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Looking for a Story / Re: 2 rival witches getting pu...
Last post by SwitchMan - July 07, 2026, 12:17:10 AMIt sounds like a good candidate for next year's Halloween collection of stories. I would love to read it!
#22
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by twistedsmile - July 06, 2026, 11:40:35 PM05. "Spaniels" Commentary
The section titles are all varieties of spaniels. Turns out there aren't that many. I tried to assign the titles in a way that was vaguely thematic; 'water' being the most apposite, and 'cocker' being the most crude (cock her? I hardly know her).
"Welsh lady" - I'm not very good at giving characters distinct 'voices', so giving them a strong accent is an easy cheat. We are blessed, in the UK, to have so many to choose from.
"the bad website" - Amazon. I don't know where we stand with using real brands, but I didn't want to be accused of being sponsored by or endorsing anything. Given my rule about the characters being money conscious, likely most of their toys are cheap stuff off the bad website.
"Spaniel?" - the first breed that popped into Mark's head, because it's the word Sophie won with on Scrabble night (chapter 3)
"The size looked okay" - I'm not sure if a dog collar would actually fit an adult human man. Maybe one for a beefy boy, like an XL bully?
"We ducked behind a shelf" - in an earlier draft, Sophie put the collar around Mark's next right in front of Joan, which felt a little too brazen.
"The name'sh 'Bond'" - Sean Connery accent, of course. The name 'Bond' is 3 references for the price of one: the obvious, James Bond; the pun, bond(age); and a reference to the pet dog in 'Spy x Family' (calling back to chapter 3 "you watch too much anime")
"IF LOST RETURN TO SOPHIE..." - this is engraved on the reverse of the collar's name tag. The traditional meaning is: if Mark is misplaced, anyone who finds him should return him to his owner, Sophie (as one would a lost dog). It can also be read as a directive/mantra for Mark - if he's ever 'lost' in the existential sense, then he can find solace in Sophie. This second meaning will come back.
"Come along, 'Bond'..." - Doctor Who reference. Bond is in scare quotes because Mark chose the name unilaterally, and Sophie doesn't approve.
"If she could have given me a tail" - yes, I'm aware. But Mark isn't. (see chapter 6)
"Good boy." - apologies to Eido for how often I use this phrase
"I sat back on my knees, with my palms on my thighs." - callback to chapter 2
"BL manga" - BL = boys love (gay). Foreshadowing.
"I staaaared at her" - I had a dog that did that. She didn't bark, she just stood by the door and stared at me until I noticed and let her out.
"Did Timmy fall in the old well?" - cliche, low hanging fruit
"Oi-eht..." - 'toilette'. Open for interpretation whether she makes him pee in the garden as punishment for breaking the 'no talking' rule, or if she would have done it anyway.
"Dogs pee in the garden." - on this, I took inspiration from the manga 'Nana & Kaoru'. It's not about the urine, per se, it's about breaking one's inhibitions, and being able to do so because the dom(me) provides the sub with a feeling of psychological safety - "She'd take care of me, and everything would be okay." Granted, some people are quite comfortable with urinating in public, but doing it naked in bondage heightens the stress of the situation. I did worry that the urine stuff would put people off. I mean, I was a little wary when 'Nana & Kaoru' started heading down that path. But in the end, I 'got it'. Anyway, hopefully my execution of it is tasteful, at least.
"I felt her calm" - I felt that she was calm, I shared her feeling of calmness
"A light came on in a neighbour's bedroom" - foreshadowing
"chocolate spread" - nutella
"smeared the chocolate on her pussy" - reference to that urban legend about the girl who smears peanut butter on her crotch and gets the pet dog lick it off
"She turned over onto all fours" - doggy-style. Had to be done.
"I imagined a collar around her neck" / "not that I didn't enjoy it" - our first hints that maybe their roles aren't set in stone; and maybe they'll switch in, say, chapter 10
"It was HORRENDOUS [...] I guess it wasn't SO bad" - Sophie can be quite manipulative
"have you heard of 'ponygirls'?" - ponygirls are one of my kinks (as the writer). But it doesn't really 'fit' into the world of Sophie and Mark, so this is kind of me poking fun at myself.
5.5 "Invitation" Commentary
These point-5 stories start with 'I' because they're interludes. The interludes are meant to bridge the gap between 'seasons', and sometimes foreshadow future stories. If I were posting them on my own site, I probably would make them standalones, but by the plaza's standards they're much too short, so they get tagged onto the end of the season finales.
When I was brainstorming story ideas I came to findom; the opening line "I just don't get it" is me (the writer) speaking. But I played out the dialogue in my head and it went in the direction of Sophie inviting Mark to move in. I was going to do it off-screen, but this was better.
I chose the amount £200 (~$265) because it felt big enough to raise an eyebrow without being malicious. I didn't have anything in mind at the time for what Sophie bought with the money, but I assumed it would be sex toys or such like. This eventually pays off in chapter 8.
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I'll leave it at that for now, and stop spamming people who're only following the thread for actual story updates/feedback
The section titles are all varieties of spaniels. Turns out there aren't that many. I tried to assign the titles in a way that was vaguely thematic; 'water' being the most apposite, and 'cocker' being the most crude (cock her? I hardly know her).
"Welsh lady" - I'm not very good at giving characters distinct 'voices', so giving them a strong accent is an easy cheat. We are blessed, in the UK, to have so many to choose from.
"the bad website" - Amazon. I don't know where we stand with using real brands, but I didn't want to be accused of being sponsored by or endorsing anything. Given my rule about the characters being money conscious, likely most of their toys are cheap stuff off the bad website.
"Spaniel?" - the first breed that popped into Mark's head, because it's the word Sophie won with on Scrabble night (chapter 3)
"The size looked okay" - I'm not sure if a dog collar would actually fit an adult human man. Maybe one for a beefy boy, like an XL bully?
"We ducked behind a shelf" - in an earlier draft, Sophie put the collar around Mark's next right in front of Joan, which felt a little too brazen.
"The name'sh 'Bond'" - Sean Connery accent, of course. The name 'Bond' is 3 references for the price of one: the obvious, James Bond; the pun, bond(age); and a reference to the pet dog in 'Spy x Family' (calling back to chapter 3 "you watch too much anime")
"IF LOST RETURN TO SOPHIE..." - this is engraved on the reverse of the collar's name tag. The traditional meaning is: if Mark is misplaced, anyone who finds him should return him to his owner, Sophie (as one would a lost dog). It can also be read as a directive/mantra for Mark - if he's ever 'lost' in the existential sense, then he can find solace in Sophie. This second meaning will come back.
"Come along, 'Bond'..." - Doctor Who reference. Bond is in scare quotes because Mark chose the name unilaterally, and Sophie doesn't approve.
"If she could have given me a tail" - yes, I'm aware. But Mark isn't. (see chapter 6)
"Good boy." - apologies to Eido for how often I use this phrase
"I sat back on my knees, with my palms on my thighs." - callback to chapter 2
"BL manga" - BL = boys love (gay). Foreshadowing.
"I staaaared at her" - I had a dog that did that. She didn't bark, she just stood by the door and stared at me until I noticed and let her out.
"Did Timmy fall in the old well?" - cliche, low hanging fruit
"Oi-eht..." - 'toilette'. Open for interpretation whether she makes him pee in the garden as punishment for breaking the 'no talking' rule, or if she would have done it anyway.
"Dogs pee in the garden." - on this, I took inspiration from the manga 'Nana & Kaoru'. It's not about the urine, per se, it's about breaking one's inhibitions, and being able to do so because the dom(me) provides the sub with a feeling of psychological safety - "She'd take care of me, and everything would be okay." Granted, some people are quite comfortable with urinating in public, but doing it naked in bondage heightens the stress of the situation. I did worry that the urine stuff would put people off. I mean, I was a little wary when 'Nana & Kaoru' started heading down that path. But in the end, I 'got it'. Anyway, hopefully my execution of it is tasteful, at least.
"I felt her calm" - I felt that she was calm, I shared her feeling of calmness
"A light came on in a neighbour's bedroom" - foreshadowing
"chocolate spread" - nutella
"smeared the chocolate on her pussy" - reference to that urban legend about the girl who smears peanut butter on her crotch and gets the pet dog lick it off
"She turned over onto all fours" - doggy-style. Had to be done.
"I imagined a collar around her neck" / "not that I didn't enjoy it" - our first hints that maybe their roles aren't set in stone; and maybe they'll switch in, say, chapter 10
"It was HORRENDOUS [...] I guess it wasn't SO bad" - Sophie can be quite manipulative
"have you heard of 'ponygirls'?" - ponygirls are one of my kinks (as the writer). But it doesn't really 'fit' into the world of Sophie and Mark, so this is kind of me poking fun at myself.
5.5 "Invitation" Commentary
These point-5 stories start with 'I' because they're interludes. The interludes are meant to bridge the gap between 'seasons', and sometimes foreshadow future stories. If I were posting them on my own site, I probably would make them standalones, but by the plaza's standards they're much too short, so they get tagged onto the end of the season finales.
When I was brainstorming story ideas I came to findom; the opening line "I just don't get it" is me (the writer) speaking. But I played out the dialogue in my head and it went in the direction of Sophie inviting Mark to move in. I was going to do it off-screen, but this was better.
I chose the amount £200 (~$265) because it felt big enough to raise an eyebrow without being malicious. I didn't have anything in mind at the time for what Sophie bought with the money, but I assumed it would be sex toys or such like. This eventually pays off in chapter 8.
---
I'll leave it at that for now, and stop spamming people who're only following the thread for actual story updates/feedback
#23
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by twistedsmile - July 06, 2026, 11:25:27 PMQuote from: teanndaorsa on July 06, 2026, 10:18:17 PMThose ones are coming, next week, just a processing glitch that put chapter 11 first!
All good. In that case, I appreciate you putting something out at all
#24
Looking for a Story / Re: 2 rival witches getting pu...
Last post by Geetwo - July 06, 2026, 11:20:20 PMI wrote this story and posted it to my site (Geetwostories.com) many years ago, but the site is now defunct and unavailable. However, I do still have the original and can send you a copy if you email me at writergeetwo@gmail.com
#25
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by teanndaorsa - July 06, 2026, 10:18:17 PMQuote from: twistedsmile on July 05, 2026, 11:41:51 PMTeann has thrown me a curveball by skipping over the two stories I submitted after chapter 10, and has just posted chapter 11. So, ignore what I said last week
Those ones are coming, next week, just a processing glitch that put chapter 11 first!
#26
Looking for a Story / 2 rival witches getting punish...
Last post by boleklolek90 - July 06, 2026, 10:10:02 PMHi everyone, It's me again with another hunt for an older story.
I'll do my best to describe the story as much as I can - no quotes or exact names, just a description.
The story takes place in a village and it's surroundings.
Two rival witches/sorceresses are fighting against each other, terrorizing the villagers while at it.
A man passing through the village notices that and reveals himself as a powerful wizard.
He decides it's time to teach the 2 women a lesson and he strips them of their power, binds them in magical bondage and to humiliate them even more puts rings on them (nose if I recall).
They are sent to the village to work off their debt.
The wizard revisits the village after some time and offers the witches to free them,
but warns them that he cannot undo the piercings.
They quickly accept only to realize that now they are powerless and can't even protect themselves.
The locals offer them a way out - they can stay as slaves to pay off the remaining debt and then get freed.
They accept and get re-schackled by the blacksmith only to learn that they had been tricked.
They still need to earn their keep in addition to the debt so they will pretty much be slaves forever.
That's the end.
Thanks in advance to all those who bother to read all that
I'll do my best to describe the story as much as I can - no quotes or exact names, just a description.
The story takes place in a village and it's surroundings.
Two rival witches/sorceresses are fighting against each other, terrorizing the villagers while at it.
A man passing through the village notices that and reveals himself as a powerful wizard.
He decides it's time to teach the 2 women a lesson and he strips them of their power, binds them in magical bondage and to humiliate them even more puts rings on them (nose if I recall).
They are sent to the village to work off their debt.
The wizard revisits the village after some time and offers the witches to free them,
but warns them that he cannot undo the piercings.
They quickly accept only to realize that now they are powerless and can't even protect themselves.
The locals offer them a way out - they can stay as slaves to pay off the remaining debt and then get freed.
They accept and get re-schackled by the blacksmith only to learn that they had been tricked.
They still need to earn their keep in addition to the debt so they will pretty much be slaves forever.
That's the end.
Thanks in advance to all those who bother to read all that
#27
Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: How I Became Just Another ...
Last post by totalitarus - July 06, 2026, 04:16:45 PMI Had to register just to relay my admiration to both Emma's adventures.
I thought it's hard to think of a good story for Emma to continue. But you keep surprising us with amazing ideas.
I'm translating this for my friend and she loves your work. Especially the occasional insight into Emmma's mind.
P.S. Would you ever write one short chapter from the perspective of Ollie? As a one time spin-off?
I thought it's hard to think of a good story for Emma to continue. But you keep surprising us with amazing ideas.
I'm translating this for my friend and she loves your work. Especially the occasional insight into Emmma's mind.
P.S. Would you ever write one short chapter from the perspective of Ollie? As a one time spin-off?
#28
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Sophie and Mark by Twisted...
Last post by twistedsmile - July 05, 2026, 11:41:51 PM04. "Steer" Commentary
Another pun: steer as in cow (for the cowboy motifs), and as in 'giving directions' ("not that I didn't appreciate directions").
"pink, bedazzled cowboy hat" - I thought it would be fun to give Sophie some cowboy accessories. But this is the UK, people don't just have cowboy hats lying around, and she's not going to buy a new one for a joke. Then I remembered pink cowboy hats are a common accessory for a 'hen-do' (bachelorette party)
"I lived in a 'modest' flat" - Sophie and Mark live separately mostly so that Mark could be sent away in the chastity cage at the start of chapter 2. Mark lives in a flat (apartment) because it's easier for him to give it up when he moves in with Sophie (as opposed to having to sell a house). An interesting side-effect of this choice is it suggests Sophie earns more money than Mark.
"excellent Indian take-away" - Sophie and Mark seem to eat a lot of takeaways throughout the series. Can't be good for them.
"These ones had really good reviews. Feel how soft." - I really like these sweet little domestic moments
"what would the neighbours say" - she really is just a love machine
"careful, that's bad luck" - I learned about that superstition from Yellowstone
So the thing with the cowboy hat is, I didn't want it to be just a cheap joke that's forgotten right after it's introduced. So I made a point of tracking where the hat is through the whole story, with it almost always being on either Sophie or Mark's head.
"cow-print bra" - what can I say, I like someone who commits to a bit
"She turned into a reverse cowgirl" - naturally
"Her crotch rubbed against my cock... Was she doing it on purpose?" - yep
"I'm gonna need a picture of this" - I keep a list of things like this so that I can callback/pay them off later
"She pushed the hat down over my eyes" - see the previous commentaries for why she keeps covering his eyes
"Yar" - as it turns out, there aren't many good words starting with 'Y', but I was determined to stick with it for 'yeehaw', 'yoga', and 'yellow'. Then I happened to watch 'A Philadelphia Story' - "My, she was yar." It's a boating term, meaning (effectively) easy to steer.
"picturing her topology" - in 'The Atrocity Exhibition', JG Ballard has this way of describing people in abstract, geometrical terms that I found really striking, e.g. "The young woman was a geometric equation... Her breasts and buttocks illustrated Enneper's surface of negative constant curve, the differential coefficient of the pseudo-sphere."
"I could really see myself--" - '..spending the rest of my life..' or something like that
"my back was sore" - getting hogtied is a young person's game
"Yellow" - chapter 3 proposes 'scrabble' as their safe word, but that felt too silly for general use. Instead, they use the red/yellow system, which this section is intended to show-don't-tell
"I wanted to swallow it... I couldn't make my throat do it" - something psychological, I reckon
"sharing the load" - you guessed it, another pun
"chicken Dhansak" - I wanted to pick something non-obvious for her (i.e. not korma, tikka, etc.)
"Lamb Passanda" - 'Sliding Doors' reference? Nah, that's too obscure, even for me.
"She picked the cowboy hat off the floor" - see! Hat accounted for, start to end.
"I was pretty hungry though" - this is trying to make it feel like Mark isn't TOO upset about being left tied up for however long. Otherwise it might feel too cruel. You could also chose to believe that she never actually left and was, in fact, fucking with him.
---
Teann has thrown me a curveball by skipping over the two stories I submitted after chapter 10, and has just posted chapter 11. So, ignore what I said last week And I will stop procrastinating with these commentaries and get back to writing before Teann catches up to me...
Another pun: steer as in cow (for the cowboy motifs), and as in 'giving directions' ("not that I didn't appreciate directions").
"pink, bedazzled cowboy hat" - I thought it would be fun to give Sophie some cowboy accessories. But this is the UK, people don't just have cowboy hats lying around, and she's not going to buy a new one for a joke. Then I remembered pink cowboy hats are a common accessory for a 'hen-do' (bachelorette party)
"I lived in a 'modest' flat" - Sophie and Mark live separately mostly so that Mark could be sent away in the chastity cage at the start of chapter 2. Mark lives in a flat (apartment) because it's easier for him to give it up when he moves in with Sophie (as opposed to having to sell a house). An interesting side-effect of this choice is it suggests Sophie earns more money than Mark.
"excellent Indian take-away" - Sophie and Mark seem to eat a lot of takeaways throughout the series. Can't be good for them.
"These ones had really good reviews. Feel how soft." - I really like these sweet little domestic moments
"what would the neighbours say" - she really is just a love machine
"careful, that's bad luck" - I learned about that superstition from Yellowstone
So the thing with the cowboy hat is, I didn't want it to be just a cheap joke that's forgotten right after it's introduced. So I made a point of tracking where the hat is through the whole story, with it almost always being on either Sophie or Mark's head.
"cow-print bra" - what can I say, I like someone who commits to a bit
"She turned into a reverse cowgirl" - naturally
"Her crotch rubbed against my cock... Was she doing it on purpose?" - yep
"I'm gonna need a picture of this" - I keep a list of things like this so that I can callback/pay them off later
"She pushed the hat down over my eyes" - see the previous commentaries for why she keeps covering his eyes
"Yar" - as it turns out, there aren't many good words starting with 'Y', but I was determined to stick with it for 'yeehaw', 'yoga', and 'yellow'. Then I happened to watch 'A Philadelphia Story' - "My, she was yar." It's a boating term, meaning (effectively) easy to steer.
"picturing her topology" - in 'The Atrocity Exhibition', JG Ballard has this way of describing people in abstract, geometrical terms that I found really striking, e.g. "The young woman was a geometric equation... Her breasts and buttocks illustrated Enneper's surface of negative constant curve, the differential coefficient of the pseudo-sphere."
"I could really see myself--" - '..spending the rest of my life..' or something like that
"my back was sore" - getting hogtied is a young person's game
"Yellow" - chapter 3 proposes 'scrabble' as their safe word, but that felt too silly for general use. Instead, they use the red/yellow system, which this section is intended to show-don't-tell
"I wanted to swallow it... I couldn't make my throat do it" - something psychological, I reckon
"sharing the load" - you guessed it, another pun
"chicken Dhansak" - I wanted to pick something non-obvious for her (i.e. not korma, tikka, etc.)
"Lamb Passanda" - 'Sliding Doors' reference? Nah, that's too obscure, even for me.
"She picked the cowboy hat off the floor" - see! Hat accounted for, start to end.
"I was pretty hungry though" - this is trying to make it feel like Mark isn't TOO upset about being left tied up for however long. Otherwise it might feel too cruel. You could also chose to believe that she never actually left and was, in fact, fucking with him.
---
Teann has thrown me a curveball by skipping over the two stories I submitted after chapter 10, and has just posted chapter 11. So, ignore what I said last week
And I will stop procrastinating with these commentaries and get back to writing before Teann catches up to me... #29
Pet & PonyGirl Stories / The Stray by ForeverAltered
Last post by teanndaorsa - July 05, 2026, 06:37:27 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/the_stray.html
F/f; latex; petgirl; catsuit; hood; harness; bond; collar; straps; mast; majick; reluct; XX
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https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/the_stray.html
F/f; latex; petgirl; catsuit; hood; harness; bond; collar; straps; mast; majick; reluct; XX
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#30
Dollstories.net stories feedback / Shiny Black Plastic by Restrai...
Last post by teanndaorsa - July 05, 2026, 06:36:24 PMYou can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.dollstories.net/storiessz/shiny_black_plastic.html
F/m; mpov; latex; naked; coated; encase; doll; costume; roleplay; M2doll; objectify; maid; cd; pegging; strapon; climax; messy; hum; mast; toys; oral; cons; XX
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
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https://www.dollstories.net/storiessz/shiny_black_plastic.html
F/m; mpov; latex; naked; coated; encase; doll; costume; roleplay; M2doll; objectify; maid; cd; pegging; strapon; climax; messy; hum; mast; toys; oral; cons; XX
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
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