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Trashcan => TrashcanStories Feedback => Topic started by: teanndaorsa on February 24, 2020, 08:19:38 pm

Title: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
Post by: teanndaorsa on February 24, 2020, 08:19:38 pm

You can view the story here on the plaza:

[EDIT]: The author has since withdrawn this story, it is no longer available on the Plaza
Solo-M; F+/m; discovery; trash; bagged; disposal; compacted; mast; landfill; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Title: Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
Post by: Landfill_Racoon on March 01, 2020, 01:45:24 am

lovely story !
did you plan a part 2 ?

Title: Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
Post by: Polythenewrappedme on March 01, 2020, 02:01:00 am

Hi Emy,

I am glad you liked the story. Thanks for posting your kind feedback.

I could write a Part 2.....if people are interested.

I have sent the Plaza Mistress TWO new trashcan stories, that hopefully you will like also.

PWM

Title: Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
Post by: Trash girl on March 01, 2020, 08:36:37 pm

i most say i really enjoyed the story too hopefully you consider part 2 and more

Title: Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
Post by: Polythenewrappedme on March 01, 2020, 08:44:05 pm

Thanks Trash Girl.

I am glad you liked it.

Title: Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
Post by: DumpsterLife on March 02, 2020, 12:30:12 am

Thanks for the story PWM, a very enjoyable read.

Title: Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
Post by: Polythenewrappedme on March 02, 2020, 01:08:43 pm

Hi DunpsterLife, that is very kind to say so. I am glad you enjoyed it. Many thanks for the feedback.

PWM

Title: Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
Post by: Ninatrash on March 14, 2020, 05:42:29 am

really great story. I would also like to see part 2 and 3 .... and 4 ... ?? but how will it go on with dave ....? The end says that he will be picked up with the container. Now there has to be a way how he can escape the waste treatment. Bob gives the collector a hint and he finds him in the mountain. ... and how does Bob know that Dave is in Theo Crash compactor. Could Mel and Cathy play a role? Could one of the girls be a savior? It could be a little dirty. Garbage is a mix of everything you throw away and there is also a lot of greasy and damp stuff 😉 Of course, sex shouldn't be missing. Sex always captivates the reader. A few precarious details and you're left to the end😋 I am definitely looking forward to a sequel. ... and take your time writing ...

Title: Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
Post by: Polythenewrappedme on March 23, 2020, 06:19:11 pm

Many thanks Ninatrash.

How nice to write such lovely feedback. Thank you, for your kind words and for taking the time to post a lengthy reply, with such great ideas.

I deliberately left the ending ambiguous so that a sequel could be written if Dave was saved.

Do you think that the girls were only playing with him ?  To fulfil his wildest dreams. Or do you think, once thrown away, that is the end for Dave ?

Perhaps if he was an attentive lover, some girl might think he is worth saving ?

For the right girl, he would do anything she wished !

Title: Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
Post by: GarbageBagDiaper on May 29, 2020, 02:33:40 pm

Quote from: teanndaorsa on February 24, 2020, 08:19:38 pm

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.trashcanstories.net/storiessz/squashing_time.html
Solo-M; F+/m; discovery; trash; bagged; disposal; compacted; mast; landfill; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Another great story  :)

Title: Re: Squashing Time by PolytheneWrappedMe
Post by: Polythenewrappedme on June 01, 2020, 08:18:20 pm

Hi GarbageBagDiaper,

I am glad you liked the story. Thanks for your feedback.

PWM