I apologize for taking so long to read this story. A lot of my reading was replaced by my writing, but I thought it was important to get to it because you had suggested it to me after reading mine. So, better late than never.
You are such a good writer. When I read your text, images are popping up in my head and I can visualize easily the action. And you don't make mistakes... Your text is so clean.
The story was fun. I enjoyed the little micro-stories as the time passed. Admittedly, the scene toward the end when the demon used a strap-on on the Morgan was not my cup of tea, but it didn't stop me from enjoying the rest. I LOVED that you used the two abused girls at the end and made them participate.
So, I'm sorry again for taking so long to read it. I have no excuse. Good job and we will do this again next Halloween.