The Pony Revolution by Daxter

[teanndaorsa]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_pony_revolution.html
M/f; M+F+/f; fpov; ponygirl; outdoors; kidnap; harness; collar; leash; gag; bit; electro; training; chastity; remote; torture; mind-control; armbinder; nc; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

[T.H.]

Dear Daxter,

I certainly liked your story.
I generally like te witness the emotions of the heroine more and in more details.
On the other hand is fast the pace of the events refreshing.

The idea of a pony revolution that puts its members into the tack got a good smile out of me.
I felicitate for so much originality.

I'm intrigued what's going on on nowhere island.

I hope like allways to get to read a habby end, because life's too short for depressing smut.

Kindly yours,

Tom

[teanndaorsa]

I hope like allways to get to read a habby end, because life's too short for depressing smut.

I confess I did put the first three parts up all together for that very reason. Wasn't sure if this was going to have a dark storyline or not - so when all the consensual pony fun comes in part 3 people who like their ponies to have a happy ending can breathe a little sigh of relief!

[T.H.]

"habby ending"

Jesus f'n christ... how did THAT got through my internal spellcheck?!
Yeah... it's not my first language and yadda yadda yadda... but that really shouldn't have happened. I'm so sorry.

[teanndaorsa]

Part 5 up tonight - sinister goings on again, on Pony Island :-P

[Private68157]

I'm enjoying the story and anxiously awaiting the next chapter.  More please!
I particularly like the elements of consensual ponyplay, being tricked into non-consensual bondage, and the mystery that comes from the automated sensory deprivation.
It's a fun story to read.  Please don't make me wait. 

[Private68157]

I've read and re-read chapter 5 a dozen times.  Each time I notice another nuance of the story, and wonder how it will progress.  Each time I come back to the site I wonder, will this be the day chapter 6 is posted.
Daxter, any chance you could confirm chapter 6 is coming?  I realize it will be done when it's done, but waiting would be easier knowing there's hope!
Thanks for sharing your writing. 

[Dianag]

Please give us some more of this, if only to bring it to a conclusion. It's a marvellous story.

[James Bondage]

I like the story very much. And hope for a soon release of more chapters. All we can do is hope.

[teanndaorsa]

Not more chapters, but a rewrite of the story has gone up tonight.

[kajkelli]

One of the best, if not best, ponygirl stories i have read since Jeff went inactive.  Thank you! 

[James Bondage]

Finally, but what story. I like, the open ending with a challenge, idea. Congratulations Daxter you pulled it off.
 

[TheLewdAcorn]

My oh my what a pleasant surprise! I had feared that we would never see the end to this tale, and what a devious ending!

As a big fan of the long term bondange/sensory deprivation themes that I don't see get touched too often, you've done quite well. Really creative with the AR virtual walls, diabolical. The rewrite was well written and that ending leaves me dying hoping for more!

I hope this isn't the last we'll see from you, that ending leaves us itching for more

Thanks again for sharing such a rollercoaster of a tale