new story premise

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Break-in
Cathy was an orphaned girl growing up and then was taken in by a very dishonest family, Who taught her many criminal illegal activities.
So now fully grown up Burglary, Swindles, and Forgery, were among her criminal choice to follow in the Family footsteps. Cathy chose break-ins and theft.
Cathy liked to choose small business stores and break into them late at night, when no one was around. Cathy picks a new Leather and Accessories Store, new to the neighborhood. Upon casing the store out she found a cheap alarm box on the wall and that was it. This is too easy she thought to herself.

Would love input into this  I thank you.