This was a nice short story. It's rare to see such a lace-heavy story, and the description of Jennifer's feelings was great.
I have to admit that "she enjoyed the act of being laced almost as much as being laced" tripped my brain and I had to read it twice.
I wouldn't mind reading a bit more of these two ladies, or a longer story in the same vein. It's a different theme from other BDSM stories and lacing is quite erotic in nature, much more personal and involved in my opinion, than mummification, which is not usually to my tastes.