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#21

General Discussion / Re: Help wanted for correcting...

Last post by corabowen - February 05, 2026, 03:56:36 AM

I think many sentences are grammatically fine but longer than they need to be. This slows pacing, especially in intense scenes. During editing, you should look for sentences with 2–3 commas, split them in half, and cut filler phrases ("she felt that," "she began to," "it seemed like").

Example:

She felt her perfectly manicured fingernails.

This doesn't add much unless it means something. Either connect it to emotion or remove it.

Shorter sentences = more control, more tension.

#22

Trashcan Stories / Re: My Trashcan Stories

Last post by Junkyard Society - February 04, 2026, 07:33:02 PM

An 18 year old homeless girl lived alone in an homeless camp in an remote forest. An 18 year old homeless girl lived alone in an homeless camp in an remote forest and one morning at 8AM was the sleepy girl grabbing an loudly creaking, shiny, very thick and clear plastic bag the girl had inflated from 8AM until 11AM non stop in the remote and quiet forest as full bags laid all around the camp. At midnight was the sleepy homeless girl rubbing the loudly creaking, shiny, very thick and clear plastic bag the girl had inflated against her unzipped vagina from midight until 4AM non stop in the remote, dark and quiet forest as the girl at 4AM ejected 7 big blobs of semen out on the loudly creaking, shiny, very thick and clear plastic bag. At midnight the nexk week was the sleepy homeless girl again rubbing the loudly creaking, shiny, very thick and clear plastic bag the girl had inflated against her unzipped vagina from midight until 4AM non stop in the remote, dark and quiet forest as the girl at 4AM ejected 7 big blobs of semen out on the loudly creaking, shiny, very thick and clear plastic bag.

#23

Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Re: Ponygirl Sister by TagsAPo...

Last post by teanndaorsa - February 03, 2026, 10:05:36 PM

No you're right that one should be on there, I was editing in a hurry, will add it now.

#24

Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Re: Ponygirl Sister by TagsAPo...

Last post by throwaway140124 - February 03, 2026, 09:26:22 AM

Dang! Very kinky, and very well written! Great work!

As a minor note, should it not have the "incest" tag? I don't know what the policy is around if tags are something the author chooses or if they're meant to be a simple statement of fact.

#25

Selfbound Website Stories Feedback / Self-Tied, Self-Terror by Zeed...

Last post by teanndaorsa - February 01, 2026, 07:02:39 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storiessz/selftied_selfterror.html
Sbf; predicament; blindfold; sendep; enclosed; cuffs; gag; caught; F/f; insects; sting; toys; rom; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

#26

Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Emma on Display by Gromet

Last post by teanndaorsa - February 01, 2026, 07:02:02 PM

Returning to Emma's tale tonight.

#27

Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Ponygirl Sister by TagsAPoppin

Last post by teanndaorsa - February 01, 2026, 06:57:50 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/ponygirl_sister.html
F/f+; ponygirl; training; incest; strip; cuffs; frame; hood; gag; flogger; cage; buttplug; harness; whip; piercing; corset; brand; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

#28

Erotic Stories Website Feedback / DaddysDolly by Rajah Dodger

Last post by teanndaorsa - February 01, 2026, 06:51:26 PM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/daddys_dolly.html
M/f; F/m; F2doll; mast; blindfold; oral; rim; drug; mum; bond; sex; reluct; nc; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

#29

Latex Stories / Need proof reading

Last post by kinky-in-b - February 01, 2026, 05:09:26 PM

I have written a multi part latex story, but i think it needs some proof reading/polish before it is ready to be published on latexstories.net. I anyone wants to help, i would share the files on google drive.

Regards
Kinky in B

#30

Latex Website Stories Feedback / Re: Drone House by Lckdnrbbr

Last post by feline - February 01, 2026, 04:37:00 PM

Part 3, the AI is an absolute delight!  Finding and walking that line between consent and non consent so very well!  Always giving the option and the ability to change your mind and walk away, but always making staying more tempting!  Offering things, but with conditions, making her choose and accept forced control, choosing to give up the option of escape for a time, in return for her rewards...

Delightful and wonderfully done!