That's quite the story, I'm wondering if Miss Molly will want her property back, or wish to sell it off to somebody else. I loved the title, loved how you started at the end (or is that the second beginning) and then came back around to the "dom" main character being so completely screwed, apparently deservingly so. I also loved the balloon-key thing, I've used that myself in a story, and I love the concept of loosing one's key like that, the random "it could literally be anywhere" loss of such a valuable thing, especially if you're a locked up man.
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
