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Started by teanndaorsa, February 23, 2025, 08:54:15 PM

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A dedicated plotting table? But I've been told there's "...nothing to see here..." Repeated in a hypnotized monotone voice.

So not overuse, more needed. Nods nods.

I'm glad that Maggie and Paula are fully fleshed out characters, nothing worse than people just being props.

Taste might be the easiest to deliver through some micro tubing added to the sides of the gag and delivered in small doses. Phil is of course inhaling air and that could be scented before reaching him.

I do have some ideas for vibrations and temperature. I think those will be in the next upgraded sarcophagus. Sorry you'll need more patience for that version.

I'm happy my offhand comment of a "shell game" inspired such extensive feedback. I was indeed thinking of the "wrong" feedback reaching the "right" volunteer. Perhaps kindling new desires or releasing hidden depths they were not even aware of prior to the their time inside.

-Baronlaw, plot free since 23.

Hydrochoerus

I made this account for the sole purpose of expressing my appreciation of the author. You have more than one fan ^^

I am also a big fan of being teased in a public setting by unknowing participants. I hope to see more of it in the future and can't wait to read parts 4 and 5

feline

See, your fan base has grown by 100%  8) !!!


Plotting table?  What plotting table?  This sounds interesting, do tell me more...  *radiates helpful interest*

Commas, its about where and how you use them.  But entering / leaving a speech block tends to benefit from some punctuation.  There is a difference in how it flows if the speech block ends with a comma before the closing double quotes and a full stop after all.

If you are interested, I will pull together a few paragraphs that show my edits, to try and show a bit more clearly what I am thinking, and maybe even doing correctly ;)

For taste, the tongue does the tasting, and only picks up 5 different flavours, sweet, bitter, sour, salt and umami.  So a few micro holes on the "base" of the gag, where the tongue would end up resting, would be enough to allow taste to be delivered to anyone who is locked up.

Scent is harder, partly due to the massive number of smells that people can detect, but its certainly something that can be worked on with time, but a simple place to start might be the "smell of sex", to be added to the air flow when the vibrator is running, to add another dimension to what is going on, and what is being done to "drive" the "lucky" passenger towards a pleasure peak...

The shell game, the correct stimulation being sent to the "wrong" encasement...  suddenly I am remembering and thinking about a totally different story...  follow along for a few moments if you will.

The story was "Mental Institution Weekend", actually available here:

https://www.mummified.net/storieslr/mental_institution_weekend.html

with 8 parts in total, if anyone wants to check it out.  The somewhat fanciful idea was a boyfriend, who's girlfriend worked in the local mental institute, who had a long running fantasy of being a patient, and his girlfriend, and some others, including one of the doctors, smuggled him in as a pretend patent for a few days, as a giggle, to see if they could, to toy with him, and also so the doctor could run some tests on a "normal" person.

The point that my mind jumped to was only in passing in the story, our temporary patient was wired up to a load of sensors and had a whole slideshow of images played at high speed.  The images were designed to cover all sorts of possible erotic triggers, and the sensors would tell them which images and ideas he responded to, so the doctor had a much better idea than either him or his girlfriend, of what actually sexually excited him, and how much.

Now, returning to us, we are considering a handful of "lucky volunteers", people we don't really know well, so we don't know what will excite them the most.

Going off on another tangent, one reason for picking women here is "ease".  If you want to wire a woman up with a a dildo and butt plug you don't need to make extra space on the outside.  But for a man, the sort of penis pump that is being used to such delightful and wicked effect on Phil doesn't fit with the elegant and clean lines of a sculpted statue encasement.

Oh dear, now I am thinking about Egyptian death masks, and Terry Pratchett...  Remember Pyramids?  All of the dead kings were made to look rather different, and somewhat identical, when their masks were prepared...

Three "identical" statues are prepared, each with a different woman inside.  At first I had been picturing these as really identical on the outside, which works so well for various different mind games, but since they are being printed on demand, keep the bodies identical, but make the faces just *slightly* different...  so statue A, which will wrap around Becky, has very subtle echos of Mandy's face.  Meanwhile statue B, which will wrap around Sindy, the face has very subtle echos of Becky.  Not enough for anyone to consciously pick up on the differences in the statues, but enough for a sub-conscious bias for anyone who knows and fancies one of these women to be drawn to the wrong statue...  after all, if we are going to confuse and lead people astray, we might as well do so properly!

Now, back to where I was going a minute ago, as it stands there is a lot of "down time" for these statues, where no one is interacting with them, or playing with these women.  Now for Phil this is much less of an issue, since his two "guardian angels", or should that be "guardian devils", are on hand, making sure he gets LOTS and LOTS of attention and stimulation...  plus we are all learning how much he enjoys simply being left helpless, dark and silent, to consider what might happen next...

But our "lucky volunteers", we cannot assume they will have the same active helpers...  so one of the first steps could make use of the computer that is linked to their case, and all of these sensors, to run through a large library of possible sexual triggers, to find out what each women is interested in, and might respond to.  If not done soon after being settled into place, then certainly that night, we need the results sooner rather than later after all!  Then we are in a much better position to start a bit of "positive feedback" to teach them that being secured into such a device is a real turn on!  Plus we need them to come out having had a large number of massive orgasms, the orgasms ideally taking longer to achieve, but being bigger, the longer they are inside, as the system learns their triggers and reactions.  After all, we are selling sex here, so we need to make sure its a key part of the experience!

The video screens can be used to show all sorts of recorded images and films, but lets not forget hearing...  add a computer voice program to the system, and the system can talk to the women, telling them what is coming up, what options were available for them, and what was finally selected...  we have seen the power of the right words whispered into Phil's ears, so others should also get a good whispering to...

Taking this a step further though, for a later part, once this has been shown to be working, what other options are offered to the people outside, once someone is secured inside one of these statues?  Do we pick which new sexual fetish / object of desire each woman is encouraged to be attracted to?  How about a little game between the statues / women, where the first to orgasm doesn't get any more orgasms until they are released, instead being teased relentlessly, while the others get as many orgasms as can be wrung out of them?  Someone needs to be making decisions here about how they are treated, and, well, we cannot ask them since they are locked up, gagged, and anonymous, so someone else will have to decide on their behalf...

baron law

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At Hydrochoerus

"I made this account for the sole purpose of expressing my appreciation of the author. You have more than one fan."

I am suitably honored you went to the trouble of creating an account for this purpose, thank you.

"I am also a big fan of being teased in a public setting by unknowing participants. I hope to see more of it in the future and can't wait to read parts 4 and 5"

I hope 4 and 5 meet your expectations. There is also a whole new adventure in the works for Phil and friends.

-Baronlaw

baron law

@feline

My fan base grows by leaps and bonds.

A plotting table is what you strap unrepentant authors to, to encourage them to write more stories of course.

Re: Triggering Images being a gateway to hidden desires. I did a similar thing regarding the feedback based on images in the "Jabba's Palace" story. Also it could be used to encourage new desires in "volunteers". Maybe using AI generated images of the person in the type of bondage the person who encased them wants to indulge in. You see yourself mummified and the machinery triggers you to have a massive orgasm while that image appears in front of your eyes over and over. Until you associate mummification with pleasure.

Women do indeed have an advantage in plumbing that wouldn't be as obtrusive visually in a statue situation.

Whispered words at just the right moment and knowing that person's triggers is a powerful tool. After all the mind is the biggest sex organ.

Having someone outside the encasement guiding the desired results is food for thought, and why Phil was so lucky to find Maggie and Paula.

feline

Plotting table...  what a fascinating idea!  I wonder if they come in portable models as well, for those occasions when going looking for the author is required...  *carefully pushes the door behind me shut*

There is a theory, more of an observation perhaps, that in terms of sexual stimulation, men are visual creatures, while women look for and need something else, often something more subtle and complex.  A collection of graphic but emotionally empty pictures can get a very strong reaction from a lot of men.  But if you look at a book shop, assuming you can find one, back in the days before 50 Shades, there were already a LOT of books aimed at women, that had a lot of sex scenes, but it was also wrapped up in a lot of romance.

Now, it is interesting to note that books where the woman was kidnapped, or married off to some unknown and "cruel" man, or any number of other plots involving "you have no choice" were very popular.  Strangely enough, it seems that in these books the woman was able to win over the terrible ogre they were trapped with, and it was all just a fantasy anyway...

But little girls are brought up on the "princess is a captive, princess is rescued" style of fairy tale, and it is widely observed that women are drawn to arseholes *shrug*  I know, broad generalisations, but we need to start somewhere.  But it might make some more responsive to "you are trapped, now you are at my mercy" :)

The point of all of this is that simply throwing some images up on the internal screen and linking it to the vibrators is unlikely to sway women quite as easily as men.  Now I see this as a good thing, an excellent plot opportunity, rather than a problem.  We can consider the sorts of teasing that gets whispered to the women, what it is paired with, how the system, or the controller will tease and toy with the women, looking at their reactions and trying to tailor their responses to the goal they have been given.  At this point, the company is in the "ideas and experimenting" stage, working out what is possible, what works, what looks like it will sell, etc.

But think about what the company wants, and what makes them money...  sell someone the sarcophagus and you have a sale.  Sell someone the sarcophagus and then sell them some "we personalise the program, so it learns and keeps on getting better" and you have a sale AND a subscription...

Now I am thinking of Phil and his two controllers, sorry, I mean loving and doting partners, friends, and controllers, as the golden goose here...  you need to give them room to experiment, printer time, money, help and space.  All the while looking to learn as much as they can from these fun and games, and offering plenty of expert help to assist in these games with Phil, to push the encasement further, the devices further, the computer programs and responses further...  Also helps to explain any leaps in the capabilities of the next sarcophagus that Phil gets to experience as well :)

But more than this, they will want to try running some tests with other people as well.  A sort of random plan here, to avoid taking this into to dark and terrible a direction, anyone going into the device needs to know that they are looking to "fine tune" their sexual responses, find out what makes them horny, and encourage them to respond more strongly.

Yes, I like that phrasing, suggestive but gentle, nothing too scary there.  But since it is all at the development stage, sounds so much better than experimental stage, they don't want to explain what they are doing to the person going in, so they have to have a significant other on hand, a sexual partner they trust and who knows what is going on.  The reason, in part, is that this partner is going to be the one picking what programming is attempted, and checking the results, and providing feedback to the company afterwards.  After all, both parties are being paid to help out here, and this is part of what they are being paid for.

Plays well when you think about the sex expo as well, since there can be people on hand explaining the type of programming they are going for, for each of the models, showing some of the changes to their responses already, in the hours they have been locked into the display statues...  how this was selected for the models, and how this is a new product they are working to bring to market.

From a story point of view, its another layer and type of control that the person going into the device gives up.

baron law

If you think the plotting table is fun, you should look at the Character Development Cage. "You'll get out when I have three new fully developed characters!"

Plumbing issues and being my alter ego aside, Phil is inside the various devices for that additional reason of men being "known" as more visually oriented. Streaming sexy images to Phil while locked inside is effective at getting his interest to "peak"

While for a woman "volunteer" I'd have a sexy male with a vague accent reading these stories into their ears. Maybe even custom write them a story featuring them by name and describing literally what was planned for them.

 "Baronlaw while cruel in some regards was kind in other areas. Peggy knew he would seal her inside his devilish creation the Sex Sarcophagus and drive her to higher and higher levels of pleasure. At the same time she knew she could trust him to keep her safe while she could not defend herself. As he was shutting the lid she asked him, voice trembling Don't let me out too quickly? He smiled down at her and replied longer than you think you can handle but no more than I think you can. Peggy smiled at his answer, knowing she had an adventure ahead of her." Etc. Etc. Etc.

And of course a true bondage lover loves more and more layers of control. Even when they already can't move, let's add some more. It never seems to be enough for that little beast in the brain. Tie me up, ooo now tape, now chains, ooo now a crate, weld it shut, what else can we add?!

-Baronlaw


feline

What an interesting idea, Baronlaw in the character creation cage...  but we would need to fuel the creative process somehow...  characters would need to come from somewhere...  they would need to be seeded, that seems like the right process to look to use...

seeding...
pollinating?  No, that's plants...
inserting the start points of characters...
adding little tiny thoughts, ideas, beginnings...
what is it called...  I nearly have a word...
insem... in... a... t... i... o...

so close, I can feel the word out there...  I will think of it later, I am sure.  I am sure there is a good word for this idea!  Yes, I think this works well as somewhere to keep you "safe" and out of trouble while writing!


Now the comment about using images on Phil is interesting, since in the published parts so far, using visual stimulation is almost an after thought, so far!  Obviously this is just so far.  Yes, we have had the scenes of the two women keeping themselves busy, but the display panel has been used more to tease his desire to be locked up more fully, and see just how much trouble he is in *smirk*

So seeing more experimentation with finding out what works to stimulate and excite a captured and fully restrained Phil is a most interesting thought, which I am looking forward to seeing.

From a story point of view, the details of images shown to Phil, or the audio fed to Phil, or anyone else, doesn't really need to be fleshed out too much, but we do want enough information to get a good mental image of what is happening, so we can try to visualise and enjoy the ideas at work here.

The teasing voice for Peggy certainly works well, and can easily be seen as the sort of thing that will evoke the right sort of responses and reactions.

A thought on the voice though, technology is certainly at the point were a woman, who would "in general" be better at understanding the importance of whispering the right things into another woman's ears, could be talking, but her voice could be run through a computer to give her the sort of rich, wicked male voice that could work so very well here...  so the mind and imagination of a woman, the computer monitoring reactions to help offer up suggestions of what to say, so a bit of AI helping, and another computer program to give her the voice for maximum effect...

*smirk* just wondering if certain words could be "played" though the vibrators and even parts of the shell, to give them a lot of added emphasis, and sort of a deep base reverb.  This could be very subtle, just to add gentle emphasis to key points, or really overt, to stress the total containment and helplessness of our packaged captive...

Obviously no reason for Phil to miss out on some of the general feedback when he is being spoken to either, once the idea has been thought up, and there is something to wire it up to 8)

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