Hello.
Overal I liked the story very much. Albeit it's worth mentioning that the part wasn't too long so there isn't too much to comment right now.
What I particulary appreciated was that the sub wasn't for one a coplete neophyte. It's kind of common that in stories a complete neophyte is placed in something clearly meant for advanced or very advanced players and of course everything goes perfect. Don't get me wrong I like well told super-sub stories... but your story sticks out because it is different.
I really liked that experienced players go into what felt harsh powerplay. (Princess/Mistress vs. no name and don't deserve a collar). It fitted.
I'm curious about the way this plays out further... How 'good' are these Dommes... will they do a overshoot scaring the sub needing to paddle back at some moment? Maybe they will be not harsh enough needing to tighten the screws?
Having a threeway is particulary interesting as it opens the gate for some intrigue between the dommes.
I certainly look forward for an extension.
Thank you for sharing!
T.H.
