. Some are meant to be more generic and filler as a tool to tell the story. But I want people to care about the characters and be invested. As I read plenty of books, the more I am invested in the characters as well as the world, the more I enjoy them. So I am trying to recreate that aspect I enjoy when reading others.
Dialogue. It's a tricky thing from a couple stand points. I have gotten plenty of positive comments about mine from the stories so far. It really feels like a double edged sword. It is useful when done right and can enhance a story. Some of my stories are a little too dialogue heavy that I am afraid of turning away people who don't like it. But I find it useful to help display the various personalities of characters and at times reveal important information even if it isn't obvious at first.
The other thing about dialogue is it takes me longer to write. The main reason is I go through the whole conversation in my head hundreds of times. Most often with tweaks and different variants. Even as I often finally type it, I still only get a sentence or two accomplished before I literally go through the whole conversation in my head again. Then I have to stop myself and restart the conversation and type in more. It's one of the main reasons I haven't written as much as expected. I have literally had all the conversations in my head hundreds of times before they are written and often much of those conversations are cut and not seen. I try to keep these in short story format so I can't really put in everything that goes through my head. So I am still working out balance.
Another thing that jumps out as I write is that my story telling is changing as I learn and understand and develop the plot and characters more. I am sure 10 is vastly different from 1. It isn't intentionally as much as I hope as it is growth. In many series I have read over the years, the early stories tend to be subpar compared to the later as the writer's idea and style take form more prominently. So I am sorry if these developments change people's interest overall especially in a negative way.
I still very much plan to finish. I have had an ending in mind since the beginning. It has just taken longer to get there than expected. The details are constantly changing because more people are involved and the individual characters are evolving as I write them. But my original base idea for the ending is still there. My hope is I cover up most of the loose ends I have and will create.
Another area many have commented on is the switch aspect from Emma. That will continue as it is an important part of Emma’s personality and that of the story. It isn't going anywhere even if a story or two are more focused her domme or submissive tendencies based on what is going on and who she is interacting with. It's another area of balance I am working through.
While many characters will develop throughout, this adventure or journey is still focused on Emma. While reasonably experienced in some areas at the start, she is truly on a path that will change her significantly physically, mentally, and emotionally. More of that has been coming out in recent stories and will continue. The crazy adventure she will experience be full of up and downs, turns and most definitely twists. I still wanted this to be a positive overall story but at the same time negative things happen and overcoming them are important as well. I am aware their are those who prefer happy endings. I get questioned a lot about less happy endings and I will likely have both cause as a reader I do enjoy both though they will be seperate entities and the happier ending more canon as I have ideas to continue her story after if I decide to.
A few scheduled or likely scenes to come in no particular order include more time at the ranch including puppy and pony play and possibly some more hucow. Emma as some have asked is bi and expected scenes with Master Robert and Zell are coming. Another demonstration or two with Janice as the two up the ante with each other and others. Some demonstrations with Miss Keys and others. More time in prison and the tortue chamber rooms. Role-play with Victoria. And the return of Nix. I know there was interest in more of her and that has always been planned. There are a few other things definitely planned but don't want to spoil them yet.
I am probably forgetting a bunch of things I planned to say but this has already taken me nearly 3 hours to type out. Hopefully those who still read them and look at the forums will continue to enjoy what is coming.
As an aside, early November I am going on a cruise. Sadly it isn't a fetish cruise as there are only a couple publicized that I have scene in any case. But this one may spark to give new ideas and more authenticity in the writing experience. The only other time I was on a cruise was 31 years ago. I turned 17 on the boat as it was about two weeks before I started my senior year of high school. Much different experience back then and while I had a vague interest back then in areas of BDSM, there was no internet at least in a practical or useful form nor easy access to information especially as a minor. So while I am enjoying a family vacation, I will be looking for ideas to enhance my stories.
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While only 10 stories have made it here so far, 11 and 12 have been submitted with 13 coming soon. I expect 11 to be available soon but I don't know how many stories from others are in queue ahead of it.
None! Ish. Up tonight :-)
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Part 13 up today, enjoy!
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Part 14 up tonight, 15 already in the queue (dum dum duuuuuum)
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Part 15 up tonight, enjoy!
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Part 16 up tonight, Merry Christmas!
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Aw, those still reading got a Christmas present.
I'll gift a small update to go with the season.
As 16 is out now, it was one of those that took longer than expected. I wrote about half the story and was unhappy with its tone and just saved it elsewhere and restarted from scratch. I'm at least happier with what you get to see. I have been looking forward to sharing more about Miss Keys even if it's small doses as some others have gotten plenty attention and will get more.
If you don’t want any potential spoilers in the direction things are moving then you might want to stop or skip the next few sections.
I will likely be submitting part 17 next week. Emma is back as epsilon in Subspace Prison. There are plenty of little things going on. Emma will get her first therapy session and a bit of a workout. There is some twists and hopefully fun.
Part 18 is written and getting cleaned up much like 17. I have been submitting them about a month a part but not a hard rule in general. Some were submitted in less time and a few were later especially with last second additions. (Looking at you part 13 as you almost didn’t get the dream in the beginning and another peak at Emma’s subconscious there)
Part 18 brings Emma with guests (those included Penny, Harumi and her boyfriend, and Emma’s new therapist?) on a personal guided tour of the torture chamber rooms by the warden. All of them experience one of various torments and become attractions themselves for a few hours for the general tours taking place that afternoon.
I am slowly working on part 19. This time of year brings lots of fatigue and elevated discomfort, so less time doing anything useful or fun. On top of that, with how parts 17 and 18 went, I didn’t want to pile on Emma too hard as you will find it is a rough and intense day for her. So I will move what I originally scheduled to later in the series. Thankfully I have a calendar and ideas slotted in and openings. I am revising it plenty as only a few of my plans are time sensitive allowing me to try to line up things ahead of time.
When I decided to switch what I was going to do, I started working on a different story while I decided on a new direction. It's one of the ideas that has been in my head awhile and I have started it in hopes it distracts me less when I write this one. Though I get distracted by plenty of future ideas coming for Emma and the others.
Though what I am writing is subject to change, this story or a varation of it would happen somewhere in the series if it doesn't stay as part 19. So not going to give hints into it yet.
Merry Christmas and enjoy your holidays.
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Hi just wanna say thank you for sharing this story. You are very good writer in my pov maybe one of the reason is i like to read stories with f/f theme. I like all the chapter that you share here. But most of all i like the dynamic between emma and miss keys. I dont know how to elaborate it but i just love it . Cant wait for the next chapter to be up. May you have a great, good and fantastic day. Sorry in advance, im not good with english.
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Thank you for replying. The dynamic between Emma and Miss Keys is the heart of this series. It is what I have intended to be the backbone even when not at the forefront of each story. But other characters are very relevant and affecting the dynamic as well. The f/f was a direction I purposely took for most stories. Emma is very much bi and will have interactions that include men on top of what there has been. It will just be significantly less.
Thanks again for posting.
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Part 17 up tonight, enjoy
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And part 18, enjoy.
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You’re a geniusss ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️haha. New chapter is so fun to read and also scary at the same time with the torture setup for the tour. Is there a movie i would like to watch it tho and for some parts i do hope to see a picture cause some of the part i can’t grasped it in my mind as english is not my main language😅. I dont know how your brain can make this stories but i do love like it. Thanks a lot for sharing these. Hopefully there more to come.
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You’re a geniusss ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️haha. New chapter is so fun to read and also scary at the same time with the torture setup for the tour. Is there a movie i would like to watch it tho and for some parts i do hope to see a picture cause some of the part i can’t grasped it in my mind as english is not my main language😅. I dont know how your brain can make this stories but i do love like it. Thanks a lot for sharing these. Hopefully there more to come.
Thanks for the response and the nice comments. I do have moments some enjoy. I understand wanting pictures or movies to handle my descriptions. Unfortunately I am not an artist. I have pictures in my mind and many of those ideas stem from things I have seen or read over the years with my own take on them with new ideas mixed in. I wish my brain articulated my descriptions better as I get stuck with my normal literal and logical thought processes when I need to be more descriptive.
As you mentioned and most of the people who have responded here and privately, are not native English speakers. I find it interesting the number of international readers interested in my stories. It sometimes makes me question my writing to simplify certain words or use some of the more common ones in situations I don’t. It also makes me question the dialog I use. Some of my references are more specific to my local area or even just the state or country I live in. It makes me wonder how many people I confuse or lose or if they see it as a way to see or learn more cultural slang, terms, or expressions.
How does my brain make these stories? Well that is a complicated answer. But if you take the first four letters of my pen name, you get one of the aspects of how I view myself both physically and mentally. But mostly I read a lot. Lots from this site and others but regular stuff as well. Also I have a deep interest in most of the stuff I write or at least a curiosity. In my mind, it is the only way to explore these things for me nowadays. I just finally decided to put some of my twisted thoughts in writing and offered to share mostly to give back for the number of stories I have seen over the years. Plus I wanted to add more of the things I wanted to see or takes on things as everyone has their own wants, desires, opinions, and quirks. I felt I had some reasonable ideas especially for this one that were different enough it would garner some attention.
At least where I am at, there is a saying that there is a fine line between genius and insanity. I am no genius or would want the weight of being one. I am far too lazy and unmotivated. I will take insanity. It at least sounds fun.
Speaking of fine lines, stories like part 18 are difficult and interesting to write. One, because I have to try to balance the tone of the story I am trying to convey. Two, because I am naturally inclined to go full dark and extreme and some of the partially written early versions that I have saved from this and some of the others started or ended up in some very life changing, yeah we'll just call it that, changes and situations of some of the characters including the protagonist. As I was asked, that is not what I want from this series as a whole. I want to tread the line at moments while developing the characters in the story and offering a range of experiences. The cruise ship offered a chance to try out many things at an excelerated pace. I took the setting to be close to potential near future with hinting at possibilities we could have but don't at least publicly starting with the medications and treatments used on Emma to allow her to endure and push herself so far. These choices will turn off certain readers but that is the reality for anything that is written or done. I usually don’t expect much comments from the more intense ones not that there is from most of them any way. That's just how it is here and other places for writers based on what I witness. So I and many others appreciate the responses when someone takes the time to give us their thoughts.
As far as more to come, part 19 is in queue. I have written through 21 and in the early stages of part 22. I do mean early as in 2 to 3 paragraphs that are setting up something I have been waiting for since like part 4. My biggest concern is articulating and making it interesting in a way I am happy enough with.
I had to change my initial plans for part 19. I had pushed Emma pretty hard in 17 and 18. The original plan for 19 would have been even more intense than that. So I shifted that plan to a later date and went with a different but also planned turn. I think I titled it An Unworthy Turn but won't give away too much yet. You can guess who plays a big role but there is more within the story with others and a new side character who could show up more, possibly.
Part 20 I think I currently have titled Conjugal Visits as Emma is back in Subspace Prison and gets visitors and time with the new associate warden.
Part 21 is the next demonstration with Janice. This one has its own twist in that Emma takes charge and runs the demonstration/show. Naked musical chairs anyone? Just remember the losers' backsides get a bit red. What does the winner get? That is just a tease of what's in there.
Part 22 is Emma taking Janice on her promised walk to surprise her damsel with something she mentioned she desired and that Emma herself has interest in experiencing.
What comes after in some form likely in 23 and 24 is the first night with Master Robert for Emma followed by the return of Nix. What is in store and who else is involved? Those are still evolving though I have the base ideas.
There are plenty more things to come, some announced or hinted at in earlier stories. There is plenty of other unannounced stuff coming to. Emma and many of the others are in for a wild ride and this is only pushing a third of the way through the cruise. The ideas I have for how it ends are constantly in mind that I am tempted to write it now just to stop distracting me.
I also have the first story I wrote before this series and the other stories posted here. It was written to introduce a vanilla friend with some of her input in what she wanted to see. It is different from most anything you have seen from me. At least it feels that way. I mean there is no chastity. There are threats of it but no actual chastity unlike I think everything I have written so far including the two Halloween stories I literally wrote right after that over the course of a couple days.
My attention lately has been split between Subspace part 22, a brand new story that isn't related to anything so far and on my list of ideas to do maybe, and part four of It's Good To Be The Queen. Queen 4 has gotten most of my attention in recent days after months of deciding what to do with it, where to go, and the biggest issue I have had, how I want to get there.
So I am still working on more. My problem is I started taking it more seriously and it has turned into a bigger project than expected. Their are pros and cons to it. Mostly I spend a lot of time thinking and that slows me done. I end up looking ahead and trying to set things up and often times get distracted by what the future holds. Writing a one off story is so much faster to write. So I am slower at this than I would have preferred but I am hoping the quality and enjoyment improve.
Thanks again for the comments and I am sure many other writers would appreciate more as well from readers. Enough of my babble. Have a good day.
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🤯 i never tought to get reply from the writer itself and with a long comment at that😁. Dont bother with those movies or picture. It’s just some part of the situation/scene i cant imagine how its work or looks like, that all if u understand what i mean 😅. Dont worry much about language/slang all that cause in my part as a reader if i cant understand i will translate it that all.
I do read but to get an idea and create a stories like yours/other that for sure will never happened for me.like i said before most of the stories genre that i read and like mostly f/f, bdsm stuff and the one you sharing get me hooked with it. Your interest, curiosity and wicked thought is why part of the stories a super good and scary for me to read but in a good way 🥵😈
From my pov i dont want any hint from the author with the next chapter. i like it to be a surprise. So no need to rush or anything. Just take your time with it. Im just glad the stories keep get updated with new chapter. Take care of your health cause if you get sick there wont be any new chapter for me as a reader to read. This “https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4879500&page=submissions” like this author i really like the stories “kim new life” but at the newest chapter it feels like its still unfinished tho.some part of me hope it will get new updated but its been years already.
Urghh i dont know what im write here and i dont know if you can understand it hahaha whatever it is my point is your story is good and i like it. Just do whatever you want with your story and take your time with it, cause we cant satisfied everyone needs who read it rite. Youre the owner so make it however you like.
Have a good day too. Thanks for keep updated it. Cant wait for emma next adventure~
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I am glad you like the stories. As I mentioned the cruise is coming up on a third of the way through so there is much more planned. I have been submitting one a month for roughly a year now and it will likely stay that way unless I get really ahead. My goal has always been to write through the whole trip and give it an ending for Emma and some of the others that may set up more in the future. Anyway, thanks for the comment.
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Part 19 up tonight, enjoy!