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Mummification => Mummified Stories feedback => Topic started by: teanndaorsa on September 01, 2021, 09:04:23 pm

Title: Attack of the Arachno-Bots by Papa Palpatine
Post by: teanndaorsa on September 01, 2021, 09:04:23 pm: You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.mummified.net/storiesad/attack_of_the_arachnobots1.html
Other/f; mum; machine; spider; robot; cocoon; plastic; wrap; drug; abducted; nc; X

https://www.mummified.net/storiesad/attack_of_the_arachnobots2.html
Sbf; mum; wrap; warehouse; machine; plastic; cocoon; mast; cons; X

https://www.mummified.net/storiesad/attack_of_the_arachnobots3.html
Other/f+; mum; plastic; bond; kidnap; net; nc; X

https://www.mummified.net/storiesad/attack_of_the_arachnobots4.html
Other/f+; mum; plastic; bond; kidnap; robot; drug; net; nc; X

https://www.mummified.net/storiesad/attack_of_the_arachnobots5.html
Other/f+; mum; plastic; bond; kidnap; robot; drug; cons; nc; X

https://www.mummified.net/storiesad/attack_of_the_arachnobots6.html
Other/f; bond; mum; plastic; wrap; spider; scifi; kidnap; robot; drug; mast; climax; nc; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks ;)
Title: Re: Attack of the Arachno-Bots by Papa Palpatine
Post by: Orion on September 17, 2021, 06:43:12 am: Good story! Hopefully we can see a sequel, giving the reason for the attacks, and what happens next?
Title: Re: Attack of the Arachno-Bots by Papa Palpatine
Post by: teanndaorsa on September 19, 2021, 07:45:56 pm: Indeed you can, up tonight
Title: Re: Attack of the Arachno-Bots by Papa Palpatine
Post by: PapaPalpatine on October 06, 2021, 09:34:18 pm: Quote from: Orion on September 17, 2021, 06:43:12 am
Good story! Hopefully we can see a sequel, giving the reason for the attacks, and what happens next?

Thanks, Glad you're enjoying the series. :D I recently finished Part 4 and it should be in the queue soon.
Title: Re: Attack of the Arachno-Bots by Papa Palpatine
Post by: PapaPalpatine on October 20, 2021, 07:32:54 am: I'm currently brainstorming Part 5, and hope to have it ready by the end of October or the early part of November.
Title: Re: Attack of the Arachno-Bots by Papa Palpatine
Post by: teanndaorsa on November 11, 2021, 10:52:54 pm: Part 4 up tonight!
Title: Re: Attack of the Arachno-Bots by Papa Palpatine
Post by: PapaPalpatine on December 09, 2021, 01:18:12 am: My apologies for the delays, real life gets in the way sometimes. I just sent in Part 5 of the series and it should be on the site soon. Thanks again to all who are following this series.
Title: Re: Attack of the Arachno-Bots by Papa Palpatine
Post by: teanndaorsa on December 09, 2021, 08:40:43 pm: Up tonight, enjoy
Title: Re: Attack of the Arachno-Bots by Papa Palpatine
Post by: PapaPalpatine on April 21, 2023, 09:59:38 pm: I finally finished the series finale and sent it in last night. Again, apologies for the delay, and enjoy.
Title: Re: Attack of the Arachno-Bots by Papa Palpatine
Post by: teanndaorsa on May 18, 2023, 07:45:02 pm: Last part up tonight, have fun with it!
Title: Re: Attack of the Arachno-Bots by Papa Palpatine
Post by: Oger59 on October 27, 2023, 11:27:42 am: Hello, I wanted to give you some quick feedback. Please don't take any offense from what I write to you. I found most of the story breathtakingly good, great ideas, I thought it was cool how detailed you described everything. However, there was one thing that bothered me and that was the reason, I found the explanation with the body taking over and her dying as a result extremely strange and I personally would have preferred something different. But otherwise it's still a great story. I'm looking forward to reading more stories from you in the future.