audition 2

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Going to try a sequel to audition
Here's what I got so far. need input

Audition 2
Jennifer can't  wait to start her 3-day holiday weekend
Jennifer phone rings,
It's Marie, Jennifers, BFF
Marie says Jennifer could you stop by I have something to show you.
Jennifer says Marie all I want to do is get into a hot bath and some wine.  Maybe tomorrow ??
All come on Jennifer it won't take long to show you what I got.!!
Ok Marie, But it better be good.
Jennifer arrives at Marie's place and lets herself in.
Marie, I'm here, where are you.
Then Jennifer, see the note on a pile of stuff covered up on the table.
Jennifer, I'm in the basement be up in a minute. Oh that girl, she invites me over and she not here, Ugh.
So, Girls being Girls, What has Marie gotten herself in this time. and pulls the cover off.
Jennifer screams. Not again, the table was full of leather Bondage Gear.
I'm out of here,
Jennifer turns and sees Marie standing in the doorway dress in a John Willie Agent U-69 costume holding a stun gun. ZAP!!

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I finished it and sent it in, So look for it in the coming Months