Asking for your suggestions of a type of story.

[Jugrntts]

Hello.
I'm asking all of you for suggestions of stories you may know.
The type of story I'm looking for is where the Damsel in distress is unable to speak and end the predicament.
For example:
A woman hire someone (Male or female) and get abducted herself. Or the kidnapper catch the wrong twin, or just another case of mistaken identity.
The point is read how she feel powerless to say one single word that could save her.
Also interested in the stories when the woman gets double crossed  and ended bound and gagged like her victim.
I already read some in gromet's plaza and other sites but I'll really like to read or re-read your suggestions.
Thank you.

[dpgsm]

Hi dpgsm

I encourage you to write it yourself. Don't be afraid to try.

[Jugrntts]

Hi dpgsm

I encourage you to write it yourself. Don't be afraid to try.

I'm already stuck with two stories I can't finish. I would  love to do it but I want to finish at least one before that.
Regards.

[dpgsm]

 Gromet once told me a guild line to a good story
what is it about,
good characters
where is the story going
Good grammar and spell-check it
Tie all together in the end.


Ok for instance 
Let look at Red Riding Hood

The start / Red Riding Hood going to see Grandma

Good Characters / the Big Bad Wolf

Where is the story going
Red Riding Hood going to Grandma, gets put in peril by the Wolf

Tie it all together
The Big Bad Wolf gets his come up pence and Red wins the day.

These are just a few guidelines to a good story
But by all means, Not all of them.
My suggestion is to ask Teanna for help

As to your ending only you know the character you wrote about.
But I hear you already wrote an ending to her predicament
So believe in it and It will come out

This my belief
My writing style is not yours
I like to write, as people talk to one another
Just like my favorite author Mickey Spillane butchered the English languish for yrs
But millions of people loved and read his stories

So believe in your story and write it, or write several endings at random and pick one.
Or combine them all together.

Hope this sets you on the right path.
I read this site for twenty years before I started writing my own.
So good luck, and can't wait to hear how it all turns out.

[Jugrntts]

Gromet once told me a guild line to a good story
what is it about,
good characters
where is the story going
Good grammar and spell-check it
Tie all together in the end.


Ok for instance
...

Thank you for the advice.  I'll check the stories once again. Precisely one of them doesn't have an end, I think in a couple of ways but I'm still in doubt. The other is half way.
Regards.

[Zephyr]

You might want to take a look at "Scare Me", up in the Bondage section a few days ago. A girl, an actress, needs to understand a role where her character is betrayed by a lover and left to die. Her boyfriend, to give her the experience, blindfolds her and then ties her to a railroad track where there are two sets of adjacent rails, one which is a spur line and unused, and another where a freight train will be by at 60 mph in a hour or two. He tells her a story of how another girl made him a better offer and part of is is that she must die, so no, he's not going to untie her. Being blindfolded she's not entirely sure as the story progresses if she's on the spur line or not but she loses sight of the overall scene and decides she's on the active line. The first part of the story they talk, the second part he (apparently) leaves and she gets to deal with her thoughts of preparing to die, alone and betrayed. She finds out when the train goes by that she's on the spur line and was never in danger but right up until then she's assuming the worst. It has a lot of your elements there.

If you're stuck on a story, there are discussion boards for all the different types of stories here. You can post the basic info and ask for suggestions. I've done this and there are a lot of imaginative, helpful people here to make suggestions! Nothing here is "War and Peace" but everything here is appreciated, just like your stories will be. Just be ready: a lot of stories get no comments at all in the forum and if yours are that it's not you or your work.

[subgrrl]

Maybe you would like this story from 2011...

https://www.dollstories.net/storiessz/whathappensinvegas.html

[Jugrntts]

You might want to take a look at "Scare Me", up in the Bondage section a few days ago....

Thank you. Sounds interesting.  And I'll take a look at the board.
Regards.

[Jugrntts]

Maybe you would like this story from 2011...

https://www.dollstories.net/storiessz/whathappensinvegas.html

Thank you for the suggestion.  I'll read it later.
Have a good day.