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Susan by dianag

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You can view the story here on the plaza:

F+/f+m+; bond; pony; permanent; cart; branding; bit; harness; tack; trainer; stables; cons; nc; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

To add my own personal feedback, I have to admit that I had a little tear in my eye at the sweet but sad ending, something almost unheard of when reading stories here. Thank you again for the submission.

In bed reading that crying like a baby at the beautiful ending! Bravo...

Thank you for the comments. I think I've already said that I am fascinated by the idea of someone becoming an animal/livestock, and following on from that I started to think what would be the logical outcome of someone kept permanently as livestock but in a loving and caring environment. The ending just sort of came along all by itself.

I'm working on a short story where the ending isn't quite so nice......!

i really loved this story and also had tears in my eyes at the end. i would very much like to read other stories by this author as she has proved with this one that she has a very active imagination and writes well.


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