I like the mix of thought process and action, a distinctive approach. My first impression: this is quality writing. If you have a back catalog you should post it here.
As you say, the enjoyment is in the creative process, even if the audience turns out to be single digits (the fate of most of my humble efforts). Myself, I like to peer into the minds of the characters, the mental more than the physical. Then there's the intellectual challenge of building a plausible and believable backdrop to the story, something especially difficult in this type of literary genre. I hope we'll get to see your style in more detail.
Jack Peacock