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Latex => Latex Website Stories Feedback => Topic started by: teanndaorsa on March 30, 2020, 07:31:28 pm
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You can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.latexstories.net/storiessz/the_sun_i_cant_see1.html
FM; latex; catsuit; gloves; toys; insert; rom; cons; X
https://www.latexstories.net/storiessz/the_sun_i_cant_see2.html
FM; latex; catsuit; collar; tease; vacbed; gloves; rom; cons; X
https://www.latexstories.net/storiessz/the_sun_i_cant_see3.html
FF; M/f; latex; lesbian; mast; sex;sleepsack; chain; locks; cuffs; head-harness; hood; gag; blindfold; vag; hogtie; cons; rom; X
https://www.latexstories.net/storiessz/the_sun_i_cant_see4a.html
M/f+; FF; F/f+; latex; bond; sex; oral; mast; rom; petgirl; club; collar; spank; cons; X
https://www.latexstories.net/storiessz/the_sun_i_cant_see4b.html
FF; costume; petgirl; club; latex; rom; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks ;)
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I loved this story and can't wait for part 2!
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I loved this story and can't wait for part 2!
Working hard on it. :) I'm releasing a new series this week, then I'm going to publish feliformia 9, which is taking a lot of my time since it is 3 times bigger than my regular chapters. Then after that I really want to finish The Sun I Can't See part 2,3 and 4 because I love that blind girl. :) I love her so much!
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I love your new story too, it's so awesome!
I think, your longer stories are much better than your short ones.
You can very well describe subtleties in the personality of the protagonists and it's fun to follow their development. In long stories there is simply more room for that.
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I love your new story too, it's so awesome!
I think, your longer stories are much better than your short ones.
You can very well describe subtleties in the personality of the protagonists and it's fun to follow their development. In long stories there is simply more room for that.
Glad you liked it. :) And I agree with you, I'm not that good with short stories. I will still do it occasionally, but I much prefer writing longer stories where I can develop my characters slowly. (or let them develop themselves)
Also, I listened to you John. You like realism, so this one is a four part story and it wont go touch the fictional realm. There maybe one scene that I can think of that might bug you, but the rest is all very believable. (and rubbery)
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I really loved this story and fell in love with the blind girl almost instantly. I can't wait for chapter 2 and hope that it will be just a bit longer so that I can see how the characters develop and what fun stuff they get up to. Keep up the good work please Tiger Stretch and the longer the stories the better :)
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I really loved this story and fell in love with the blind girl almost instantly. I can't wait for chapter 2 and hope that it will be just a bit longer so that I can see how the characters develop and what fun stuff they get up to. Keep up the good work please Tiger Stretch and the longer the stories the better :)
Chapter 2 is going to be 1000 words longer, around 9000 words. Total, thisb4 parts series will be well over 30000 words. It's a little book. ;)
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Also, I listened to you John. You like realism, so this one is a four part story and it wont go touch the fictional realm. There maybe one scene that I can think of that might bug you, but the rest is all very believable. (and rubbery)
I'm pleased to read that!
I am an experienced author too (but only in my native language, not here on Gromets) and my most beloved stories are the realistic ones.
Love, trust, kink (of course) - but realistic all the time, so that the reader can dream of switching with the character.
As said, I love your new story!
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Enjoying this. Looking forward to more!
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Enjoying this. Looking forward to more!
Thanks so much. Chapter 2 will be published here at the beginning of next month. I got some solid feedbacks on this story so far on the new chapter. I'm pretty proud of it. Alex and Miles are going to a fetish club and have some fun. :)
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Chapter 2 up today
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This is a fun story so far. I am thoroughly hooked and waiting eagerly for the next part.
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This is a fun story so far. I am thoroughly hooked and waiting eagerly for the next part.
Thanks for reading. :) Glad you liked it. Two more chapters in the work that will soon be published back to back. Hang in there. :)
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Really great story, even I just read chapter 2 first ;) :D
Well written and nice storyline - curious to read how it will develop in upcoming chapters.
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Really great story, even I just read chapter 2 first ;) :D
Well written and nice storyline - curious to read how it will develop in upcoming chapters.
Hehe. Thanks for reading and commenting. I think the 3rd chapter will be published some time in August. I had a rough patch a few weeks ago and I delayed this one a bit too much. It's drafted, but I just have to finish editing It.
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I love part two of The Sun I Can't See, particularly admiring how you manage to describe everything so vividly from the point of view of a blind protagonist. Nice cliff-hanger at the end!
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I love part two of The Sun I Can't See, particularly admiring how you manage to describe everything so vividly from the point of view of a blind protagonist. Nice cliff-hanger at the end!
Hehe the cliffhanger was nasty. Maybe I'll do that kind of thing more often. :) There is a way to know who that kissing girl was just by reading chapter 2. But I'm not saying. I'm just waiting to see if someone finds out. Hehe (and no, its not Mei who tricked her)
Thanks for reading.
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LOVED part 2! Bravo... bring on the next instalment! 8)
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LOVED part 2! Bravo... bring on the next instalment! 8)
Hey thanks! It was a fun one to write. :)
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I got to this series only recently and it is awesome. Your other stories are great too. Now I wonder how much is personal experience and how much is pure fantasy :-)
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I got to this series only recently and it is awesome. Your other stories are great too. Now I wonder how much is personal experience and how much is pure fantasy :-)
Mainly imagination. I really don't do much on my own. I'm super boring. ;)
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This story is supersexy! Wonderful with a new scene (the heroine being blind). I'll really look forward to chapter 3 tomorrow (too late now).
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This story is supersexy! Wonderful with a new scene (the heroine being blind). I'll really look forward to chapter 3 tomorrow (too late now).
Thanks TeaSer, enjoy chapter 3. :)
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Wow! What an amazing story! Thank you for sharing
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Wow! What an amazing story! Thank you for sharing
Thanks. It's one of my favorite too. :)
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So! Did it. And enjoyed it in full.
Not only did you manage to turn a disability into something sexy (guess we shouldn't always pity the disabled), but you managed to make a hot story about a pretty mundane devellopment - well, not more mundane than you presented a lot of toys.
Using Mei the way you did allowed you to keep the predicament of Alex at a descent level (again - very probable as she's a newbie) while giving the readers something to drool at.
The text is easily readable and contains an adequate amount of details - enough to imagine the scene and not too many making the description boring and difficult to read.
Great story.
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So! Did it. And enjoyed it in full.
Not only did you manage to turn a disability into something sexy (guess we shouldn't always pity the disabled), but you managed to make a hot story about a pretty mundane devellopment - well, not more mundane than you presented a lot of toys.
Using Mei the way you did allowed you to keep the predicament of Alex at a descent level (again - very probable as she's a newbie) while giving the readers something to drool at.
The text is easily readable and contains an adequate amount of details - enough to imagine the scene and not too many making the description boring and difficult to read.
Great story.
Thanks again, T.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's kind of why I write in the first place. ;)
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And the last two parts up tonight, for some lovely romantic closure.
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Gosh - it took me a long time to get back to this story to read the 'final four'. Btw - be aware that the link from 4a to 4b doesn't work - it returns to top of 4a.
The story changed a lot in chapter 4! Kind of.... got adult. Changing from just the wild fetish-rush into handling such emotions. And it does work well. Chapter 4 was interesting and thought-provoking more than plain sexy. But well - I could reread the first three chapters if I needed some inspiration to wank off. Or read other great stories at the Plaza. This one is deliciously thoughtful.
Thanks for letting us read your story, Tigerstretch.
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Btw - be aware that the link from 4a to 4b doesn't work - it returns to top of 4a.
Well spotted, this has now been fixed, thanks.
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Gosh - it took me a long time to get back to this story to read the 'final four'. Btw - be aware that the link from 4a to 4b doesn't work - it returns to top of 4a.
The story changed a lot in chapter 4! Kind of.... got adult. Changing from just the wild fetish-rush into handling such emotions. And it does work well. Chapter 4 was interesting and thought-provoking more than plain sexy. But well - I could reread the first three chapters if I needed some inspiration to wank off. Or read other great stories at the Plaza. This one is deliciously thoughtful.
Thanks for letting us read your story, Tigerstretch.
Thanks for reading it. Yes, chapter 4 was more of a reflexion on life, friends and love. The Sun was always meant to be a bit like that. No matter your strengths and weaknesses, you have to fi d your path in life and try to grow up and understand what you want.
If you want wanking material, chapter 4 was not it, but I have a few stories coming down the pipe that are designed to be wankable. Lol. One is about mermaid and the other is the good ending of building reality. Both full of rubber. And sexiness. :)