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Bondage => BoundStories Website Stories Feedback => Topic started by: teanndaorsa on January 27, 2022, 09:44:17 pm
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You can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/gift_alina.html
F+/f; fpov; bond; D/s; strip; gag; zipties; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks ;)
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What a nice start, or delightful tease. I hope to see more!
Eido
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Hello.
Overal I liked the story very much. Albeit it's worth mentioning that the part wasn't too long so there isn't too much to comment right now.
What I particulary appreciated was that the sub wasn't for one a coplete neophyte. It's kind of common that in stories a complete neophyte is placed in something clearly meant for advanced or very advanced players and of course everything goes perfect. Don't get me wrong I like well told super-sub stories... but your story sticks out because it is different.
I really liked that experienced players go into what felt harsh powerplay. (Princess/Mistress vs. no name and don't deserve a collar). It fitted.
I'm curious about the way this plays out further... How 'good' are these Dommes... will they do a overshoot scaring the sub needing to paddle back at some moment? Maybe they will be not harsh enough needing to tighten the screws?
Having a threeway is particulary interesting as it opens the gate for some intrigue between the dommes.
I certainly look forward for an extension.
Thank you for sharing!
T.H.