Hey Misti.
I read your little story here, because you wrote it. And when Misti writes something, it's always worth it. This topic is not for me, but I went through the who story without difficulties. I like stories that loaded with dialogues because I like when the author is letting the characters lives freely. Your vocabulary is amazing and it's impressive that you build such a little world within such a short text.
You should write novels and publish them.
Ps: The male gender is the oppressor! I thought it was an awesome quote.