Angie's Accident by Asphyx

[ElectroPainLover]

You can view the story here on the Plaza:

http://www.selfbound.net/storiesad/angie.html
Sbf; latex; breathplay; cons; X

[Asphyx]

It's been a long time since I wrote this. Probably just as well I didn't write too much more. Thanks for posting it.
             Adam

[ElectroPainLover]

Hey Adam,

I think you may have given up too soon. I think the story was good and well written. I do not believe too many writers here look back at their first stories without thinking it was not what they wanted to produce. With practice comes quality and practice comes through repititon. Words my father said to me many years ago about something much different than writing. But it holds true to every endevour I ever set upon.

If you find the time...try again. You may be surprised.
Dana -- EPL

[Asphyx]

Thanks Dana, that's kind of you.
     Adam. 

[ElectroPainLover]

You're welcome Adam...only being truthful.

Dana

[MaxRoper]

What Dana says is absolutely true. Some of my older stories have started reappearing here (Thanks Fordman!) and I find I'm rather embarrassed by some of them while being rather proud of others.

This is a short-and-sweet tale and was a fun read. Nothing to be ashamed of.

Keep writing!

Max

[ElectroPainLover]

I find I'm rather embarrassed by some of them while being rather proud of others.

Hey Max. I wouldn't be embarrassed...it gives you a yard-stick to see how far you've come in your writing.

Dana