Part one was fantastic, I loved the back and forth between what Becky was thinking, and actually saying. I loved the cage in the barn, and the restraint obviously, but the mind control part and giving yourself over to another is just wonderful. I also like that you have an virtual playground with a farm setting, and remote seclusion that makes all things possible.
There are a lot of new stories lately, which is wonderful from a reader's perspective, but from an author's your great work might not get the immediate notice it deserves, but I'm certain it will.
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.