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#21
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Roxy Music by Larkshead76
Last post by gitefetichistes - January 22, 2025, 06:24:34 AMA superb story, thank you for sharing
#22
Bondage Stories / Re: Wrong way to break the new...
Last post by gitefetichistes - January 22, 2025, 05:46:35 AMA very sympathetic story
#23
Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Re: Sam and Em by ForeverAlter...
Last post by Killthebeast - January 21, 2025, 04:34:36 PMThx again for such a delightful chapter. The whole one feels like our characters grew up and understood what they wanted the most. Becky is now save from an "unstable" stranger Mistress.
I find it nice that drama was svoidet, could see Sam and Em fighting, but good that they seem understanding with the "Becky-Kiss".
Sam defending Becky wasd for sure the moment when Emily knew that is anything would happen in the future, Sam will defend Em the same way.
Mentioning the key to Sam now is a sign that Emily is ready to completely become Em's property i believe.
I find it nice that drama was svoidet, could see Sam and Em fighting, but good that they seem understanding with the "Becky-Kiss".
Sam defending Becky wasd for sure the moment when Emily knew that is anything would happen in the future, Sam will defend Em the same way.
Mentioning the key to Sam now is a sign that Emily is ready to completely become Em's property i believe.
#24
Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Re: Be Careful What You Wish F...
Last post by jackierabbit1 - January 21, 2025, 01:48:12 AMThank you, and I sincerely mean that. Guy on guy anything is something I personally have zero experience with, but I do interact with some guys in the lifestyle, and for the most part they seem quite happy with their life choices. I've obviously done some "out-there" things myself, so I'm nobody to judge what anybody else enjoys and all of that. In my mind if you're not hurting anybody else, have fun and play safe.
Anyway, I was more thinking about fantasies here, and the ones we sometimes have that in the real world might not be all that good for us, hens the getting caught by somebody that might take advantage; so something both playfully wanted, and obviously insane, all at the same time. In the real world though, I'd imagine a submissive guy who was bi-curious might fantasize about getting caught in a helpless self-made predicament, and therefore had no choice but to be super cooperative for his captor. I myself like the concept of getting dumped off somewhere less that fully clothed, maybe while cuffed as well, and then either having to hide, or even run away for my very survival; so this little scenario was maybe a version of that.
So, in the next chapter of this series, the main character gets something else that he maybe wished for, but in reality won't like at all once it lands in his proverbial lap. He's truthfully not my favorite character, so several character flaws that others can easily exploit, which they do in time.
Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to drop a constructive little note as well, Jackie.
Anyway, I was more thinking about fantasies here, and the ones we sometimes have that in the real world might not be all that good for us, hens the getting caught by somebody that might take advantage; so something both playfully wanted, and obviously insane, all at the same time. In the real world though, I'd imagine a submissive guy who was bi-curious might fantasize about getting caught in a helpless self-made predicament, and therefore had no choice but to be super cooperative for his captor. I myself like the concept of getting dumped off somewhere less that fully clothed, maybe while cuffed as well, and then either having to hide, or even run away for my very survival; so this little scenario was maybe a version of that.
So, in the next chapter of this series, the main character gets something else that he maybe wished for, but in reality won't like at all once it lands in his proverbial lap. He's truthfully not my favorite character, so several character flaws that others can easily exploit, which they do in time.
Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to drop a constructive little note as well, Jackie.
#25
Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Just Another Box by Grimm ...
Last post by grimm_searcher - January 20, 2025, 11:55:40 PMThanks catman65! I think I work a bit differently than most writers because I create the entire story in my head before I start typing the first word. So for me it's not about coming up with more ideas, it's about finding time to get the story already in my head written down. While I'm normally reluctant to do spoilers, since you were kind enough to write and are interested in reading more about the voice I'll share that the next chapter will resolve the entire box story arc and if you like the voice character that might be disappointing to you.
Per my comments to feline earlier in this thread, I originally planned on the "final" chapter both finishing the box story arc and then following it with a kind of denouement about what happens to Natsuko afterwards, but I'm leaning now towards finishing the box story arc and if folks want more on Natsuko and Paul then I'll have an alternate ending with what amounts to a brand now chapter on what happens outside the box.
At one point I even wrote a kind of sequel in my head where 18 year old Erika and her friend find the trunk in the attic. So again, if readers want more Natsuko, I could conceivably add yet one more chapter after the conclusion to the box arc, and after the outside the box chapter.
My "kids" often talk about fan fiction so if you or anyone else wanted to crate an alternate storyline where the voice hangs around longer than my next closure part describes, I'd be flattered to have someone write a fan faction alternative to my ending.
Honestly, I've probably got a dozen other stories in my head I'd like to get out there which is why I'm looking at concluding the box story arc, going off and writing at least one or two more of my newer ones, and then maybe coming back to finish Natsuko's story, but this time without a 10+ year cliffhanger.
Thanks again for your comments! Even with the complete story in my head, it's a lot of work to type up and edit, often multiple times to get it to a point I'm comfortable posting it. so hearing that people like yourself are enjoying my writing is what motivates me to find the time to write more
Per my comments to feline earlier in this thread, I originally planned on the "final" chapter both finishing the box story arc and then following it with a kind of denouement about what happens to Natsuko afterwards, but I'm leaning now towards finishing the box story arc and if folks want more on Natsuko and Paul then I'll have an alternate ending with what amounts to a brand now chapter on what happens outside the box.
At one point I even wrote a kind of sequel in my head where 18 year old Erika and her friend find the trunk in the attic. So again, if readers want more Natsuko, I could conceivably add yet one more chapter after the conclusion to the box arc, and after the outside the box chapter.
My "kids" often talk about fan fiction so if you or anyone else wanted to crate an alternate storyline where the voice hangs around longer than my next closure part describes, I'd be flattered to have someone write a fan faction alternative to my ending.
Honestly, I've probably got a dozen other stories in my head I'd like to get out there which is why I'm looking at concluding the box story arc, going off and writing at least one or two more of my newer ones, and then maybe coming back to finish Natsuko's story, but this time without a 10+ year cliffhanger.
Thanks again for your comments! Even with the complete story in my head, it's a lot of work to type up and edit, often multiple times to get it to a point I'm comfortable posting it. so hearing that people like yourself are enjoying my writing is what motivates me to find the time to write more
#26
Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Re: Be Careful What You Wish F...
Last post by thepinkbishop - January 20, 2025, 04:48:27 PMSadly this one didn't really do it for me. I like the playful way you write and enjoyed some of the 'philosophy'.
At the end of the day I don't really enjoy M-m stories much. However, I'm sure others do.
At the end of the day I don't really enjoy M-m stories much. However, I'm sure others do.
#27
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Roxy Music by Larkshead76
Last post by thepinkbishop - January 20, 2025, 04:45:24 PMThis was a pretty hot story. Your first one I see. Thanks for sharing. Dawn certainly had a good time.
I think you could have made it better if you'd planned it out a bit more. You'd clearly thought of an opening and a bit of background but the action seemed a bit disjointed with the jumping of perspective and the way things escalated towards the end.
I think you could have made it better if you'd planned it out a bit more. You'd clearly thought of an opening and a bit of background but the action seemed a bit disjointed with the jumping of perspective and the way things escalated towards the end.
#28
Maidbots.net stories feedback / Re: A Lawyer Re:maid by Chaos ...
Last post by jackierabbit1 - January 20, 2025, 09:41:51 AMThat was extremely hot! I loved the slow slide down, loved the submission, loved how the machines maybe had a master plan too; their optimism towards their own future. I suspect Ami will be necessarily ruthless with her new maidbot, maintaining the strict lines of separation between master and subordinate. I'm also left to wonder if the grocery store cashier will have a visit from a very submissive and cooperative Emi in the near future...
This is also a good example of how to wrap up a story in a single chapter, something I could do a bit better myself.
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
This is also a good example of how to wrap up a story in a single chapter, something I could do a bit better myself.
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
#29
TrashcanStories Feedback / Re: Lockdown Lovers by Dumpste...
Last post by DumpsterLife - January 20, 2025, 01:21:45 AMQuote from: Mercer on January 16, 2025, 10:00:54 PMVery good read! Glad those two got to meet eachother. I really enjoyed when they started flirting and he teased her about leaving her in there.
Thank you for the kind words, it's much appreciated!
#30
TrashcanStories Feedback / Re: Lockdown Lovers by Dumpste...
Last post by DumpsterLife - January 20, 2025, 01:21:14 AMQuote from: Trash girl on January 13, 2025, 02:16:47 AMWhat an awsome story i want sequal's to this 100% thre are more to explore for nathan and emy and more things to annoy hayly and nicole with haha i had a blast reading this
There may well be more to come...
Thank you for the kind words.
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