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Back to Basics by Mikel

Started by teanndaorsa, March 14, 2022, 09:10:54 PM

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teanndaorsa

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesad/back_to_basics.html
Sbf; M+/f; outdoors; caught; cuffs; chain; gag; ponyboots; chastity; clamps; public; cons; reluct; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

johnyburner

Loved the story, the self-bondage set up at start is deliciously harsh and very original, even if I had to read it twice (took me to the end of the description to understand she was inverted). But I can't help myself thinking that the first and second part work better as separated stories.

...unless another chapter comes along to tie it up neatly *hint hint*

Mikel

Hi Johnyburner
Sorry I have not replied sooner I had lost my login info...again, LOL

I could envision the scene in my head and struggled to try and explain it in a way that would make others see it as well, I almost deleted entire story because of it.

I finally just sent it in and hoped it would make sense.

I have not, as yet, revisited the story line but one never knows when an idea will strike. 
Thanks for commenting.
Mikel

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