Author Topic: The Pony Revolution by Daxter  (Read 753 times)

Offline teanndaorsa

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The Pony Revolution by Daxter
« on: January 05, 2022, 09:34:53 PM »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_pony_revolution1.html
fpov; kidnap; ponygirl; harness; collar; leash; nc; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_pony_revolution2.html
fpov; ponygirl; torture; mind-control; nc; XX

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_pony_revolution3.html
M/f; fpov; ponygirl; cuffs; harness; outdoors; armbinder; remote; chastity; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_pony_revolution4.html
M/f; M+F+/f; fpov; ponygirl; gag; bit; collar; electro; outdoors; training; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_pony_revolution5.html
M/f; M+F+/f; fpov; ponygirl; gag; bit; collar; outdoors; training; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
« Last Edit: March 01, 2022, 10:05:53 PM by teanndaorsa »

Offline T.H.

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Re: The Pony Revolution by Daxter
« Reply #1 on: January 08, 2022, 05:50:16 PM »
Dear Daxter,

I certainly liked your story.
I generally like te witness the emotions of the heroine more and in more details.
On the other hand is fast the pace of the events refreshing.

The idea of a pony revolution that puts its members into the tack got a good smile out of me.
I felicitate for so much originality.

I'm intrigued what's going on on nowhere island.

I hope like allways to get to read a habby end, because life's too short for depressing smut.

Kindly yours,

Tom

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Re: The Pony Revolution by Daxter
« Reply #2 on: January 11, 2022, 08:30:20 PM »
I hope like allways to get to read a habby end, because life's too short for depressing smut.

I confess I did put the first three parts up all together for that very reason. Wasn't sure if this was going to have a dark storyline or not - so when all the consensual pony fun comes in part 3 people who like their ponies to have a happy ending can breathe a little sigh of relief!

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Re: The Pony Revolution by Daxter
« Reply #3 on: January 12, 2022, 04:09:50 PM »
"habby ending"

Jesus f'n christ... how did THAT got through my internal spellcheck?!
Yeah... it's not my first language and yadda yadda yadda... but that really shouldn't have happened. I'm so sorry.

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Re: The Pony Revolution by Daxter
« Reply #4 on: March 01, 2022, 10:06:31 PM »
Part 5 up tonight - sinister goings on again, on Pony Island :-P

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Re: The Pony Revolution by Daxter
« Reply #5 on: March 18, 2022, 02:59:38 PM »
I'm enjoying the story and anxiously awaiting the next chapter.  More please!
I particularly like the elements of consensual ponyplay, being tricked into non-consensual bondage, and the mystery that comes from the automated sensory deprivation.
It's a fun story to read.  Please don't make me wait.  :)

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Re: The Pony Revolution by Daxter
« Reply #6 on: June 09, 2022, 11:02:33 PM »
I've read and re-read chapter 5 a dozen times.  Each time I notice another nuance of the story, and wonder how it will progress.  Each time I come back to the site I wonder, will this be the day chapter 6 is posted.
Daxter, any chance you could confirm chapter 6 is coming?  I realize it will be done when it's done, but waiting would be easier knowing there's hope!
Thanks for sharing your writing. 

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Re: The Pony Revolution by Daxter
« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2022, 07:58:13 PM »
Please give us some more of this, if only to bring it to a conclusion. It's a marvellous story.

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Re: The Pony Revolution by Daxter
« Reply #8 on: June 23, 2022, 01:02:35 PM »
I like the story very much. And hope for a soon release of more chapters. All we can do is hope.


 

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