Hello, I wanted to give you some quick feedback. Please don't take any offense from what I write to you. I found most of the story breathtakingly good, great ideas, I thought it was cool how detailed you described everything. However, there was one thing that bothered me and that was the reason, I found the explanation with the body taking over and her dying as a result extremely strange and I personally would have preferred something different. But otherwise it's still a great story. I'm looking forward to reading more stories from you in the future.