Indecent Proposal by Jackie Rabbit

[feline]

Reading part 4, and putting down some thoughts and comments as I read this.

What is striking me quite clearly at the moment, beyond the obviousness of the "both men share the same kink and talk about it" observation, that permeates the whole wifely discipline kit, are the interesting mixed messages Jackie is giving, in her own thoughts to herself.

At this point, part way through the first section of part 4, Jackie has both concluded that all she needs now is for Jack to "force" this issue, thus freeing her from any and all concerns and constraints about acting the wife in all of the appropriate ways.

Yet just as we have had this observation, this thought and consideration, Jackie is also still teasing Jack, and wondering why she is teasing and pushing so...  almost as if she is trying to have it both ways at once.  I feel it is safe to say we are well past the point of wondering if Jack finds her attractive and desirable how.  His views and desires are perfectly clear!

Then again, we were not long ago reminded that Jackie feels her (real) husband takes her body for granted, so who can argue with a sexy lady wanting, desiring and revelling in such positive reinforcement of her looks and desirability

Now this is interesting, and unexpected.  Jackie is getting closer and closer to offering herself up on a plate, yet Jack has just said that what he wants is something he should not be wanting.  This holiday, this charade is only going to work if he wants, obviously and actively, his "wife" during the entire holiday.  Combine this with the long running history of him wanting / needing / desiring / claiming...  or whatever is going on here, Jackie, it is a little surprising that he seems to be pulling back like this.

Then again, perhaps not so surprising, he has been having to behave himself and deny or at least limit his desires for Jackie for quite some time now, so an ingrained habit.

A cold shower?  I didn't think Jack would take that route, but it does keep the tension simmering along nicely

Yes, underdressed in the presence of Jack's fully dressed boss, this is one of those "um, what to do" moments life likes to throw at us.

Stumbling over the drink order for his wife...  the million and one little things that you should know about your wife, but that you don't know about your best friends wife...  How are they supposed to sell this charade?

*smirk* drinking the baby maker?  Isn't any old alcohol supposed to make a lady susceptible to a man's advances?  Or am I just feeling a tiny bit cynical again?

OK, let me revise that comment, this drink does seem to be rather epically strong!  Almost as if it was selected specifically for this feature...

Pete asked about the house tour, and Jackie still cannot see the point...  yep, clearly being ganged up on, and it all screams that Jack's boss knows the basics of what is going on here, so why all of the games?  Plus, what IS Jack actually up to?

At least he has finally admitted he has always wanted Jackie, so we are making a bit of progress finally

Jackie's choice of curse word at the end actually makes a lot of sense to me, this is a new, bolder and more forward version of Jackie, both by nature of the situation, and due to the role that she is being required to play.  So of course this is going to be reflected in her words and actions.

Jack though...  things have been heading this way for quite a while now, and with ever growing passion.  If he were really so firm in his commitment to keep his hands off of his "wife" he really went about it the wrong way.  But this look of shock, surprise, it again goes right to the heart of the question of what is going on here with Jack and his feelings for Jackie.

On something of a random aside, assuming all of this is a grand "trap" to see if Jack will have sex with Jackie, given the seriousness of the situation, if Jackie was a made up woman then what would stop Jack from finding and hiring an escort who looked sufficiently like Jackie, and who would be willing to have sex with him?  Not automatically easy, but not impossible either.

[jackierabbit1]

Pete is a hypnotherapist, and the "Baby Maker" drink just there to make his job easier and quicker once he and my alter ego were manipulated into being alone, as was Tammy's plan from the beginning. Pete then easily slipped my alter ego into a light trance, asked a bunch of questions that Tammy had specifically asked about, and then received some very truthful and candid answerers in return.

Pete then had enough time to ask some very personal follow up questions, and then plant some happy attitudes toward Tammy and this vacation, and even plant the sugestion for over the top desire for my stand in husband. He did this specifically knowing Jack wasn't my real husband just to ignight a firestorm of emotion, and emotional collateral dammage afterwards.

That's the reason for Jackie's disconnect between Jack's words and rational logic once back in their room, and for Jackie's suddenly warm feeling toward both Pete and Tammy after their impromptu session. Feeling "wonderfully naughty" was an ad hoc Pete suggestion, one that Jackie hardly needed, but then again did as she had been obviously conflicted earlier. I tried to portrat that, (perhaps not all that clearly) in Jackie's tempting of Jack with offered sexual favors, but stopping just short of jumping his bones as she had been conditiond to respond to her true husband's advances when he was in the mood.

 Clearly things are different now, but the upcomming morning after should be fun, as will the continuing subliminal suggestions that she need her temporary husband often, and without limit, this wantonness perhaps applying to the handsome and muscular Jeffery if Jack isn't willing or able. I am undecided if a sip of a Mamajunna is what will put Jackie back into horny slut mode, or a phrase of some kind, or perhaps some other trigger. I could also envision Jack being given the trigger at some point to use as his conscience allows, and this as well could be fun, and a test of his character.

I also can see, at some point, Tammy and Jackie going out some place remote on the island and Tammy laying down a little bound corporal punishment for lying to her and being snippy when they had first met, Tammy wanting to make sure Jackie got the message about who was the top dog between them.

The ultimate surprise could be that Jack is in line for a huge promotion, perhaps even to run the resort they are presently staying at, this entire charade just a job interview to see if he had "what it takes" to succede at any cost.


Thank you again for your motivation and kind thoughts, Jackie.

[feline]

I don't recall any mention before of Pete being a hypnotherapist, but suddenly things make SO much more sense!  Cool!

There was a clear and sharp change in Jackie, but I simply accepted that it was down to all of the alcohol on an empty stomach, which was obviously part of the setting.

As for a trigger...  my first thought / gut instinct here is not to go with the Mamajunna, since this seems a little bit to specific, but instead any colourful cocktail.  Given Jackie is normally a wine drinker, while cocktails are widely available, this gives us a bit more scope for fun down the line.

Seeing how far Jack is prepared to go actually makes a great deal of sense here, and explains a lot.  I am reminded of the observation that sometimes the heads of big companies, the ones who are successful, are also quite close in nature to psychopaths, it is just applied differently.

You have carefully avoided any mention or hint of the background to all of this though, there has to be a big driving force behind all of this...  behind the second wedding ring, the loan, the picture, etc.  I haven't forgotten that I still want to know all about this when the time comes

Which leads to the interesting observation that if Jack becomes aware of the trigger for Jackie's much more enthusiastic behaviour, what will he do with this knowledge?  He comes across as very conflicted where Jackie is concerned, and I had the feeling that while he was certainly a willing lover, if Jackie hadn't pushed so hard and firmly, nothing sexual would have happened that night.

[teanndaorsa]

Part 5 of this up today!

[feline]

Finally part 5, and I have finally caught up with it!  Ouch, seeing the dates here, it took me longer than I realised to catch up with it!

Before starting I re-read the first 4 parts, to make sure I was back up to speed, and thinking in the right way about all of this.

Jackie has a mystery secret?  oooh...  wild guess, based on context, she thinks her husband, Mike, is infertile.  Hence no birth control being used, and the comment in the last part about seed going into her fertile body.

Watching her thinking this through, trying to decide if she is the victim of Jack, the free woman embracing her desires and passions, if, and to what degree she is free and encouraged to do as she wants by Mike...  absolutely delicious!  Such wonderful emotions, moments, questions, all of the mixed signals playing out in her mind and feelings...  this makes me, and her, feel very alive, I can feel myself in her at this moment, and delight in this feeling, and the sense that this is just the start of the wickedness to come...

*nods* I approve of her conclusion, that going forward Jack should be more in charge in the bedroom, and that the sexual aspect of their “honeymoon” should continue.  Plus, being logical rather than emotional, the continued “lie” about their marriage rather requires this.

Knowing from the forum thread that Jack’s bosses husband is skilled with words and getting into your mind (not bothering to look up his name or the precise job title right now) explains a lot of what is going on here.  The clues are really there, but I was finding it hard to put them together properly without that information from you.  Then again, reading the story one part here, one part there, as you write it, complicates things a little

Still though, I *really* do find myself wondering what game the boss is playing...  the evidence to prove that Jack is not really married to her is ample, and obviously well in hand, yet at the same time, the more we learn and see, the deeper and bigger the “lie” that Jack really is her husband becomes.  This is no simple or casual lie that Jack told at work, instead it is more like this is something that he *needs* deep down, even as, we saw in part 4, he is fighting his desires for her, to keep the proper distance and to treat her with the respect and care that the wife of another man deserves...

*considers*  this is interesting, the idea that dressing with such deliberate, and excessive, sexiness, being presented and asked to act and behave as “sex on legs”, would mainly effect others reactions towards her, but not Jackie’s thoughts and reactions herself...  I can see how she would reach this logical conclusion, when thinking about presenting herself like this, but I don’t see how she expects this to be the case when she is actively flirting, “throwing herself” at her “husband”, and doing all she can to make sure that her very presence, and every single item in her holiday wardrobe is all about offering her up and presenting her as a sexual being and object...

Why do I think this...  I think because, to me, the mind and body have to be in the same place for it to work.  Jackie can be dressed in the most amazingly sexy way, makeup and hair done, bathed and relaxed, but unless she thinks and feels sexy, unless her mood and body language are aligned with her outfit, it just isn’t going to work or come across.  And when she has been so presented, so offered up, she has definitely been feeling and showing this as well.

Then Jack returns, and things get interesting...

I love the internal conversation she is having with herself when Jack gets back, reading this, I feel like I am seeing and living this from both sides, which makes it almost painfully clear why this conversation is a total mess.  Jackie is working out what she wants, and why she wants what she wants, but is certainly not sharing any of the key steps in her thinking, so it’s no wonder at all that Jack is at a total loss as to what is going on here.

At the same time, I actually have quite a bit of sympathy for Jackie here, before we even get to the fact that her mind is being turned inside out.  Basically she has worked out and decided that the best way forward for them both is for Jack to treat her the way he has been bragging, possibly for years, that he treats her.  Yet when presented with this, he wants to stick to the polite, respectful, nice and romantic way of treating a lady...  rather than taking the “noisy kinky nympho” that he has in hand...

Delightful, bloody delightful!  It does look that Jack is finally starting to get the idea, but I get the feeling that unless he can work out that the lack of a “stop sign” means “keep going as hard as you can” this could once more unravel, and Jackie doesn’t want to have this conversation again, or even admit that it ever happened at all...

[jackierabbit1]

Thank you for your observations, I love to be able to "see" this from another's perspective, and I am convinced that the sexiest part of anybody is what's going on between their ears. Jackie is almost a bipolar mess with all this going on around her, but I think things will settle out now that the boundary has been crossed, and the proverbial seeds planted.

Mike, Jackie's true husband, may or may not be impotent, but Jackie at least thinks he is. I am unsure if I should make this due to a childhood illness, or perhaps an accident that Jack knows about, as the two had been friends long before Jackie came into the picture. Could the extra wedding ring be a tongue in cheek joke between the men, a reminder that Jack might have to act as a stand in with Jackie for any potential baby making duties if Mike's hardware comes up short?

Another option on the extra wedding ring, and the co-husbands kind of relationship we seem to be heading towards, could be that one of them saved the other's life once. But how exactly the two men would share one wife would be a logistical disaster, even if they all DIDN'T get caught.

I'm also trying to show that Jackie has two minds, the independent logical one, and the other half of her that's easier to bend when in the presence of several select people that Pete has installed into her subconscious. Jackie will have little will to resist, Jack, Tammy, and Pete by design, Pete adding one more name that should be obvious, just to add some tension to an already tense situation. Jackie may end up being a gift to that last man as a reward for all his help, or even Pete might borrow Jackie for a day himself just because he can, with his dominate wife's permission of course... Or, maybe not?

If Jackie does return from her second honeymoon potentially knocked up, it might be a little bit exciting to see what the product of that looks like, but no matter what, I could see her wanting to jump Mike's bones the second she gets home, just to make the timeline on everything work out properly just in case.

I intend for Tammy to have a kind of power over Jackie, (installed by her husband Pete) as she really didn't like the way Jackie talked to her back at Jack's house. Tammy is sweet on the outside, when she has to be, but very tough on the inside, and is the reason Jack is ever so slightly intimidated by her.

Tammy likes Jack, likes his think outside the box way of solving problems, but she has been charged with vetting him for bigger and better things within the company by her own superiors, and Tammy very much wants to see him succeed.

I perhaps see Tammy turning this entire lie into a most glowing recommendation for promotion, or perhaps she even allowing it to pass, under the conditions that Jack bring her around to any company functions, or perhaps even move her with him if he receives a relocation with his promotion.

I also like the idea of a strong drink being an additional trigger for Jackie, such could be fun no matter where, or with whom, such drinking occurred. I've also heard that you really can't program somebody to do something that they really didn't want to do in the first place, hypnotherapist wise, so this "desire" to be with Jack and throw herself at him had to be there already, in some measure, before this charade ever started.

Thank you for your kind thoughts, Jackie.

 


 

[feline]

I totally agree, the sexiest part of someone is always the mind, with, generally, the eyes coming in second place for me.  But it's not so much the eyes as the expression, the body language, the sense of being able to get a sense of what is going on inside, any step towards being able to "see" inside, to know and understand what is happening

Which is what I try to offer you when I offer feedback, on the theory that you also want to know what is going on here, and what is happening.

I am not sure where it came from, but just reading the ideas for why the two wedding rings, for both men, my mind instantly jumped to the thought that Mike had asked for a loan, back when he wanted to propose to Jackie, the woman both men desired in their own way, and when asked by his best friend Jack, jokingly, what he was planning to offer up as collateral, the obvious answer to a (probably slightly drunk) Mike was to offer up Jackie herself as collateral.

I can just see two men, on their own, slightly drunk, very good friends, enjoying the in joke of using the wife to be as the collateral for the loan to buy the wedding ring.  Then, as these in jokes sometimes do, the joke grew over time, leading to the joke that Jack needed a wedding ring himself, as part of his claim on the collateral.  Throw in a "you would never dare" or a couple of "go on, I dare you, it would be funny", along with Jack realising slowly just how much he is coming to love Jackie, and how he wished that he was the one she had chosen, the idea slowly grows, until it seems natural between the two of them for Jack to end up with his own wedding ring.

Of course, with this "constant claim" on the collateral, there is no rush or urgency for Mike to pay Jack back, since in Jack's mind, in a private little corner, while the loan has not been repaid, Jackie is always just on the verge of becoming his...

Which, in a way, actually explains his overly polite, gentlemanly and careful way around her, not wanting to scare her off, or ever tip her of to the little ongoing "in joke", the one that spilled over into his work life, and that got completely away from him.

For the idea of Mike being sterile, an illness seems more reasonable than an injury, simply because I would half expect any injury that had this effect to leave tell tale scars that Jackie would be well familiar with, thus bringing the point up and confirming her suspicions.

Another angle on this, if both men know that Jackie has a "secret" desire to have children, and Mike always kept this a secret from her, not wanting to ruin his chances with the woman he was falling for, it would tie into the whole running joke of collateral, and making sure that Jackie would get something out of it that she wanted if / when she was "collected" in place of the debt owed.

It's a bit unexpected, but to me this makes more sense than the other suggestions for explaining the duplicate wedding rings.

I do have a strong sense of Jackie being in two minds here, of her having two major sides to her personality.  You have always shown her as a fairly strong willed and determined woman outside of the bedroom, look at when Jack wanted to take her out for a date, and she made him reschedule and ask her properly.  At the same time, once in the bedroom, once in her submissive role, Jackie really is a deeply submissive woman, but she *needs* to be put in that place, to have control *taken* from her, rather than offering herself up as a sex object.

Which makes the whole presentation of her, on this holiday, as the professional woman around the house and sex slave in the bedroom (idealised male fantasy) surprisingly accurate and close to the truth.

I find myself wanting to take a different approach with Tammy.  I didn't notice, don't remember, anything that would really justify Tammy disliking Jackie so much from their house meeting.  But, instead, remember that Tammy is Jack's boss, she is preparing him for something big, but something that will still keep him working under her in the company, she wants to make sure that she, not Jackie, is the one with the power in her relationship with Jack.

She clearly has a very good idea of the reality of the situation, but the key question for her is who is in charge, Jack or Jackie?  Jackie has been given the power to ruin, and thus the power to control Jack, all due to Jack getting himself into this position to begin with.  So, going forward, if Jack is going to progress, and his performance is going to reflect well on Tammy, then Tammy and Pete have to be *sure* that they have Jackie under control, that Jack will be the one in charge in their ongoing relationship.

Ongoing relationship since I find I have the sense (memory?) that the company require senior managers to have a partner, preferably to be married, due to the social aspects of the job, the meet and greet, winning over important clients, etc.  So either ensure that Jackie fulfils this role, under their careful control and monitoring, or discard the very promising and potential filled Jack.

All of which would make it make even more sense for Jackie to find herself being "offered around" a bit more, especially as Jack is being "subtly" nudged to take a more dominant and commanding hand with his "wife".

I am also familiar with the concept that you cannot get someone to do anything they would not normally do via hypnosis, but I do remember seeing one film where this point was throw aside, by explaining that you can get someone to do just about anything at all with hypnosis, simply by presenting them with the right situation and pressures.  Jackie would normally never be unfaithful, but if she is "required" to act and embrace the roll of the submissive sex slave wife, then she is not being unfaithful is she, she is simply following her husbands wishes, following her wedding vows...

[jackierabbit1]

I like the concept of Jackie as collateral on the loan, it does make sense with the extra ring, and the "in no hurry" to pay the loan back attitude. I could also see a childhood illness potentially rendering Jackie's true husband sterile, the doctor's not knowing for sure back then until the adult married Mike tried things out in the flesh, so to speak.

 A drunken request between best friends in a moment of weakness and doubt before the engagement also seems plausible, the best man at the wedding more than willing to be just a stand in for baby making duties, until he finds himself falling in love with Jackie. Could the ring payments have been held intentionally, until Mike either produced a child of his own, or humbly was forced to asked his friend for help?

Could this also be the reason a "catch" like Jack had no wife of his own yet, he waiting to see if his services were needed elsewhere, not wanting to "cheat" on his own wife or serious girlfriend to help Jackie? If that's the case, Jack has put a serious part of his life on hold, either altruistically for his best friend, or maybe selfishly to steal Jackie away and make her his real wife. I wonder what would happen if Tammy suggested the two love birds "renew" their vows as part of their anniversary honeymoon, maybe as part of some huge surprise party?

I intend to have Tammy have a power over Jackie, she not able to say "no" to her in the smallest of things, the conflict alone that could cause almost a story all by itself. Jack at some point will discover he has a similar power over her, but what he does with that power both short term, and long term, I haven't decided yet. Bedding her was easy, as compared to winning her heart.

I love the feedback you give me in these stories, the seeing things from your eyes aspect of this making these stories better, and I thank you for it, Jackie.

[feline]

Ooooh...

At the end of the current part, we are sort of left hanging, as Jackie tells the "perfect gentleman" Jack that she is basically there for the taking, but the only way he is going to get her, going to have her, is by really stepping up and TAKING her.  On the surface, given how careful, gentle and respectful he has been so far, all of the way through really, this seems quite unlikely.

Oh I am sure the desire and the urge is there, but is it going to overcome his long history and deeply ingrained habit of being polite and respectful towards his best friends wife, this taken woman...

But, if instead of the perfect gentleman he has been harbouring, and damping down a slowly growing passion for some time now, a love and a lust for Jackie, and using the "perfect gentleman" as the perfect straight jacket for his emotions, needs and desires...  if the passion and the drive is there to take Jackie in exactly this way just needs to be unleashed...

I don't think her "cryptic" comments would be enough on their own, but perhaps a few drinks, the right word or two, a bit of high adrenaline activity, high speed powerboat races, perhaps, to really get Jack worked up and weaken his resolve...

Yes, this could lead to the "locked door" bursting open, and the passion sweeping Jackie up and away.  But at the same time this is just a "holiday fling" at most for Jackie.  She is an actress playing a role, and everything will return to "normal" when she goes home, or so she keeps on telling herself.

Against this background I absolutely love the idea of then "renewing" their wedding vows, in front of various senior people from work, just to add the extra pressure for both of them, given Jackie will need to be presented going forward at various functions and events, as Jack's wife and partner.  This will both give Jack the "formal excuse" to let his passions out, and give Jackie both a really confusing situation to try and deal with, having made real and binding promises to two different men, especially if these are "old fashioned" vows, exactly the sort of "honour, obey, and now you are my property" that Tammy is likely to replace the more normal and traditional vows with!

Several times over Jackie has defended and excused her actions as following on from following through on her vows and promises, so this will really add to the split personalty effect that she is living with and fighting.  Also giving an opening, the thin end of the wedge, to start turning "simply a holiday fling, what happens in Vegas stays in Vegas" into something more, something that spreads out into the rest of her life, something that she cannot dismiss or compartmentalise the same way.

Throw in a "pregnancy scare" a week into the holiday...  maybe one of the things the company is working on is very early detection of pregnancy, and everyone gets a test kit, as part of a bundle of random products that different branches of the company makes, to help make them more aware of the broader company and its actions.  Suddenly the "never been able to get pregnant, assured it was her" Jackie is faced with "proof" that there is something going on, on top of all of the mystery of the second wedding ring, and secrets her husband has been keeping from her for years now...

[teanndaorsa]

Part 6 up today, enjoy.

[feline]

And playing catch up with myself again

As before, this is wonderfully well written, and very sexy and emotional!  It is good to see Jackie finally finding the right ways to explain, and encourage, Jack to give her the honeymoon experience she has decided that she is really after.  Seeing her have to work through this adds so much depth to the experience and the journey, but it also keeps me wondering just how much out side influence she is under...

Certainly some of this is coming out because this is who she really is, but at the same time, she is clearly being pushed and directed.

Talking of that, the bit with the visit in the hotel room, that just screams being monitored by cameras, so that Jack's boss knew just when to arrive, when to have the desired effect and impact...  Which just brings us to the next big questions, the sealed envelope, and the comment, well the requirement actually, for a no tan lines tan...  It feels like Jackie is almost "company property" at this point, being prepared, manoeuvred and used to get Jack where they want him, how they want him...

Very sexy and powerful, if also leaving a lot of unanswered questions about the goals of all of this...  way to keep us interested and motivated

[jackierabbit1]

Thank you. I think they're fun characters, and I think Jack is soon to discover that he too has a power over Jackie, that she can't say no to him. What he does with this knowledge will be quite telling, perhaps Jack hiding some serious jealousy over the wife his best friend has, and he's forced to borrow.

Thank you again, Jackie.

[teanndaorsa]

Part 7 up tonight, enjoy!

[T.H.]

This site can be quite the treasure trove.

This story is another one I just missed.
It was fun catching up.

It was something different, I mean it in a good way. It was a cuckold-story but kind of a wholesome one, without emotional hardship, extreme humiliation and alike.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading through it. I felt a connection to the people you created and I think I could relate to their feelings, motivations and emotions.

Well done! Thank you very much for sharing!

Tom

[jackierabbit1]

Thank you, Tom. I know from personal experience that not every cuckold is a wimpy wuss of a man, and while I know that's the cliche for such stories, I wanted this one to have real feeling characters. I think Jack and my alter ego will come to the conclusion that they are the true soulmates, and the only thing left to sort out is Jack's employer's true motivations, and of course how to deal with the first marriage (less than a year old) that works for everybody. Mike isn't really a bad guy either, just not a custom fit.

Thank you again for your kind words, Jackie.