Hi Johnyburner
Sorry I have not replied sooner I had lost my login info...again, LOL
I could envision the scene in my head and struggled to try and explain it in a way that would make others see it as well, I almost deleted entire story because of it.
I finally just sent it in and hoped it would make sense.
I have not, as yet, revisited the story line but one never knows when an idea will strike.
Thanks for commenting.
Mikel