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#91
Looking for a Story / UnderStories.com?
Last post by swfdressed4good2 - January 03, 2025, 05:01:03 PMIs anyone aware of a "site rip" backup copy of http://understories.com/?
Can anyone provide a link?
I am aware invidiual stories are available at various archive links... I was wondering if there was a larger coherent collection.
Can anyone provide a link?
I am aware invidiual stories are available at various archive links... I was wondering if there was a larger coherent collection.
#92
TG/CD Stories / Re: Trusting Cross Dresser by ...
Last post by cosmolovesph - January 03, 2025, 04:51:25 PMNice story and get the juices flowing... one wonders.... was he the actual friend or did things "change" ... except for the possible loss of property, i would love to experience!
#93
BoundStories Website Stories Feedback / Re: From Vanilla Girlfriend to...
Last post by lockedup4eva - January 03, 2025, 11:32:14 AMThanks everyone for all your kind comments, thoughts and detailed feedback!
I know it's been a while but there is more coking in this series, probably two more chapters if I've paced it right in my mind. Hopefully I've ticked a few readers desires/fantasies off along the journey of these two, my main theme was always a mixture of "love drives us in crazy directions" and my ever favourite "careful what you wish for". And who doesnt love a twist or a dilemma along the way? A painful decision one is literally forced to make? ;-)
I know it's been a while but there is more coking in this series, probably two more chapters if I've paced it right in my mind. Hopefully I've ticked a few readers desires/fantasies off along the journey of these two, my main theme was always a mixture of "love drives us in crazy directions" and my ever favourite "careful what you wish for". And who doesnt love a twist or a dilemma along the way? A painful decision one is literally forced to make? ;-)
#94
Bondage Discussion / Re: Story Help - Can this stor...
Last post by jackierabbit1 - January 03, 2025, 11:09:17 AMThe brother/sister thing, even if no actual sex, is a huge turn off for me; I just don't know how you overcome that one element, let alone the others. Parents having a hidden playroom; there would be a bit of "odd" in that too I think, as in how (in the real world) did they expect to hide such things from the children? Generally speaking parents insulate their kids from such elements, and really even their own passions for each other.
Now onto the "forced to watch element," which I find enticing to be honest, especially with my unique background; that part could be woven into a scene with a present love-interest, lots of possibilities there.
The last part, the "grape scene," that turns into a straight up reportable crime, not even the pretense of permission there. Inviting somebody over to take advantage of a situation like that is pure evil, nothing fun in that at all. Now that being said, I've gotten close to these elements myself, but some component of consent to get into the scene has to be there first, even if it's then taken in a new direction once the games begin. Imagine the family-bomb fuse the older sister is setting alight here, if the victim is to survive she's going to tell the cops, and her family too (maybe).
I'd be surprised if her father or even an older brother left any of them alive. Now if they go the legal route instead, the cops are going to show up at the scene of the crime, and they're going to find a bondage room/dungeon, and then likely everybody is going to jail as accessories to the crime. Then the cops are going to look at every unsolved missing person report for the last twenty years... Unless the older sister is a dunce, or actually wanting this to happen, it's just not a plausible scenario.
So, how to fix this? Maybe the boy who caught the teen in self-bondage talks her into doing a scene, making an amateur movie for both of their viewing pleasures, (consent).
Then boy invites somebody else into the scene as a surprise villain, (masked maybe) once victim/playmate is stripped, bound, and gagged, not knowing their history with each other. Maybe even victim/playmate is blindfolded too, and nobody says a word to tip her off. The boys could take turns filming, and obviously take turns with their playmate too, so some element of fun here, until maybe the "let me out part." Maybe though the surprise villain remains unknown, at least until she sees the film they made together later on?
I hope this helps, Jackie.
Now onto the "forced to watch element," which I find enticing to be honest, especially with my unique background; that part could be woven into a scene with a present love-interest, lots of possibilities there.
The last part, the "grape scene," that turns into a straight up reportable crime, not even the pretense of permission there. Inviting somebody over to take advantage of a situation like that is pure evil, nothing fun in that at all. Now that being said, I've gotten close to these elements myself, but some component of consent to get into the scene has to be there first, even if it's then taken in a new direction once the games begin. Imagine the family-bomb fuse the older sister is setting alight here, if the victim is to survive she's going to tell the cops, and her family too (maybe).
I'd be surprised if her father or even an older brother left any of them alive. Now if they go the legal route instead, the cops are going to show up at the scene of the crime, and they're going to find a bondage room/dungeon, and then likely everybody is going to jail as accessories to the crime. Then the cops are going to look at every unsolved missing person report for the last twenty years... Unless the older sister is a dunce, or actually wanting this to happen, it's just not a plausible scenario.
So, how to fix this? Maybe the boy who caught the teen in self-bondage talks her into doing a scene, making an amateur movie for both of their viewing pleasures, (consent).
Then boy invites somebody else into the scene as a surprise villain, (masked maybe) once victim/playmate is stripped, bound, and gagged, not knowing their history with each other. Maybe even victim/playmate is blindfolded too, and nobody says a word to tip her off. The boys could take turns filming, and obviously take turns with their playmate too, so some element of fun here, until maybe the "let me out part." Maybe though the surprise villain remains unknown, at least until she sees the film they made together later on?
I hope this helps, Jackie.
#95
Bondage Discussion / Story Help - Can this story se...
Last post by Zephyr - January 03, 2025, 07:30:37 AMI try hard to write stories with people who at least act normal. I have a situation that while I would like to "go there" in the story it takes me places I am not sure I can recover from. If any of you have thoughts or suggestions on how this might work I would be extremely interested.
Story is a freshman college girl alone at her family summer home gets caught by her equally watching-the-house-by-himself male neighbor who she had a brief fling with several years ago when she was too young to know what she was doing and freaked out by boys. She gets caught doing self-bondage and to buy his silence she becomes his slave girl for the rest of the summer (hell, they both were bored anyway). She has harem slave girl fantasisis and he finds and reads her diary and some of the things they do is acting out along her fantasies, so it's all good. His parents have a dungeon built into what they thought was a secret area in him house's basement that the kids would never find out about (a miserable failure) so they have equipment to play with as well.
This goes well until his older sister catches them. Now they both are older sister's playtoys. Turns out older sister knows all about the basement as she was heavily played with there in time past by her boyfriend, and sister is not afraid to use the equipment on her two helpless victims.
I want to write a scene that is flat-out NC. Older sister leaves female lead tied up naked in the basement dungeon and invites an old boyfriend of the younger girl, another goy who is not a nice person and who got pissed and left her back two years ago basically because she was afraid of getting pregnant and would not put out. Older sister, with brother tied up at the side of the room to witness, leaves old boyfriend to have fun with female lead, with the proviso that among other things he whips her and comes inside her. She obviously freaks out, wanting nothing to do with old boyfriend, much less him seeing her naked and tied up and knowing he most certainly will, along with a lot of other unhappy things f her thoroughly without mercy to get his revenger for her saying no in the past before he is through.
The problem is, how do I dismount from that scene? I am basically getting the female lead graped. You don't do that to a woman (except in horrible circumstances that do not at all exist here) and she just shrugs and goes on. She's hurt, she's defensive, she's curled up into a ball physically and emotionally. She is NOT coming back over the next day ready to see what games are next, which is what is needed from a storyline perspective but just isn't realistic for human beings. Any thoughts?
Story is a freshman college girl alone at her family summer home gets caught by her equally watching-the-house-by-himself male neighbor who she had a brief fling with several years ago when she was too young to know what she was doing and freaked out by boys. She gets caught doing self-bondage and to buy his silence she becomes his slave girl for the rest of the summer (hell, they both were bored anyway). She has harem slave girl fantasisis and he finds and reads her diary and some of the things they do is acting out along her fantasies, so it's all good. His parents have a dungeon built into what they thought was a secret area in him house's basement that the kids would never find out about (a miserable failure) so they have equipment to play with as well.
This goes well until his older sister catches them. Now they both are older sister's playtoys. Turns out older sister knows all about the basement as she was heavily played with there in time past by her boyfriend, and sister is not afraid to use the equipment on her two helpless victims.
I want to write a scene that is flat-out NC. Older sister leaves female lead tied up naked in the basement dungeon and invites an old boyfriend of the younger girl, another goy who is not a nice person and who got pissed and left her back two years ago basically because she was afraid of getting pregnant and would not put out. Older sister, with brother tied up at the side of the room to witness, leaves old boyfriend to have fun with female lead, with the proviso that among other things he whips her and comes inside her. She obviously freaks out, wanting nothing to do with old boyfriend, much less him seeing her naked and tied up and knowing he most certainly will, along with a lot of other unhappy things f her thoroughly without mercy to get his revenger for her saying no in the past before he is through.
The problem is, how do I dismount from that scene? I am basically getting the female lead graped. You don't do that to a woman (except in horrible circumstances that do not at all exist here) and she just shrugs and goes on. She's hurt, she's defensive, she's curled up into a ball physically and emotionally. She is NOT coming back over the next day ready to see what games are next, which is what is needed from a storyline perspective but just isn't realistic for human beings. Any thoughts?
#96
Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Just Another Box by Grimm ...
Last post by grimm_searcher - January 02, 2025, 08:25:46 PMQuote from: picofarad on September 02, 2024, 05:04:59 PMYou have written a top notch, engaging story. I love everything about it.
Thank you so much for sharing it with us here. I can't imagine how much work has already gone into your writing. I do hope you continue.
All my best,
Mike
I wanted to also thank you for your comments Mike! It means a lot to hear people are enjoying my writing and it definitely gives me motivation to write more
#97
Packaged Website Stories Feedback / Re: Just Another Box by Grimm ...
Last post by grimm_searcher - January 02, 2025, 08:23:01 PMThank you for your thoughtful response feline! It's really rewarding and helpful to hear what readers like yourself are enjoying, especially since I've gotten so much out your stories over the years.
It's also interesting to hear your thoughts on where this might go, although I hope you're not too disappointed since it doesn't really align with your speculation. For better or worse this story has been in my head for almost 20 years now which means I knew where the characters were going to end up before I wrote the first word, and while I have tweaked a few things along the way, nothing that has changed the overall trajectory of the story arc.
Since you were kind enough to share your feedback, I will mention one possible change to the original story that I'd love to get your thoughts on. The original story sort of closed out "the voice" part of the story and moved Natsuko into a new chapter, less about the box and more about exploring her submission outside the box. Sorry if I'm being vague, but I'm also trying not to reveal spoilers until the next piece is at least in draft form. Honestly after keeping this story in my head for so long I'm considering either putting a bow on it and calling it done after the box part is complete, or at the very least, maybe offering readers the option of an alternate ending that explores her post-box submission. One thing I'm reluctant to do is to create another cliff hanger and then have readers wait for the post-box writing, since it could easily be as long as one or two of the current chapters.
There in lies my dilemma and my question for you: should I simply finish the story after the box part is complete, and give readers closure on the story, or should I offer them a choice to have a much longer conclusion as an alternate ending? If I went with the alternate ending option that would make the next chapter shorter and offer a significantly longer extended version at a later date. Thoughts?
Finally I can't make any promises, but I have made significant headway on the closing out the box part of the story, so with a little luck, that could be ready for review here in a matter of months instead of years this time. If you and others want to see where Paul and Natsuko go after that, it would be a much longer wait for that.
Thanks again for your thoughts, and also for posting it on the other site this story appears, since as you astutely figured out, I watch that site more closely than the forum here :/
It's also interesting to hear your thoughts on where this might go, although I hope you're not too disappointed since it doesn't really align with your speculation. For better or worse this story has been in my head for almost 20 years now which means I knew where the characters were going to end up before I wrote the first word, and while I have tweaked a few things along the way, nothing that has changed the overall trajectory of the story arc.
Since you were kind enough to share your feedback, I will mention one possible change to the original story that I'd love to get your thoughts on. The original story sort of closed out "the voice" part of the story and moved Natsuko into a new chapter, less about the box and more about exploring her submission outside the box. Sorry if I'm being vague, but I'm also trying not to reveal spoilers until the next piece is at least in draft form. Honestly after keeping this story in my head for so long I'm considering either putting a bow on it and calling it done after the box part is complete, or at the very least, maybe offering readers the option of an alternate ending that explores her post-box submission. One thing I'm reluctant to do is to create another cliff hanger and then have readers wait for the post-box writing, since it could easily be as long as one or two of the current chapters.
There in lies my dilemma and my question for you: should I simply finish the story after the box part is complete, and give readers closure on the story, or should I offer them a choice to have a much longer conclusion as an alternate ending? If I went with the alternate ending option that would make the next chapter shorter and offer a significantly longer extended version at a later date. Thoughts?
Finally I can't make any promises, but I have made significant headway on the closing out the box part of the story, so with a little luck, that could be ready for review here in a matter of months instead of years this time. If you and others want to see where Paul and Natsuko go after that, it would be a much longer wait for that.
Thanks again for your thoughts, and also for posting it on the other site this story appears, since as you astutely figured out, I watch that site more closely than the forum here :/
#98
Looking for a Story / Re: bondage convention story
Last post by Rubberh - January 02, 2025, 07:15:50 PMI wrote a story from a different perspective, Titled 'Unconventional'. You might find it interesting.
#99
Latex Website Stories Feedback / Re: A Latex Love Affair by Ian...
Last post by thepinkbishop - January 02, 2025, 03:21:56 PMSir, I thank you for the pleasure I drew
Your drama hath caused me Much Ado
For I much enjoyed that starcrosed lover
Clad from head to foot in clinging rubber.
I will no longer read the bardic text
And think of dull and plain vanilla sex
Or titter at the crack in Thisby's wall
Like schoolboy or rude mechanical.
In Shakespeare's neatly metered verse methinks
There abound a thousand other kinks.
Bottom brings Titania equine joy
As her harnessed asinine pony boy;
Bondage fun for Benedick and Beatrice;
Lady McBeth, leather dominatrix;
Portia, slutty in heels, stockings and chains
Pleads eloquently for mercy she will not obtain
Hamlet, tortured by needs to be chastised
Seeks relief between Ophelia's thighs
Kneeling spread and clamped and plugged in chains
His tongue buried deep as his caged cock strains.
Shrews paraded in bridles and in branks;
Winter wives in chastity and nipple clamps;
Chased naughty maids and fawns with butt plug tails
Tho' sadly not enough cross dressing males.
A subtext in each verse abounds methinks
Of loving labours with all kinds of kinks.
Your drama hath caused me Much Ado
For I much enjoyed that starcrosed lover
Clad from head to foot in clinging rubber.
I will no longer read the bardic text
And think of dull and plain vanilla sex
Or titter at the crack in Thisby's wall
Like schoolboy or rude mechanical.
In Shakespeare's neatly metered verse methinks
There abound a thousand other kinks.
Bottom brings Titania equine joy
As her harnessed asinine pony boy;
Bondage fun for Benedick and Beatrice;
Lady McBeth, leather dominatrix;
Portia, slutty in heels, stockings and chains
Pleads eloquently for mercy she will not obtain
Hamlet, tortured by needs to be chastised
Seeks relief between Ophelia's thighs
Kneeling spread and clamped and plugged in chains
His tongue buried deep as his caged cock strains.
Shrews paraded in bridles and in branks;
Winter wives in chastity and nipple clamps;
Chased naughty maids and fawns with butt plug tails
Tho' sadly not enough cross dressing males.
A subtext in each verse abounds methinks
Of loving labours with all kinds of kinks.
#100
Looking for a Story / Re: bondage convention story
Last post by Valleylog1 - January 02, 2025, 02:51:19 PMThe story you're referring to is called 'Hope Floats' by Nate Wallis. Chapter 1 is called 'Table Service' and chapter two is called Pool Toy'. It's one of my favorites.
https://www.latexstories.net/storiesek/hopefloats.html
https://www.latexstories.net/storiesek/hopefloats2.html
https://www.latexstories.net/storiesek/hopefloats3.html
https://www.latexstories.net/storiesek/hopefloats.html
https://www.latexstories.net/storiesek/hopefloats2.html
https://www.latexstories.net/storiesek/hopefloats3.html
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