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Title: Bound Becky by MasterKGray
Post by: teanndaorsa on November 26, 2020, 09:21:55 pm

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/bound_becky1.html
M/f; bond; kidnap; enslave; gag; rope; collar; blindfold; oral; toys; sex; cuffs; collar; outdoors; farm; reluct; XX

https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/bound_becky2.html
M/f; bond; slave; punish; cuffs; susp; crop; whip; pillory; collar; anal; toys; sex; oral; cage; hum; reluct; cons; XXX

https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/bound_becky3.html
M/f; D/s; slave; bond; gag; cuffs; collar; leash; oral; sex; rom; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Title: Re: Bound Becky by MasterKGray
Post by: MasterKGray on December 09, 2020, 06:28:08 am

I guess nobody liked this story, at least based on feedback.  I felt like it was my best one so far, but I'm biased.

Title: Re: Bound Becky by MasterKGray
Post by: icy on December 09, 2020, 08:19:14 am

I wouldn't worry about that too much. There's so much stuff to read, but so little time to do it. I'm sure there are people who liked your story, but didn't give feedback.

Title: Re: Bound Becky by MasterKGray
Post by: jackierabbit1 on December 09, 2020, 09:08:37 am

Part one was fantastic, I loved the back and forth between what Becky was thinking, and actually saying. I loved the cage in the barn, and the restraint obviously, but the mind control part and giving yourself over to another is just wonderful. I also like that you have an virtual playground with a farm setting, and remote seclusion that makes all things possible.

 There are a lot of new stories lately, which is wonderful from a reader's perspective, but from an author's your great work might not get the immediate notice it deserves, but I'm certain it will.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

Title: Re: Bound Becky by MasterKGray
Post by: MasterKGray on December 09, 2020, 09:37:59 am

Thanks Jackie,
I appreciate the feedback and the one thing I didn't take into consideration, so many stories coming out all at once.  :)