Author Topic: Toy Bear in the Window by Jackie Rabbit  (Read 804 times)

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Re: Toy Bear in the Window by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #15 on: December 30, 2020, 09:44:21 AM »
Thank you Grace, I had fun writing it as well. I wasn't aware of the Ted and Teddy story to be honest, but I intend to read it soon, so thank you for that.

Thanks again, Jackie.

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Re: Toy Bear in the Window by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #16 on: December 30, 2020, 10:19:14 AM »
Thank you Feline, I thought the setting was fun, but I'll bet it was hard to see where the toy bear in the title would find it's way into the actual story, at least for the first few paragraphs. Rose is a fun character, but she just gets steamrolled by my alter ego's rougher and more pragmatic character, adroitly trapped so to speak. She has a history of her own, we're to learn, but it's hinted at and not fully explained.

I agree that Rose needs to be put into her place, but what happened to her is a little beyond that, although nobody's there to stop things, be that voice of reason.

I left the hanging ending, as you said, to see if there was interest, and there apparently was, so I'm working on that now, this a little detour from my other ongoing projects.

I should have perhaps explained this better, the "second" bear doesn't exist, Rose only bought one, but she should have bought at least two, in case the first broke, as it apparently did. "If you need one, buy two" it's my mantra with things that are either inexpensive, or critical to the job at hand. Think parachute, skydivers always have two, just in case something terrible happens with the primary one on the way down. In that case the second chute isn't cheap, but priceless if needed.

Thank you again for your kind words, Jackie.


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Re: Toy Bear in the Window by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #17 on: December 30, 2020, 07:48:52 PM »
Like all Jackie's tale, this is well written and scrupulously edited with humor, delightful characters, and a fascinating backstory. Probably the best thing I've read here in years. What a fantastic concept! And a concept fulfilled exceptionally, including the cliffhanger ending. I can't add much to the overflowing comments already posted (which shows there's some life in the constituency here after all).

Understanding these things can take a lot of time, I will patiently await the next installment.

Thank you!

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Re: Toy Bear in the Window by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #18 on: December 31, 2020, 10:10:54 AM »
Thank you Max, I am humbled by your kind words. I thought the characters were fun and lifelike, and as I have mentioned the entire story was inspired by one kinky picture sent to me by another. I am working on part two, as I have to tell the rest of the story now, and I will admit that there is more than a fleeting interest in taking Rose's place inside that toy for some public display of my own.

Thank you again, Jackie.

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Re: Toy Bear in the Window by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #19 on: February 14, 2021, 11:59:07 AM »
More costumed fun for our protagonist in today's follow-up: Toy Bear Missing from the Window

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Re: Toy Bear in the Window by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #20 on: March 31, 2021, 09:05:05 AM »
absolutely adoring this story. is there going to be more?

i kinda want to see rose win at least once against our lovely main character
W...wait, don't throw me away! I'm your cute little femboy! Don't you wanna play with me?

No?

B...but......*Slam.* oh. Okay.

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Re: Toy Bear in the Window by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #21 on: March 31, 2021, 09:41:18 AM »
Thank you femboy. I was toying around with Mr. B placing Rose in a position over my alter ego at the store, because the two had worked together so well on the bear project. I was originally thinking of forcing my alter ego into the bear costume at the party, and then letting Rose run the snot out of her in part two for a little well deserved retribution, but I thought that was to predictable.

 I like Rose, and maybe this little adventure will toughen her up a little, or maybe she'll get steamrolled by my alter ego still again? Rose has a history of her own, she's a walking contradiction after all, and it might be fun to explore that.

To be honest I thought part two was a good story too, but it didn't generate all that much interest so I was intending to let it drop. I will revisit that thought with your interest though.

Thank you again for your kind words, Jackie.

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Re: Toy Bear in the Window by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #22 on: April 03, 2021, 01:36:07 PM »
oh please do. i'm a sucker for a good, sexy story.
W...wait, don't throw me away! I'm your cute little femboy! Don't you wanna play with me?

No?

B...but......*Slam.* oh. Okay.

 

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