The Pony Revolution by Daxter

[teanndaorsa]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_pony_revolution1.html
fpov; kidnap; ponygirl; harness; collar; leash; nc; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_pony_revolution2.html
fpov; ponygirl; torture; mind-control; nc; XX

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_pony_revolution3.html
M/f; fpov; ponygirl; cuffs; harness; outdoors; armbinder; remote; chastity; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_pony_revolution4.html
M/f; M+F+/f; fpov; ponygirl; gag; bit; collar; electro; outdoors; training; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_pony_revolution5.html
M/f; M+F+/f; fpov; ponygirl; gag; bit; collar; outdoors; training; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

[T.H.]

Dear Daxter,

I certainly liked your story.
I generally like te witness the emotions of the heroine more and in more details.
On the other hand is fast the pace of the events refreshing.

The idea of a pony revolution that puts its members into the tack got a good smile out of me.
I felicitate for so much originality.

I'm intrigued what's going on on nowhere island.

I hope like allways to get to read a habby end, because life's too short for depressing smut.

Kindly yours,

Tom

[teanndaorsa]

I hope like allways to get to read a habby end, because life's too short for depressing smut.

I confess I did put the first three parts up all together for that very reason. Wasn't sure if this was going to have a dark storyline or not - so when all the consensual pony fun comes in part 3 people who like their ponies to have a happy ending can breathe a little sigh of relief!

[T.H.]

"habby ending"

Jesus f'n christ... how did THAT got through my internal spellcheck?!
Yeah... it's not my first language and yadda yadda yadda... but that really shouldn't have happened. I'm so sorry.

[teanndaorsa]

Part 5 up tonight - sinister goings on again, on Pony Island :-P

[Private68157]

I'm enjoying the story and anxiously awaiting the next chapter.  More please!
I particularly like the elements of consensual ponyplay, being tricked into non-consensual bondage, and the mystery that comes from the automated sensory deprivation.
It's a fun story to read.  Please don't make me wait.