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#11
Latex Website Stories Feedback / Re: The Institute by Observer
Last post by Caras pet - September 27, 2026, 08:57:14 AM
Up to chapter 21, enjoy :)
#12
Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Re: Davinda and Goliath by Nic...
Last post by teanndaorsa - September 27, 2026, 12:07:53 AM
And should the author be reading here, you should know that I can't email you back to confirm it's been posted, or pass on feedback, because your email provider refuses to accept emails from me, treating them as spam. :-(
#13
Pet & PonyGirl Stories / Davinda and Goliath by NickHC
Last post by teanndaorsa - September 26, 2026, 11:45:20 PM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesad/davinda_and_goliath.html
MF/mf; ponygirl; ponyboy; crop; outdoors; costume; reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
#14
Dollstories.net stories feedback / Re: Premium Playthings by Bubu...
Last post by teanndaorsa - September 26, 2026, 11:45:05 PM
Returning to Premium Playthings this evening, couple more parts in the queue as well.
#15
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/the_ex_girlfriend.html
F/m; FM/f; fpov; bond; straps; toys; mast; oral; rope; gag; buttplug; sex; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
#16
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Bitche by Zoe Cordelier
Last post by teanndaorsa - September 26, 2026, 11:41:54 PM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/bitche.html
F/f; bond; dungeon; museum; scolds-bridle; public; pillory; cuffs; hum; shackles; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
#17
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Belted by Zoe Cordelier
Last post by Zoé Cordelier - September 26, 2026, 12:55:40 PM
Chronologically, "Locked" is the first one.

A very young Amelie, and her first experience with chastity as a keyholder: Amelie and Jeanette are in a relationship, but Jeanette has serious relationship issues and is reacting to this by seeking quick and meaningless sex with other women, then comes home to a waiting Amelie, hating herself for what she just did. Amelie is ready to drop Jeanette, when Jeanette goes into her room and comes back, begging Amelie to lock her up:

Quote"A chastity belt?" Amelie said, quiet. Not judging. Just... trying to understand. "You want me to lock you up in... this?"

Jeanette nodded quickly, then shook her head, tears already stinging.

"I don't want to want it. I hate that I do. But I can't stop. I keep proving things to people who don't matter. I dress like bait, I flirt, I act like I don't care, like I'm free. I let people use me like I'm disposable and then I come crawling home."

Her voice cracked. She dropped to her knees again, the tiles cold under bare skin, the glittery dress sliding up, exposing the marks between her thighs.

"I'm not free. I'm a mess. I need you to take it away from me. This part of me. This broken part. Just lock it away. Please, Amelie. Please control my cunt. Please."

Amelie blinked. Her face didn't move. She looked down at Jeanette. Then at the belt again.

"I might," she said eventually, thoughtful. "But if I do... I decide. When. If. Ever. You get out."

Jeanette nodded fast. Her lips trembled.

"That's the point," she said. Her throat was tight. "That's all I want."

On my site, https://zoec98.github.io/books/amelie-locked/ also has a foldout with Amelie's background and how she is the connecting element in the "Chastity Cinematic Universe" (ok, she kind of appears in many of my stories in the background).

Next up is Bitche, which is a real place near Strasbourg, with a large cavernous fortress. Amelie works here as a tour guide, and in this story shows off a bunch of medieval torture and punishment instruments (which exist, but aren't actually on display in this place), using one of the women in the tour group as a "volunteer." She invites said volunteer to her home later that day, and things develop from there.

"Belted" is the third Amelie story, she's now an experienced dominant, and knows her things.

We also meet Amelie (not named) in "Claire and Ethan at the restaurant" (https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/claire_and_ethan_restaurant.html), as the unnamed women observing Claire from a table nearby. And we will meet her again in "Delphine takes a break" when that story is going to be published here (https://zoec98.github.io/books/delphine-in-distress/; https://zoec98.github.io/books/delphine-farm/).

#18
Links / Re: Giantess Stories & Blog by...
Last post by SolomonG - September 26, 2026, 02:15:58 AM
Hello everyone,

It's Saturday morning and high time to talk about three giantess clips:

"The Incredible Growing Woman" Episode 3
https://thereshegrows.net/2026/09/26/the-incredible-growing-woman-episode-3/

Requested Review: "The Giantess: Rene Rising" by Awefilms
https://thereshegrows.net/2026/09/26/requested-review-the-giantess-rene-rising-by-awefilms/

Requested Review – "We Got a BIG Problem" by FaTerGD
https://thereshegrows.net/2026/09/26/requested-review-we-got-a-big-problem-by-fatergd/

Respectfully,



SolomonG
Amazon Author's Page: https://www.amazon.com/author/solomong
Blog: https://thereshegrows.net/blog/
Bluesky: https://bsky.app/profile/solomong.bsky.social
E-junkie: https://solomong.e-junkie.com/
X/Twitter: https://twitter.com/AuthorSolomong
YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCBciPE_SJBlvASYmsj7zSwA
#19
15. "Singularity" Commentary

"Singularity" like a black hole. After the explosive super nova of chapter 13, Sophie and Mark are now collapsing back into each other. It's also a little bit of a fake out; following a break up story with a title that sounds like 'being single'.
Original title, "Serenity" fitting with the dream-like middle section, and of finding peace again.

"Exclusion Principle" - the section titles are physics references (and also puns)
This section is effectively the "no hard feelings" scene that was absent at the end of chapter 13. Call me a softy, but I want all my characters to get along. I think it would have been easy to treat Rob as a plot obstacle, and just toss him away now that he's served his purpose (so to speak). This scene is very intentionally pushing back against that.
"Rob had suffered a crushing defeat" - dual meaning. As suggested in chapter 14, Rob tried to pursue Sophie. But in the end, she chose Mark.
"Like Monopoly" - as I said in the commentary to chapter 3, the flashback was originally going to use Monopoly rather than Scrabble, so this is just a reference to that. If you wanted to read something into why Rob is good at Monopoly, I won't tell you you're wrong :)
"he'd told me as much himself" - chapter 14
"I couldn't hold it against either of them." - at this point Mark doesn't know if Sophie and Rob actually slept together during the break. He couldn't hold it against them because he himself was sleeping with other people, of course.
"But we never shared a bed together again" - rest assured

"Entanglement" - I try to keep to a consistent one story a week schedule (with breaks between seasons). It stops me falling down a perfectionism hole, and honestly after a week I get bored editing/rewriting the same story and want to move on. That also means, sometimes I'm forced to say 'fuck it, good enough'.
By the time I sent this story in, I really didn't like this section. It feels (felt) pretentious, over-written, and borderline incoherent. I wrote the original draft months earlier in a stream of consciousness, and when I finally came back to finish it off, I just couldn't get back into the same groove, and everything I wrote felt forced and... cringe.
Anyway, this thing is dense with references and word play and I'm not going to go line-by-line to unpack it all. I'll just pick out a few key bits.
In case it is unclear, the short version is - they're bound together, symmetrically, and they have a bunch of sex.
"we were the multi-limbed creature of mythology" - the children of the moon from Plato's Symposium. I haven't read it, but it's referenced in "The Origin of Love" from "Hedwig and the Angry Inch", which was previously referenced in chapter 11
"I prayed to my goddess in tongues" - cunnilingus, in case that wasn't clear
"I gave myself to her, in full submission" - Nymphetamine Fix by Cradle of Filth (To her alone in full submission). It sounds horrible but it's actually quite beautiful.
"My beautiful shadow, stitched to me" - Peter Pan
Various callbacks to chapter 3 (their first bondage, chronologically):
* "She held our hands, pinned above my head. An echo. A memory." -> "She put her hands on my biceps... pinning my arms above my head."
* "Familiar and different" -> "It was nice... different."
* "Not mistress and slave, but Sophie and Mark" / "It had been too long" -> "Not mistress and slave, no whips and chains. Just a belt, and two people making love for the first time in too long."
* "Our hearts slowing from their excitement... beating a shared rhythm" -> "Feeling our hearts beat a shared rhythm."
"The sweet sorrow of parting" - Shakespeare? What are you doing in this smut?
"some invisible, intangible chain" - like quantum entanglement (like the section title :O)

Originally, this was where this story ended. But the word count came in much too short. I didn't really want to stretch it out, so I had to find more story to tell. The next two sections take some dialogue which originally appeared in 15.5 and 'decompresses' them into full scenes. Ironically, I ended up liking them more than the 'main' story.

"You really hurt me, you know." - originally they just have the sex in the previous section and then all their problems are magically solved. But that felt dishonest - they each had real grievances. There needed to be a reckoning.
"we could have talked it out" - I used to listen to Dan Savage's 'Savage Love' podacast. And after a while, I noticed that his advice almost always boiled down to one thing - you need to have open and honest communication with your partner (easier said than done).
As I was writing through this dialogue I was sort of interpolating the 'blame' so that neither comes off as 'the one' in the wrong
"There was that smile of hers, warm, caring. Loving." - this is an intentional inversion. In previous chapters, when Mark mentioned 'that smile', he's talking about the mischievous smile that precedes some torment.
"I won't ever leave you." - section title "Event Horizon" is the region of a black hole beyond which you can no longer escape its gravity
"My Sophie" - callback to chapter 1, "I wanted to break out of my chains! Not to be free, but to have... her. My Sophie."
I'm not going to pretend like this (fairly brief) conversation solved all their problems. Relationships are never that simple. But they're off to a good start.

"Escape Velocity" - kind of gives away the punchline. I wonder if anyone actually pays attention to these titles :P
This might be my favourite scene in the whole series to this point.
"Brett had awoken something in me." - fake out
"You're planning to leave me for this cute femboy." - I think she's a little jealous, and trying to mask it with jokes.

"teaching me how to do proper rope bondage" - I wanted them to talk about Brett, but I wanted them to be doing something interesting at the same time; not 'just' talking like the previous section. Given Brett did teach Mark some rope bondage, and given Mark's previous failed attempts at tying Sophie in chapter 10, this seemed like a perfect combo.
I did have a plan for a whole, dedicated rope bondage chapter (obvious s-title 'Shibari'), but I couldn't think of a plot to go with it. That's not to say it's off the table.
"Is he bigger than me?!" - I stole that joke from Family Guy
"I'll have to gag you." / "You wouldn't dare." - of course he would (chapter 10)
"I think this is right..." - playing dumb to lull her into a false sense of security
"We were both fully clothed." - it's specifically 'non-sexual' bondage
"It was... I don't regret it." - how do you tell your girlfriend you enjoyed having sex with another man?
"Oh, and he's got some really cool toys." - changing the subject
"I said with a mischievous grin" - turnabout's fair play
"Speaking of tying kn--" - tying knots. As you well know, I love a pun. But then the boring, realist part of my brain was like 'getting engaged right after a break is not the basis for a healthy marriage'.
"her hands already free" - in my head, Mark did actually get good at rope bondage. But like I said in another commentary, Sophie is Bugs Bunny - she has a supernatural ability to escape
"I'm not so easy to tie down" - dual meaning; both literally and matrimonially. It might even have a triple meaning - that she's not easy to interpret (hard to pin down). But 'not so easy' isn't the same as 'impossible'...


15.5 "Interstellar"

"Interstellar" goes with the physics-y allusions in the previous chapter. Originally it was "Introspection", but when I pulled out and expanded dialogue for chapter 15, it didn't make as much sense anymore.

"Did you and Rob..?" / "He asked... But I couldn't really trust him" - in the original draft she did have sex with Rob, but only once because he wasn't into kinky stuff. I didn't want to be 'precious' about Sophie's sex life without Mark - after all, Mark had sex with multiple other people during their break. But given how chapter 13 played out, it didn't seem like she would trust Rob enough to sleep with him again, especially not on his own.

"devil night" - because of the devil's threesome (MMF)
"You're not the only one who dipped a toe in the bisexual waters." - that was a bit clunky
"Stop grinning, you perv." - double standards/misogyny there; doesn't like the idea of her having sex with men, but really likes the idea of women.
"It was nice. Different." - Mark says the exact same thing in chapter 3, when he's trying to downplay how much he enjoyed his first BDSM experience.
"she said we should call her if we ever want a unicorn." - foreshadowing
"Are we gonna be okay?" / "Yeah... I think so." - The original ending was a slightly sunnier "I missed you" / "I love you". But I'm a sicko. I refuse to give readers an easy resolution.

In the long gap between chapters 15 and 16, I started to feel like this would have been a pretty good ending to the series. Alas, I already committed to at least 20 chapters, and I'm a man of my word. Actually, I have a tentative plan for another season after that. I dunno, 25 just seems like a nicer number than 20. We'll see how it goes...
#20
Personals / Re: slave want buried alive
Last post by bound4fun - September 25, 2026, 04:38:36 PM
I sent you a PM.  I think I can help you out with this.
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