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General Discussion / Re: Ladies birthday fun

Last post by jackierabbit1 - Today at 04:11:14 PM

I'd ride his face and use him like a tool, stroking him to keep him in the game; and when I was happy enough only then would I finish the job for him. He'd be spent and not up for playing any longer, but I'd feed him his mess anyway, off of my fingers, licked clean one at a time like a hungry puppy might. Then I'd leave him there for a bit longer, maybe make a big show of getting dressed and leaving him there, slamming the door when I left...

Thanks for the inspiration, Jackie.

#2

Intros / Re: Any women here?

Last post by Mrs D - Today at 02:22:37 PM

Hello

Please do not view the following as criticism, but rather advice

1:  "any women here" rarely will attract the attention of women.  It usually signals a man who is perhaps *too* focused on the idea of finding a partner.

2:  Please don't call women "females".  It makes you sound like a ferengi. 

Personally I've had better luck with meeting people in person - look for the local bdsm/kink community. 

Very well written. Agreed strongly.


I´m not sure how it works in other countries but here in Finland you find local communites through local clubs´ websites and discord servers. In Facebook there seems to be many groups about different fetishes. Like breathplay.

#3

General Discussion / Re: Ladies birthday fun

Last post by Mrs D - Today at 02:05:22 PM

Well that`s just an average Tuesday evening in our household.
Minus the headphones, I put a hood on his head instead.


Propably I´d put the cage on him and start reading a good book.

#4

Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Scanned, Shipped, Printed ...

Last post by feline - Today at 12:41:42 PM

What an interesting idea, Baronlaw in the character creation cage...  but we would need to fuel the creative process somehow...  characters would need to come from somewhere...  they would need to be seeded, that seems like the right process to look to use...

seeding...
pollinating?  No, that's plants...
inserting the start points of characters...
adding little tiny thoughts, ideas, beginnings...
what is it called...  I nearly have a word...
insem... in... a... t... i... o...

so close, I can feel the word out there...  I will think of it later, I am sure.  I am sure there is a good word for this idea!  Yes, I think this works well as somewhere to keep you "safe" and out of trouble while writing!


Now the comment about using images on Phil is interesting, since in the published parts so far, using visual stimulation is almost an after thought, so far!  Obviously this is just so far.  Yes, we have had the scenes of the two women keeping themselves busy, but the display panel has been used more to tease his desire to be locked up more fully, and see just how much trouble he is in *smirk*

So seeing more experimentation with finding out what works to stimulate and excite a captured and fully restrained Phil is a most interesting thought, which I am looking forward to seeing.

From a story point of view, the details of images shown to Phil, or the audio fed to Phil, or anyone else, doesn't really need to be fleshed out too much, but we do want enough information to get a good mental image of what is happening, so we can try to visualise and enjoy the ideas at work here.

The teasing voice for Peggy certainly works well, and can easily be seen as the sort of thing that will evoke the right sort of responses and reactions.

A thought on the voice though, technology is certainly at the point were a woman, who would "in general" be better at understanding the importance of whispering the right things into another woman's ears, could be talking, but her voice could be run through a computer to give her the sort of rich, wicked male voice that could work so very well here...  so the mind and imagination of a woman, the computer monitoring reactions to help offer up suggestions of what to say, so a bit of AI helping, and another computer program to give her the voice for maximum effect...

*smirk* just wondering if certain words could be "played" though the vibrators and even parts of the shell, to give them a lot of added emphasis, and sort of a deep base reverb.  This could be very subtle, just to add gentle emphasis to key points, or really overt, to stress the total containment and helplessness of our packaged captive...

Obviously no reason for Phil to miss out on some of the general feedback when he is being spoken to either, once the idea has been thought up, and there is something to wire it up to

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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Committed by JustForALittl...

Last post by jackierabbit1 - Today at 12:29:16 PM

So this tale hit just about all my kink-buttons at once, so thank you for that. I'd written a story lately myself that illuded to such a place existing, not picturing this exact scenario in my mind's eye though, more of a conceptual "make me a convict for the weekend, complete with transport" kind of experience. This is just so much more than that, all while making room for Lars to enjoy Anna without Sean getting in the way. Not intruding on the married couples relationship, but wondering why Sean is still in the picture at all. Yes it's nice to have a playmate, and Lars may not want a wife of his own for any number of good reasons, but even though Sean is a main character here, I feel that he's expendable, story-wise.

So a great first story, but you simply can't leave it here; the angst you've created, the mind F for cuck Sean, the inside the head thoughts, all of it builds strong emotions, it's like I'm there with your characters feeling what they're feeling.

So in a potential second chapter, what if Lars likes having an exclusive on Anna, that both he and Anna decide to make the investment in keeping cuck-hubby out of the picture a bit more permanently? The ROI for Lars would be Anna, and in a twisted sort of way she could even be convinced that Sean had lost his mind for-real during a longer stay, the institute keeping him to help hide their "mistake" even if it was intentionally caused. I could imagine a similar closing scene to this first chapter, but instead of a nurse-dressed Anna greeting him in the reception room, it would be Lars, telling a gagged subby-hubby that Anna couldn't make it, that she was not up to this awkward moment. Maybe even Lars drops a bomb on Sean, if he's actually able to comprehend such things; that Anna is pregnant, and Lar's is going to be a dad, and this little future tike needs a stable and normal home to grow up in, and he just doesn't fit into that home.

So many possibilities, thanks for sharing, Jackie.

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TrashcanStories Feedback / Re: Scrapped Desires by Targon

Last post by targon - May 08, 2025, 10:48:31 PM

So the story is dark, involving death and XXX content, but it goes beyond just those elements. The violent deaths of Alec and Emma weren't intended to be the main event; they were more of a catalyst to set the tone for what was truly at stake. In essence, their tragic ends served as a stark warning, transforming them into props that underscored the gravity of the situation.

The narrative is really about Jake and Lily, who needed to grapple with an unthinkable reality - one wrong move or a delayed safe word could spell their end. I wanted this horrifying moment to shake them (and the reader) out of any illusion that this was just some casual game. It laid bare the true consequences they were facing if things went awry.

I wanted to describe how Jake and Lily chose to carry on with their ultimate fantasy despite witnessing such a gruesome scene firsthand. The decision left even me feeling conflicted - part of me felt an erotic thrill at the intensity of their experience, but another part found it disturbingly voyeuristic to watch them willfully push forward after seeing such carnage.

The story's impact comes from this raw, unsettling mix of emotions it evokes in both the characters and the reader, as we're forced to confront our own dark fascinations.

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Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Scanned, Shipped, Printed ...

Last post by baron law - May 08, 2025, 09:38:48 PM

If you think the plotting table is fun, you should look at the Character Development Cage. "You'll get out when I have three new fully developed characters!"

Plumbing issues and being my alter ego aside, Phil is inside the various devices for that additional reason of men being "known" as more visually oriented. Streaming sexy images to Phil while locked inside is effective at getting his interest to "peak"

While for a woman "volunteer" I'd have a sexy male with a vague accent reading these stories into their ears. Maybe even custom write them a story featuring them by name and describing literally what was planned for them.

 "Baronlaw while cruel in some regards was kind in other areas. Peggy knew he would seal her inside his devilish creation the Sex Sarcophagus and drive her to higher and higher levels of pleasure. At the same time she knew she could trust him to keep her safe while she could not defend herself. As he was shutting the lid she asked him, voice trembling Don't let me out too quickly? He smiled down at her and replied longer than you think you can handle but no more than I think you can. Peggy smiled at his answer, knowing she had an adventure ahead of her." Etc. Etc. Etc.

And of course a true bondage lover loves more and more layers of control. Even when they already can't move, let's add some more. It never seems to be enough for that little beast in the brain. Tie me up, ooo now tape, now chains, ooo now a crate, weld it shut, what else can we add?!

-Baronlaw

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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Committed by JustForALittl...

Last post by Denied4ever - May 08, 2025, 06:32:03 PM

Ok, you've proven you have at least one tolerable story in you. But if anything else you write is even half as tolerable, I would be excited to read it.
I thought this was very well written, the build up and descriptions seemed perfect.
I especially liked things, like the way you hinted that he would have to search for the drinking nipple in the padded room, while hooded, without actually saying it.
Please don't ever hesitate to post anything else you write.

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Looking for a Story / Re: Ninja Queen story

Last post by teanndaorsa - May 07, 2025, 11:36:01 PM

Answering my own question; I eventually found this, it's Rubber Doll by Gnjal. I think it must have been on the liquidsmooth site or ASSTR I read it originally, but this mirror of the Kirsten archives still has it up.

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BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: Committed by JustForALittl...

Last post by JustForALittleWhile - May 07, 2025, 05:41:38 PM

This story was right up my alley and had some really good writing in it, especially some of the dialogue which is where I often struggle.

Nice to hear that the dialogue works for you. I found it tricky to get something which sounds natural in your head in writing in a way which still conveys the same message and emotions.

I actually went hunting for other sites where this had been posted, in the hopes of finding more of your writing to enjoy, which really says it all

Sorry to disappoint! I've only reposted this on Literotica, and if you're on FetLife you can find it there too (as well as the Dutch version). I deliberately use a different pseudonym for spreading this story beyond FetLife in order to keep the two things somewhat separate (my kink-identity and my smut-author-identity, if you will). I think the story should stand on its own without the author's kink-persona intruding.