Author Topic: Back to Basics by Mikel  (Read 311 times)

Offline teanndaorsa

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Back to Basics by Mikel
« on: March 14, 2022, 09:10:54 PM »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesad/back_to_basics.html
Sbf; M+/f; outdoors; caught; cuffs; chain; gag; ponyboots; chastity; clamps; public; cons; reluct; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Offline johnyburner

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Re: Back to Basics by Mikel
« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2022, 12:12:11 AM »
Loved the story, the self-bondage set up at start is deliciously harsh and very original, even if I had to read it twice (took me to the end of the description to understand she was inverted). But I can't help myself thinking that the first and second part work better as separated stories.

...unless another chapter comes along to tie it up neatly *hint hint*

Offline Mikel

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Re: Back to Basics by Mikel
« Reply #2 on: April 24, 2022, 04:42:44 AM »
Hi Johnyburner
Sorry I have not replied sooner I had lost my login info...again, LOL

I could envision the scene in my head and struggled to try and explain it in a way that would make others see it as well, I almost deleted entire story because of it.

I finally just sent it in and hoped it would make sense.

I have not, as yet, revisited the story line but one never knows when an idea will strike. 
Thanks for commenting.
Mikel
Keep your mind in the gutter and your woman locked up tight.

 

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