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Trapping Rats by RbrBill

Started by Gromet, December 20, 2018, 01:25:27 PM

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Gromet

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.latexstories.net/storiessz/trappingrats.html
Solo-F; FF; landlady; apartment; offer; basement; tasks; discovery; door; suit; latex; susp; chain; arousal; desire; explore; toys; insert; straps; bond; intubate; encase; stuck; torment; denial; enema; climax; cons; X

https://www.latexstories.net/storiessz/trappingrats2.html
Sbf; F/f; latex; wetsuit; catsuit; buttplug; toys; hood; mask; straps; feeding-tube; cons; nc; XX

https://www.latexstories.net/storiessz/trappingrats3.html
F/f+; latex; bond; objectify; machine; buttplug; enema; chain; toys; tease; hood; gag; mast; climax; force-feed; permanent; reluct; nc; XXX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

picofarad

That set of drawings by Tozum is one if not the best I have ever seen.  This story really builds on it and gives it even further depth without losing the power of Tozum's drawings.

I am so happy you wrote this!


Rubberh

A great story and the drawings were excellent.

M88

Overall an amazing story. Bring the art to life :) great stuff

sammy808

i wasn't sure because i like the original art series so much, but this did an excellent job of retelling the story with a few added details.

;D

teanndaorsa

Rbrbill has returned to this story tonight, and another part is in the queue <drumroll for tension>

marp

While the current tags are all correct, the second part absolutely does need an additional NC tag.

Too bad, I really enjoyed the first part - but the malice and despair in the second part is not for me.

teanndaorsa

I think that's fair, so upgraded the reluct tag to nc. My original thinking was that the protagonist does get into the suit voluntarily, even if there's a little hint of mind-control in there, and although the landlady clearly has sinister motives it's only really in the last little section that Amanda really shows any resistance to her fate. Chapters 1 and 2 have her quite enjoying herself, so overall I felt like the tone was more reluctant than non-consensual. But yeah, it goes a bit harder at the end, so 'nc' is probably more representative.

picofarad

Great follow-on story.  I really miss Tozum but this story helps greatly to fill in for the lack of new Tozum drawings.
Thanks for taking the time to write this new chapter.

Observer

It certainly was a well written, sexy story.

As far as Marp's objection... it's something I've been thinking about a lot for some time.  I sometimes feel that some authors believe that coercion of some kind is needed. It's almost like if it was harder to imagine, to create a scenario where someone (usually a woman) would just... discover and like latex, vs one that was forced into it.

In this case, it felt entirely superfluous - both "victims" were initially quite willing!  Why not have Sim Lee and her two tenants form some kind of "alliance" and have them all enjoy the latex bondage?   

Heck, I could write a 2 page alternate ending story... but that feels a bit rude of me :/

teanndaorsa

And another part up tonight, enjoy!

Observer

Oh boy, perhaps I spoke too soon!

Observer

Is this the conclusion, or should I wait further? :)

AnaSeints

Omg you should do a book of this

AnaSeints

So what is in the thrird door

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