Author Topic: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe  (Read 721 times)

Offline teanndaorsa

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Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
« on: February 24, 2020, 08:19:38 PM »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.trashcanstories.net/storiessz/squashing_time.html
Solo-M; F+/m; discovery; trash; bagged; disposal; compacted; mast; landfill; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Offline Emygarbage

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Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
« Reply #1 on: March 01, 2020, 01:45:24 AM »
lovely story !
did you plan a part 2 ?

Offline Polythenewrappedme

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Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
« Reply #2 on: March 01, 2020, 02:01:00 AM »
Hi Emy,

I am glad you liked the story. Thanks for posting your kind feedback.

I could write a Part 2.....if people are interested.

I have sent the Plaza Mistress TWO new trashcan stories, that hopefully you will like also.

PWM

Offline Trash girl

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Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
« Reply #3 on: March 01, 2020, 08:36:37 PM »
i most say i really enjoyed the story too hopefully you consider part 2 and more
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Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
« Reply #4 on: March 01, 2020, 08:44:05 PM »
Thanks Trash Girl.

I am glad you liked it.

Offline DumpsterLife

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Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
« Reply #5 on: March 02, 2020, 12:30:12 AM »
Thanks for the story PWM, a very enjoyable read.

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Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
« Reply #6 on: March 02, 2020, 01:08:43 PM »
Hi DunpsterLife, that is very kind to say so. I am glad you enjoyed it. Many thanks for the feedback.

PWM

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Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
« Reply #7 on: March 14, 2020, 05:42:29 AM »
really great story. I would also like to see part 2 and 3 .... and 4 ... ?? but how will it go on with dave ....? The end says that he will be picked up with the container. Now there has to be a way how he can escape the waste treatment. Bob gives the collector a hint and he finds him in the mountain. ... and how does Bob know that Dave is in Theo Crash compactor. Could Mel and Cathy play a role? Could one of the girls be a savior? It could be a little dirty. Garbage is a mix of everything you throw away and there is also a lot of greasy and damp stuff 😉 Of course, sex shouldn't be missing. Sex always captivates the reader. A few precarious details and you're left to the end😋 I am definitely looking forward to a sequel. ... and take your time writing ...

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Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
« Reply #8 on: March 23, 2020, 06:19:11 PM »
Many thanks Ninatrash.

How nice to write such lovely feedback. Thank you, for your kind words and for taking the time to post a lengthy reply, with such great ideas.

I deliberately left the ending ambiguous so that a sequel could be written if Dave was saved.

Do you think that the girls were only playing with him ?  To fulfil his wildest dreams. Or do you think, once thrown away, that is the end for Dave ?

Perhaps if he was an attentive lover, some girl might think he is worth saving ?

For the right girl, he would do anything she wished !

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Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
« Reply #9 on: May 29, 2020, 02:33:40 PM »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.trashcanstories.net/storiessz/squashing_time.html
Solo-M; F+/m; discovery; trash; bagged; disposal; compacted; mast; landfill; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Another great story  :)
Garbage bag Diaper :)

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Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
« Reply #10 on: June 01, 2020, 08:18:20 PM »
Hi GarbageBagDiaper,

I am glad you liked the story. Thanks for your feedback.

PWM

 

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