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Maidbots => Maidbots.net stories feedback => Topic started by: teanndaorsa on March 03, 2021, 09:54:29 pm
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You can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.maidbots.net/storiessz/shouldnt_have_maid_her1_1.html
Solo-F; M/f; MF/f; group; fpov; maid-bots; mast; mind-control; maid; costume; lingerie; voy; tricked; cons; X
https://www.maidbots.net/storiessz/shouldnt_have_maid_her1_2.html
M/f; MF/f; maid-bots; maid; mind-control; naked; oral; cuckold; collar; sex; oral; cons; X
https://www.maidbots.net/storiessz/shouldnt_have_maid_her2_1.html
F/f; maid-bots; maid; mind-control; naked; collar; leash; shower; oral; cons; X
https://www.maidbots.net/storiessz/shouldnt_have_maid_her2_2.html
M/f; maid-bots; maid; mind-control; naked; oral; sex; cons; X
https://www.maidbots.net/storiessz/shouldnt_have_maid_her2_3.html
F/f; M/f+; maid-bots; maid; mind-control; collar; cuffs; roleplay; bond; oral; sex; cons; X
https://www.maidbots.net/storiessz/shouldnt_have_maid_her3_1.html
F/f; maid-bots; maid; mind-control; sex; bond; cuffs; toys; mast; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks ;)
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How to have cerebral sex in addition to regular one. And how to make mess out of it.
Looks differently than a lot of other "maidbot"-type stories because here we have real persons and they are not dolls totally controlled by House Computer.
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I do hope Baubleheadz posts the other chapters of this story to the Plaza.
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I do hope Baubleheadz posts the other chapters of this story to the Plaza.
Hope satisfied, eventually! Other chapters are in the pipeline, hang tight.
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And the remaining chapters I have all up tonight, enjoy.
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I found this a bit confusing at first, it took a while to make sense of the different names, the overlapping personalities, and to understand the rules of this world and what the chips were doing, what they were capable of!
But once I started to make sense of this, its a very sexy and fun read, I really do enjoy the partial control the computer is providing, a fascinating idea, and one I would love to see more of! She is aware of the orders and the demands of the computer, but she can try to work around them, she can sometimes just ignore them, but other times they just flow over and across her, leaving her controlled, manipulated and ordered around, fascinating, sexy and well done, thank you :)
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I like the future world that this story takes pace in, not something that is possible today, but maybe less than fifty years from today. I agree with Feline that it was a challenge to keep track of the personalities at first, but I can't think of a better way to tell this story than you have.
Imagine the challenge for the characters, keeping their own minds with all this going on around them? I would also love to see Amy conspire with the house computer, or even Casandra's husband, to teach a lesson and leave Cassy in maid/concubine mode for a period of time, just to get the full experience. She has her new bar code, and a troublesome maid could always be lent out to the neighbors, or even sold off or re-contracted at the slave market. Does the husband travel at all, to earn his implied wealth? Might he take Amy with him instead, or might the two ladies, being left alone, get into some serious mischief? How similar do the two ladies actually look, or could be made to look, in this future world?
I could obviously see a few more chapters in this wonderful tale; you've taken the time to build the characters and the setting, and I think it would be a shame to leave it here.
In any event, thank you for sharing, Jackie.
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I hope there will be more chapters of this in the future. In my own head I imagine dozens of different ways this story could go. So I am curious to see what the authors direction takes us.
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You are not only one who think like this.