Author Topic: Susan by dianag  (Read 940 times)

Offline teanndaorsa

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Susan by dianag
« on: December 04, 2019, 07:46:25 PM »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/susan.html
F+/f+m+; bond; pony; permanent; cart; branding; bit; harness; tack; trainer; stables; cons; nc; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Offline teanndaorsa

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Re: Susan by dianag
« Reply #1 on: December 04, 2019, 07:48:49 PM »
To add my own personal feedback, I have to admit that I had a little tear in my eye at the sweet but sad ending, something almost unheard of when reading stories here. Thank you again for the submission.

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Re: Susan by dianag
« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2019, 11:16:54 PM »
In bed reading that crying like a baby at the beautiful ending! Bravo...

Offline Dianag

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Re: Susan by dianag
« Reply #3 on: December 09, 2019, 09:30:36 PM »
Thank you for the comments. I think I've already said that I am fascinated by the idea of someone becoming an animal/livestock, and following on from that I started to think what would be the logical outcome of someone kept permanently as livestock but in a loving and caring environment. The ending just sort of came along all by itself.

I'm working on a short story where the ending isn't quite so nice......!

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Re: Susan by dianag
« Reply #4 on: May 13, 2020, 09:27:40 PM »
i really loved this story and also had tears in my eyes at the end. i would very much like to read other stories by this author as she has proved with this one that she has a very active imagination and writes well.

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Re: Susan by dianag
« Reply #5 on: May 14, 2020, 10:21:22 PM »
I've also had another ponygirl story here called "Pony Girl" Very imaginative title !! Aslo wrote a darker one, "Career Change"

Have a look and see what you think.

 

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