The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch

[Oompah]

I love part two of The Sun I Can't See, particularly admiring how you manage to describe everything so vividly from the point of view of a blind protagonist. Nice cliff-hanger at the end!

[Tigerstretch]

I love part two of The Sun I Can't See, particularly admiring how you manage to describe everything so vividly from the point of view of a blind protagonist. Nice cliff-hanger at the end!

Hehe the cliffhanger was nasty. Maybe I'll do that kind of thing more often. There is a way to know who that kissing girl was just by reading chapter 2. But I'm not saying. I'm just waiting to see if someone finds out. Hehe (and no, its not Mei who tricked her)

Thanks for reading.

[rbbrlvr]

LOVED part 2! Bravo... bring on the next instalment! 

[Tigerstretch]

LOVED part 2! Bravo... bring on the next instalment! 

Hey thanks! It was a fun one to write.

[dshark]

I got to this series only recently and it is awesome. Your other stories are great too. Now I wonder how much is personal experience and how much is pure fantasy :-)

[Tigerstretch]

I got to this series only recently and it is awesome. Your other stories are great too. Now I wonder how much is personal experience and how much is pure fantasy :-)

Mainly imagination. I really don't do much on my own. I'm super boring.

[TeaSer]

This story is supersexy! Wonderful with a new scene (the heroine being blind). I'll really look forward to chapter 3 tomorrow (too late now).

[Tigerstretch]

This story is supersexy! Wonderful with a new scene (the heroine being blind). I'll really look forward to chapter 3 tomorrow (too late now).

Thanks TeaSer, enjoy chapter 3.

[feathersntar]

Wow! What an amazing story! Thank you for sharing

[Tigerstretch]

Wow! What an amazing story! Thank you for sharing

Thanks. It's one of my favorite too.

[TeaSer]

So! Did it. And enjoyed it in full.

Not only did you manage to turn a disability into something sexy (guess we shouldn't always pity the disabled), but you managed to make a hot story about a pretty mundane devellopment - well, not more mundane than you presented a lot of toys.

Using Mei the way you did allowed you to keep the predicament of Alex at a descent level (again - very probable as she's a newbie) while giving the readers something to drool at.

The text is easily readable and contains an adequate amount of details - enough to imagine the scene and not too many making the description boring and difficult to read.

Great story.

[Tigerstretch]

So! Did it. And enjoyed it in full.

Not only did you manage to turn a disability into something sexy (guess we shouldn't always pity the disabled), but you managed to make a hot story about a pretty mundane devellopment - well, not more mundane than you presented a lot of toys.

Using Mei the way you did allowed you to keep the predicament of Alex at a descent level (again - very probable as she's a newbie) while giving the readers something to drool at.

The text is easily readable and contains an adequate amount of details - enough to imagine the scene and not too many making the description boring and difficult to read.

Great story.

Thanks again, T.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's kind of why I write in the first place.

[teanndaorsa]

And the last two parts up tonight, for some lovely romantic closure.

[TeaSer]

Gosh - it took me a long time to get back to this story to read the 'final four'. Btw - be aware that the link from 4a to 4b doesn't work - it returns to top of 4a.

The story changed a lot in chapter 4! Kind of.... got adult. Changing from just the wild fetish-rush into handling such emotions. And it does work well. Chapter 4 was interesting and thought-provoking more than plain sexy. But well - I could reread the first three chapters if I needed some inspiration to wank off. Or read other great stories at the Plaza. This one is deliciously thoughtful.

Thanks for letting us read your story, Tigerstretch.

[teanndaorsa]

Btw - be aware that the link from 4a to 4b doesn't work - it returns to top of 4a.

Well spotted, this has now been fixed, thanks.