I have written darker stories on a whim, or when I'm feeling especially dark maybe, but my preference is more for fun stories. I wrote one with a very dark ending once, but then I also wrote an alternate not so dark ending to that one, the reader intended to select which she or he preferred. (And I way agree, I've tuned out on the news too, ostrich with her head in the sand maybe, but it helps me keep my sanity.)
I think the only difference between about to be reformed Jessica; and Veronica and her lacking in empathy friends, are a few rough experiences. The fact that they all just watched somebody they knew socially get Tasered, and then a serious beatdown while strung up, (one that they had specifically asked Sir for, demanded it really) to get themselves off speaks volumes about their character, or lack thereof.
I didn't want this one to get too long, so it's my intention to have Sir break Jessica just a bit to fully, (with Beth's and Veronica's continued behind the scenes control) so that there is almost nothing left, except maybe a trim and fit highly attractive model/maid who can only do simple chores. Or perhaps she just ends up with a very long sentence with her misbehavior, and some of the old help is rehired, and Jessica becomes just one of many in this more experienced company. Veronica may well end up with the mansion and a properly humbled and submissive Jessica maid in the end, as she lusts for this material thing because it's the one thing that Ray won't agree to give her, but the price will be steep.
If/when Ray discovers what has been done, (and maybe can't be undone) he's likely to be furious, as is Beth's husband, and as a closing scene I could see Ray introducing Veronica to the new robotic servant that he just bought for her as a surprise (Beth getting one too). As in "here honey, this way I know you won't ever get into any more mischief" kind of thing, "just look what it did for my ex-wife."
As far as Jessica having a happy ending, her happy ending might be best found in humble service to others, or in a vow of poverty, to offset the easy life she took for granted, and to atone for her terrible treatment of the hired help.
Just some crazy thoughts running around in my head, but what do you think?
Thank you again for your kind words, Jackie.