Dear Daxter,
I certainly liked your story.
I generally like te witness the emotions of the heroine more and in more details.
On the other hand is fast the pace of the events refreshing.
The idea of a pony revolution that puts its members into the tack got a good smile out of me.
I felicitate for so much originality.
I'm intrigued what's going on on nowhere island.
I hope like allways to get to read a habby end, because life's too short for depressing smut.
Kindly yours,
Tom