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#21
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / How Ethan Met Claire by Zoe Co...
Last post by teanndaorsa - July 18, 2026, 09:36:32 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/how_ethan_met_claire.html
M/f; D/s; corset; costume; gloves; cons; X
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https://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/how_ethan_met_claire.html
M/f; D/s; corset; costume; gloves; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks
#22
Looking for a Story / Re: Stories About Twins
Last post by loras pa6 - July 18, 2026, 02:42:28 AMQuote from: subgrrl on July 17, 2026, 07:35:52 PMI think this may be the story you are talking about. There may be other parts, too?
The Box by jessicablank
That was indeed the one I was thinking of subgrrl
#23
Looking for a Story / Re: Stories About Twins
Last post by subgrrl - July 17, 2026, 07:35:52 PMI think this may be the story you are talking about. There may be other parts, too?
The Box by jessicablank
The Box by jessicablank
#24
Looking for a Story / Re: Stories About Twins
Last post by loras pa6 - July 17, 2026, 01:11:23 AMI can't remember the name of it, but there was one I read somewhere about a pair of twin college aged girls who I think were rich, essentially disappeared from the public view. Their friend started looking for them and found them in their home with one twin having the other completely immobilized in bondage. All was not as it seems and hijinks were had
Maybe this will kick start someone else's memory who might remember the title
Maybe this will kick start someone else's memory who might remember the title
#25
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: BDSM Boot Camp by The Tech...
Last post by ace35 - July 17, 2026, 01:00:05 AMSorry about the online publisher loss, but it is our gain, for what it is worth you are a very talented author and I have read most everything I can find from you and looking forward to many more stories from you in the future!
#26
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by twistedsmile - July 16, 2026, 11:43:42 PM08. "Strip" Commentary
This was one of those story ideas that started with thinking up 'S' words. What I didn't consider at the time was a striptease is a very visual act - so you have to be a damn good writer to do it justice in prose. I did my best... But it feels like a lot of "she went over here and did this, then she went over there and did that."
"I didn't know how long she planned to make me wear the cage" - I stuck Mark in the cage at the end of chapter 7, as 'punishment' for not being pegged. The thing is, I already did chastity cage in chapter 2, and didn't/don't have much else to say on the subject. So it's kind of incidental in this story.
"She closed her eyes, covered her face with both hands. She took a deep breath" - going back to what I said in an earlier commentary, she was self-conscious about her body; and while she's gotten more confident (in general) as the stories go on, there's still a bit of that anxiety in her - especially for this act which is very much focused on her body.
"The music started" - The song that plays in my head is "The Stripper" by David Rose & His Orchestra. You'd know it if you heard it (BAH-da-BAH ba-DAH-da-BAH).
"Strip." / "Slower!" she demanded, "Sexier..." - it's a two-way strip tease! Turns out women objectify men too, if you can believe it.
"wiggling my fingers like jazz-hands" - sometimes my impulse towards silliness takes over.
" A corset!" / "Fin-dom's not so bad after all, huh?" - I was thinking I'd like to put some leather and/or a corset in a story, but it kind of didn't really fit the series' money-conscious ethos. Then I remembered the £200 Sophie spent in interlude 5.5 which was unaccounted for, and this seemed like a fine place to put a corset. I didn't bother to check if you can actually get a leather corset for £200 (or less), mind you
"she took the cuffs from the bed" - I thought it would be fun to contrast Sophie adding more and more bonds to Mark as she removes more and more of her clothes. I also wanted Mark to be more actively involved, rather than just passively watching.
"You know, since you liked sucking dick so much." - I just really liked that line. Sophie made Mark suck a (fake) dick and now she making fun of him for it
"she took the gag all the way into her own mouth without flinching" / "See, not so hard?" - weird power move, but I dig it
"pulled away one hand to reveal... she was giving me the middle finger" - there's that silliness again
"Shall we play a game?" - WarGames
I'm quite fond of this section. It has a real energy that the first half was kind of lacking. This is the second meaning of the title - for what is escaping if not stripping (of bonds).
"should have stretched..." callback to chapters 4 and 6. Listen, stretching is important in BDSM
"there was nothing anchoring the ropes to the chair" - I can't decide if this was an over-sight on Sophie's part, or if she just thought that Mark wouldn't figure it out.
"Come here, you!" - Marks latent desire for dominance showing itself again, setting up chapter 10
"I'd come out on top, and I was going to enjoy her" - I mean, don't you think he deserves a win, at least once? Like I said earlier, I already did the chastity cage story, so having him lose would have been a narrative dead-end.
I would invite you to reflect on whether Sophie let him win. She certainly seemed like she wasn't playing fair, but then, Mark got out pretty easily, don't you think?
"no... fair..." - it was tempting to have Mark mirror Sophie's 'who said anything about fair' line. But I think readers are smart enough to make that connection without having it spelled out.
"how did she get the corset on in the first place?" - I don't know either. I was unsure whether to have Sophie remove the corset while doing the strip tease. I kept it on, because it felt like a bit of a waste if she didn't wear it for very long. Tho it goes unmentioned through the escape section, so I guess it doesn't really make a difference. This line is mostly to remind readers that she did indeed keep it on.
"I love you." - first time either character explicitly says 'I love you' in the series. Didn't earn the story the 'rom' tag, tho. But then, none of the stories have to date. Not that I'm bitter about it
This was one of those story ideas that started with thinking up 'S' words. What I didn't consider at the time was a striptease is a very visual act - so you have to be a damn good writer to do it justice in prose. I did my best... But it feels like a lot of "she went over here and did this, then she went over there and did that."
"I didn't know how long she planned to make me wear the cage" - I stuck Mark in the cage at the end of chapter 7, as 'punishment' for not being pegged. The thing is, I already did chastity cage in chapter 2, and didn't/don't have much else to say on the subject. So it's kind of incidental in this story.
"She closed her eyes, covered her face with both hands. She took a deep breath" - going back to what I said in an earlier commentary, she was self-conscious about her body; and while she's gotten more confident (in general) as the stories go on, there's still a bit of that anxiety in her - especially for this act which is very much focused on her body.
"The music started" - The song that plays in my head is "The Stripper" by David Rose & His Orchestra. You'd know it if you heard it (BAH-da-BAH ba-DAH-da-BAH).
"Strip." / "Slower!" she demanded, "Sexier..." - it's a two-way strip tease! Turns out women objectify men too, if you can believe it.
"wiggling my fingers like jazz-hands" - sometimes my impulse towards silliness takes over.
" A corset!" / "Fin-dom's not so bad after all, huh?" - I was thinking I'd like to put some leather and/or a corset in a story, but it kind of didn't really fit the series' money-conscious ethos. Then I remembered the £200 Sophie spent in interlude 5.5 which was unaccounted for, and this seemed like a fine place to put a corset. I didn't bother to check if you can actually get a leather corset for £200 (or less), mind you
"she took the cuffs from the bed" - I thought it would be fun to contrast Sophie adding more and more bonds to Mark as she removes more and more of her clothes. I also wanted Mark to be more actively involved, rather than just passively watching.
"You know, since you liked sucking dick so much." - I just really liked that line. Sophie made Mark suck a (fake) dick and now she making fun of him for it
"she took the gag all the way into her own mouth without flinching" / "See, not so hard?" - weird power move, but I dig it
"pulled away one hand to reveal... she was giving me the middle finger" - there's that silliness again
"Shall we play a game?" - WarGames
I'm quite fond of this section. It has a real energy that the first half was kind of lacking. This is the second meaning of the title - for what is escaping if not stripping (of bonds).
"should have stretched..." callback to chapters 4 and 6. Listen, stretching is important in BDSM
"there was nothing anchoring the ropes to the chair" - I can't decide if this was an over-sight on Sophie's part, or if she just thought that Mark wouldn't figure it out.
"Come here, you!" - Marks latent desire for dominance showing itself again, setting up chapter 10
"I'd come out on top, and I was going to enjoy her" - I mean, don't you think he deserves a win, at least once? Like I said earlier, I already did the chastity cage story, so having him lose would have been a narrative dead-end.
I would invite you to reflect on whether Sophie let him win. She certainly seemed like she wasn't playing fair, but then, Mark got out pretty easily, don't you think?
"no... fair..." - it was tempting to have Mark mirror Sophie's 'who said anything about fair' line. But I think readers are smart enough to make that connection without having it spelled out.
"how did she get the corset on in the first place?" - I don't know either. I was unsure whether to have Sophie remove the corset while doing the strip tease. I kept it on, because it felt like a bit of a waste if she didn't wear it for very long. Tho it goes unmentioned through the escape section, so I guess it doesn't really make a difference. This line is mostly to remind readers that she did indeed keep it on.
"I love you." - first time either character explicitly says 'I love you' in the series. Didn't earn the story the 'rom' tag, tho. But then, none of the stories have to date. Not that I'm bitter about it
#27
Looking for a Story / Re: Stories About Twins
Last post by Caras pet - July 16, 2026, 01:04:08 PMStorycode "twins" and added the suggestions in this thread:
I hope that scratches your itch
I hope that scratches your itch
#28
Looking for a Story / Re: Stories About Twins
Last post by bevisjame - July 16, 2026, 11:14:17 AMQuote from: SwitchMan on April 03, 2016, 07:34:54 PMI am in the mood for a story about twins. Any suggestions?I love the idea of exploring the complex dynamics between twins. How about a story where one twin, feeling overshadowed and neglected, orchestrates a kidnapping of the other to force their parents to pay attention? It could delve into themes of jealousy, identity, and the lengths one would go for recognition.
It could be: Twin kidnaps other twin (for revenge, inheritance, etc.); Twins work together to abduct someone else; or Twins are kidnapped by another.
Thanks in advance for any thoughts.
SwitchMan slope game 2
#29
Intros / Re: About Rajah Dodger, the of...
Last post by Eido - July 15, 2026, 08:05:42 AMWelcome, Rajah Dodger, and it's nice to see someone in a similar demographic. By demographic I mean "in computers for 40 years" I look forward to reading your stories.
Eido
Eido
#30
Intros / Re: About Rajah Dodger, the of...
Last post by uirkygulp - July 15, 2026, 03:29:32 AMQuote from: Rajah Dodger on July 09, 2026, 03:08:57 AM(I had a couple of sentences to say here before adding the following, but by the time I got everything together I'd been logged out. So I'll just leave the prewritten part. Nice to be here with you all.)I especially liked the line about being told to "show them how it is done"—that's a relatable way many writers get started. Looking forward to checking out some of your stories and seeing the range from dark fiction to lighter pieces.
Rajah Dodger is a citizen of Texas, both by birth and current residence. A man in his midlife (that's as close to demographics as he will authorize), he has been "in computers" for more than 40 years and makes his living in Houston, not far from one of the world's largest street view [targets] centers of petrochemical production. He speaks English, reads some Spanish, and writes in a variety of computer languages.
Once upon a time he cursed the darkness of badly written stories on adult computer bulletin boards. Then a voice came to him (probably from one of the neighbors fed up with his whining), saying "Go thou and show them how it is done, for in truth you cannot do much worse." And thereby hangs a tale -- over a hundred of them by now -- with no outraged villagers coming yet to burn his house down. He writes about most anything that catches his fancy, whether it's darkly nasty stroke or socially redeeming fluff.
None of his family suspect that he is a published author; his wife considers him merely strange, and his children don't consider adults to be members of a relevant species anyway. When not working or writing, he plays cards, reads science fiction, listens to classical and rock music, and watches television.
Finally, to answer the inevitable question, his pen name has nothing to do with either the Indian subcontinent or any desire to escape law enforcement. (Well, if you must know... that was a long time ago and he was under age.) It actually comes from a combination of Charles Dickens and British pilot slang. The rest of the etymology is left as an exercise for the astute student.
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