A very sexy well told Halloween story, I also like the girl on girl domination; I'm tired of guys having all the fun all the time. It's a great pub crawl too, every stop leads to something new for Marcy, one step down, and one step closer to no return, quite literally. I also think the fact that it's two fellow women that are doing this to her is disarming, as in girls can't be hunters too, can't be dangerous.
It's just a fun story, thanks for sharing, Jackie.