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#31
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/egyptian_arts_and_crafts.html
F+/m; F+/fm; mum; bond; bandages; vetwrap; cast; stuck; sex; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
#32
Are you trying to get my loyal fans to do something naughty to me?!

Tsk tsk!

If ever a group of readers should be the types to enjoh some tease & denial, I would think this is that audience!

I'm just giving them what they want.

Signed, Unappreciated Author!
#33
Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Scanned, Shipped, Printed ...
Last post by feline - June 20, 2025, 02:26:47 PM
Just thinking that us readers need to gather together and do a bit of "community outreach"...   I am sure we can explain our feelings about being constantly teased and denied the promised reward to the author in various creative and helpful ways...  so who is with me?!
#34
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Marry in Haste by Geetwo
Last post by feline - June 20, 2025, 12:04:27 PM
Normally I would not comment if I didn't finish the story, but this time I am making an exception.

I find myself torn between awe at the skilful depiction of Lisa, our central...  well, is "idiot" the right word?  Torn between awe at how wilfully ignorant and bull headed she is, paired with just wanting to cover my eyes so the stupidity will no longer be visible :)

I want to say no one can be this stupid, but I am quite aware the world seems to be strangely full of people who seem to believe that the culture and views they grew up with will "of course" apply anywhere and everywhere they go, and they have no need to even consider the local laws, rules and customs, since clearly they just don't apply to them...

The story is well told, an easy read, and Lisa, our central woman, makes all to much sense.  I do wonder what on earth possessed her husband to marry such an air head, but I assume it was the traditional answer of someone being attracted to something exotic, and thinking with his dick.

So it is no shock or surprise that everything came crashing down around Lisa's ears.  Talk about asking for it!

Well written, and have a look if you want to see wilful stupidity being "well" rewarded :)
#35
Latex Website Stories Feedback / Re: The Institute by Observer
Last post by Observer - June 19, 2025, 07:25:52 AM
Just confirming that the edits were done and the files have been sent to Teaan Daorsa :)
#36
Hi,
I very much enjoyed reading your story, Adventures of Locktober.
I thought your setup was great, Todd giving Amy the leather belt on a dare, her getting him the CB-2000 for Christmas. His eagerness to try it, but their struggle to get what they needed from it, and then the failed Locktober with the CB-3000. The next year, Todd's commitment to the challenge and Amy's determination to take control and ensure their success
I will mention two things, not because I believe they detract from or take away from the story.  I do it ONLY because I'm anal about such things. But that's just me, so don't let me distract you from writing more about Amy and Todd.
1. You set the story in 2021, and that October 1st was a Sunday. That doesn't work for 2021, but does for 2024.
2. There is Sunday, Day 22 (correct in 2024), but the next day is Day 24. Seems to be a missing day.

Keep up the good work.
Thanks,
Guardain
#37
Looking for a Story / MtF story
Last post by goldgunmatt - June 18, 2025, 11:24:34 PM
Hey folks,
Looking for a story that focuses on a young man's situation where he is sent to prison, but is allowed to leave if he undergoes hormone therapy and the various surgeries that transform him into a woman. It has a number of parts to it, as well. Any help is appreciated.

Many thanks,
m
#38
Maybe "saved" isbthe wrong word to use. Maybe "here's your shovel how deep can you dig" is better.

Yes, Phil has been left stuck, helpless and extremely frustrated. Rather like the readers. *evil laugh*.

But don't fret there's a payoff.

-Evil Author
#39
Maidbots.net stories feedback / Re: Undercover Maidbot by Meli...
Last post by feline - June 17, 2025, 06:16:15 PM
Part 5 flows, but I read most of it wondering where this was going, and with a growing sadness in my heart.  I found myself really connecting with Ursula, feeling for her, admiring what she was doing and achieving, celebrating each and every one of her steps, of her triumphs!

Watching her grow and blossom like this really was so precious, so wonderful.  I did wonder what was going on with her husband, as Jackie said, the phone message really does feel like it said a lot more than the words alone, and that it was a sense of secret being shared between two women, and an agreement happening to keep the wife out of the loop, and to avoid "bothering" her with things that she simply didn't need to know about, or think about.

This certainly suggests that our husband is going to be open to being away a lot, or to seeing his wife as a less important person in his life, which is going to make things a lot easier.

I felt sad because I was concerned that all of Ursula's growth as a thinking and feeling being was going to be snuffed out, like a candle going out, at the end of the three days.  I was hoping some way could be found to allow her periodic time as a human, even if is only being done by her and the wife swapping their roles now and then.

But the ending...  suddenly so much hope, but also such massive wickedness looms on the horizon!  There seems to be a really deep vein of wickedness in both Eleanor and Nicole.  It isn't said, but there is something in the tone of all of this that says that getting Melissa to agree to spend more time as a maid bot was less a polite agreement and more of a forced issue.

So presenting Melissa with Ursula as an honoured and respected human guest at the party, while she is a maid bot...  well, the emotional impact of that is going to be very significant!

This part was so well written, and raises some really big questions about who is alive, who deserves to be treated as alive, and what their future holds.
#40
Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Scanned, Shipped, Printed ...
Last post by feline - June 17, 2025, 05:09:50 PM
What an interesting definition of "saved" you have...

You know, if I didn't know better, this amazing story has left Phil standing around, helpless, trapped, contained...  not to mention teased, denied and waiting to see what happens next...  Unless you are trying to tell me this is all there is to Phil's adventures?!

Could it be that our beloved and wonderful Admin is just handing you rope with with to bind yourself, and letting you get yourself into trouble?
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