Thank you for sharing, I generally like Syfy themes, they allow you to do things that just aren't possible in the real world. I'm hoping this is just the first chapter, as you have a good character and setting just looking for further adventure. Do the bad guys come back to check on things, or do the sheriff's own people discover her? Maybe they're in on it, part of the conspiracy, and that's why she had no backup; why the bad guys were tipped off? If so, do they keep her as is, using her for their fun, or do they deliver her to a worse fate than that? Is it even possible to reverse the process at this point?
So many possibilities for a part two, it could almost write itself, thanks again, Jackie.