Escape by Mikel

[teanndaorsa]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/escape.html
Sbf; rope; collar; cuffs; stuck; gag; enclosed; transported; toys; tease; corset; M/f; chain; clamps; climax; cons; reluct; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

[feline]

I find myself with mixed feelings here.  I love how this story starts, such a wickedly simple idea, yet the mental image of everyone around her being so used to her bondage / escape practice that they just ignore her bound form and walk off, leaving her there...  yep, that's a fascinating way to start, and a wonderful idea!

But very soon she is playing with rope around her neck, that's a mental image that bothers and upsets me.  FAR to easy for that to go wrong.  I know its fantasy, its only a story, and I agree, but its still not a mental image that fills me with warm, happy and sexy thoughts.

I found great delight in her sleep / storage box, but found the story, and her use of the box felt a bit mechanical.  There wasn't a lot of feeling and emotion here, even though its such a lovely mental image, and so very fun.

Offering herself up as a slave if anyone can restrain her, well, it was inevitable that someone would pull that off sooner or later *sigh* silly girl, but on the other hand, she did get exactly what she wanted.

[Mikel]

Thanks,
It sounds to me you understood the story perfectly, the "mechanical" part was supposed to be her being more and more bored with the only restraint she felt unable to beat.
And yes she did know someone would beat her challenge getting exactly what she wanted, to be bound helplessly by someone who knew how to do it.
I'm glad you see it as it was meant to be taken, fiction, so many think this is some kind of reality or something.
I try to convey in my stories the desires and willingness of the person, I am very much a supporter of consensual situations even though I can't write well enough to express it.

Thanks again,
Mikel