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With Utmost Care by Outcast

Started by teanndaorsa, September 17, 2023, 07:43:27 PM

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teanndaorsa

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/world/machine/storiessz/with_utmost_care.html
Machine/m; bond; encase; medical; cuffs; buttplug; catheter; tease; denial; climax; nc; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

feline

Well...  that's somewhere between sexy, erotic, and bloody terrifying, and I am not quite sure where.  Still, well written, short, yet it conveys everything it needs to convey, and does raise a question or two!

Griffinmills

Tremendous story, absolutely loved it!  Follow up?  I hope so!

taurired

What could go wrong?

How many other people are stuck like this?

This reminds me of Isaac Asimov's short story Reason.

feline

OK, you made me go and look up Reason, but yes, seeing the plot summary I know that story well.  Yes, I can see the parallels actually.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Reason_(short_story)

outcast

Thanks all, nice to hear my story was enjoyed. I cannot claim the idea was wholly original, but then again, what is?
Quote from: Griffinmills on September 23, 2023, 11:59:16 AM
Tremendous story, absolutely loved it!  Follow up?  I hope so!
I cannot promise anything. I am not great at multi-part stories, because I tend to write to get a particular fantasy out of my system. But sometimes I get a new fixation that can be shaped into a second installment, so there still is hope.

mikerpen2

Great story.  Anyone know of any others like this, where the person male or female is trapped in a circle of six, or servitude by a machine?

Rubberh

Quote from: mikerpen2 on January 05, 2024, 11:56:07 PM
Great story.  Anyone know of any others like this, where the person male or female is trapped in a circle of six, or servitude by a machine?
Well, it's not exactly an AI story, but "Spin/Zoom" is where a woman is trapped in a vault and made to perform extreme exercise programs on a high-tech bike, under torturous conditions.

jackierabbit1

I agree with feline, both terrifying, and somehow erotic. The machine is nurturing yes, but perhaps also lonely, keeping the young man trapped as "her" forever plaything. There is a lot here in a very short story, it's a talent that many don't have, I myself being one of those that don't do short well at all.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

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