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Offline Zephyr

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Story help requested - Why does she do this?
« on: November 22, 2024, 06:38:22 am »
I am writing a story and want to write a part where the gemale lead, out at a forest lake, gives the hnadful of guys there blowjobs and more. I just can't come up with an adequate reason for her to do this.

The male and female leads in the story live next door to each other for the summer in a forested area, She is freshly 18, he's 19 and they are both college bound, left alone to watch their family vacation homes over the summer. He is blackmailing her - he caught her out in the forest near their houses doing selfbondage and has video of it and is making her his sex slave in return for not circulating the video. He's nore or less a decent person but given a chance to have that sort of hold (and sex life and indulge his fantasies) over his neighbor he will do it.

She's actually sort of kinky, has a diary containing fantasies where she is dominted and forced to do things by a "cruel; master", including group scenes, and while she is not happy being blackmailed it more or less fits in with her fantasy life, esp when he discovers her diary and starts using it for suggestions.

There is a stream a distance away from town and an area that when the water flow is up makes an excellent swimming hole that only the locals know about and only a handful of young adults their age have the ability to go visit. The water is up so he forces her to go swimming with him in much too little a string bikini but she is to pretend to get drunk (to give her an excuse and protect her reputation - they don't want it to bne known she is being blackmailed) and then give all the guys there (6 to 10 of them) each a blow job. She'll do it because she's being blackmailed but she's not entirely unwilling about it, maybe secretly turned on about it, but I can't come up with a good reason why.  Any thoughts?
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Offline le Bouc

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Re: Story help requested - Why does she do this?
« Reply #1 on: November 22, 2024, 07:19:51 pm »
So maybe she develops a caviler attitude, either over her progressive blackmail or just in that moment. Would she feel justified and a bit resentful of his hold over her? You would have to build that she's going to get him back a bit, even if she's a willing sub. Is it all fun and games for him, or should there be a price to be paid? I would suggest maybe making the group of boys smaller, say 4-5, and she gives blowjobs to all except for her blackmailer. He, saving his go for last, is caught surprised at her refusal in front of the others and feels embarrassed/ostracized/lesser-than. She uses this rejection of him to both get him jealous and want her all the more. She also gets a bit of power with witnesses to rejecting him a blowjob. This dynamic could be played up if all the boys (blackmailer included) know each other and are at least acquaintances if not friends. The submissive having a little something amounting to shame/humiliation over her Dom might be an interesting development which could lead to an intense solo session between just the two of them. Maybe in retribution he ties her up naked close to a highly frequented trail, abuses her alone in a cabin, or leaves pics with her (not her face or anything identifying) around town. Just some thoughts. I look forward to reading the final result!
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Offline SwitchMan

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Re: Story help requested - Why does she do this?
« Reply #2 on: November 22, 2024, 11:48:20 pm »
Here's one possibility...

Maybe she doesn't have a choice.  He could bring bondage gear in a duffle bag (under the towels used after the swim.  After the swim, she is cuffed and ring gagged.  He leads her by a leash to a nearby campsite where the others are waiting.  In order for her to "win" the chance to go home, she must satisfy all of them.

Offline jackierabbit1

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Re: Story help requested - Why does she do this?
« Reply #3 on: November 22, 2024, 11:52:46 pm »
I would ask who's telling the story, as in who's point of view is it from. I think that's critical, as in if she's telling it you could really get inside her head in any number of ways. Maybe she's a late bloomer, or looking to catch up on what she thinks she's been missing by being a good girl. Maybe she made a promise not to have "sex" and blow jobs don't count in her mind. Maybe she's just a horny teen like most of us were at one time, and being "forced" to do something makes it okay.

That one I can actually relate to, as in being forced to do something you want to maybe do anyway makes it okay, or at the very least not your fault. For me though, the BJ thing is giving without getting, if it doesn't go any farther, and one really has to be in a certain mood to do something like that... ten flipin times over.

Is this a personal dare to herself instead, as in can you actually blow ten guys in a row without throwing up? I kind of doubt it to be honest, but on this I have no frame of reference either. Was there a wager placed, as in "if you can tie me up so I can't escape you can rip my bikini off and make me blow all of you once."

The boy character sounds a bit creepy though, or is he hopelessly nerdy and virgin for life without resorting to such coercion? Has he had the hots for this girl and this is the strange way that manifested itself?

 Finding ten guys of the right age in a little community might be a challenge too; how did they all get to that little oasis in the first place?

So many questions, I hope maybe this helps, Jackie.

 

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