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Other Worlds Section => Pet & PonyGirl Stories => Topic started by: teanndaorsa on September 29, 2020, 07:01:32 PM

Title: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: teanndaorsa on September 29, 2020, 07:01:32 PM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

1: The Fastest Pony on Earth
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/girls_and_bridle1.html
FF; lesbian; sex; racetrack; latex; ponygirl; racing; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/girls_and_bridle2.html
FF; ponygirl; latex; training; bond; cuffs; harness; straps; oral; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/girls_and_bridle3.html
FF; ponygirl; training; latex; bond; harness; straps; armbinder; blindfold; bodymod; mast; rom; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/girls_and_bridle4.html
FF; ponygirl; training; latex; bond; oral; catsuit; harness; cuffs; rom; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/girls_and_bridle5a.html
FF; ponygirl; training; latex; catsuit; harness; rom; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/girls_and_bridle5b.html
FF; ponygirl; training; latex; catsuit; harness; oral; rom; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/girls_and_bridle6.html
FF; F+; ponygirl; training; latex; catsuit; harness; oral; rom; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: loras pa6 on October 01, 2020, 05:01:42 PM
Shaping up to be an interesting story!
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on October 01, 2020, 05:37:16 PM
Shaping up to be an interesting story!

Yes. :) ... I assure you, the upcoming chapters are amazing. It is VERY rare that I reread my own stuff just for entertainment. The other day I read up to chapter 5 just for fun... I love the characters so much. Hemlock and Nightshade are hilarious. :) I love the two pink ponies so much... there will be a new chapter every month... 6 are already drafted, but there will be like 10 total. :)

Now I'll go to jail for saying that I love my own stories. :D
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: teanndaorsa on October 01, 2020, 10:40:31 PM
They say write what you love, I figure that means you should love what you write too.
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on October 01, 2020, 11:16:27 PM
They say write what you love, I figure that means you should love what you write too.

Yeaaah... I do... but you know... when I brag about my own stuff it always feel like I'm self promoting... that feeling is even worse since I got my own little site... I don't want people to think I'm trying to promote a business or anything when I speak about my stories :) ... All my readers are equaly important. :) (okay, I lied... cute girls wearing maid uniforms or fox ears are the most important)
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: loras pa6 on October 02, 2020, 03:04:16 AM
I am constantly going back and rereading my own stories. In addition to enjoying the story as a reader, it helps me to stay in that character set while I am writing additional pieces of that story arc
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: sammy808 on October 05, 2020, 03:59:59 AM
another great start to the story, with a lot of characters that i want to hear more about (and a few that i want to have bad ends).  keep up the great work! :D
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on October 05, 2020, 05:13:20 AM
another great start to the story, with a lot of characters that i want to hear more about (and a few that i want to have bad ends).  keep up the great work! :D

Thanks Sammy. This one is going to be published on a monthly basis (should) ... It's going to be a fun one. :)
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: Sarah on October 11, 2020, 09:21:06 PM
i love this story. Thank you for getting round to writing a pony story. i look forward to reading the up coming chapters. Please keep up the good work.
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: teanndaorsa on November 05, 2020, 09:11:23 PM
Part 2 up today.
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: teanndaorsa on January 03, 2021, 09:20:04 PM
More pony action tonight in part 4...
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: teanndaorsa on February 13, 2021, 08:35:51 PM
Another part up tonight; the other section of it will follow soon.
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on February 14, 2021, 05:52:48 AM
What a lovely story.... oh wait, tis mine! ;)

I wish I would receive more feedback about that story because it might be my favorite one to write. It's not brute sex and kinks, but I love the storyline quite a bit. It makes me want to spend a bit more time planning my characters and storylines before I write my stories.
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: loras pa6 on February 14, 2021, 11:55:53 PM
I'm curious about where Hemlock's arc is heading, will the reporter blow the whistle on their mistreatment or get in even more trouble for leaving. I was actually concerned she may fall and get hurt going to town.
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on February 15, 2021, 05:44:12 AM
I'm curious about where Hemlock's arc is heading, will the reporter blow the whistle on their mistreatment or get in even more trouble for leaving. I was actually concerned she may fall and get hurt going to town.

To be honest, I can't comment until part two of chapter five is published. :) But frankly, after Morning Star's injury that took about 4 chapters to heal, don't expect another bad injury. ;) I want my ponies healthy and kicking because the Triple Crown is just around the corner. :)
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: nicore on February 20, 2021, 08:07:17 AM
Really like the story. A good mix of character drama, fun and sexiness. Can fully understand Morning Star's desire to run as quickly as possible and the trouble it brings. Also love the bit with the fangirling show ponies.

Any plans to flesh out the world with background info in a small story? Interested in learning more about a world where race and show ponygirls seem to be rather mainstream. And what other ways it differs, is it only girls or are there also ponyboy leagues? Other latex clad animal play? (Given the openess with the ponygirls I assume it's an alternative world from the Pet Cafe world).

How much research did you do before starting the story, or is most of the technical parts something you knew beforehand?
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on February 20, 2021, 01:07:21 PM
Really like the story. A good mix of character drama, fun and sexiness. Can fully understand Morning Star's desire to run as quickly as possible and the trouble it brings. Also love the bit with the fangirling show ponies.

Any plans to flesh out the world with background info in a small story? Interested in learning more about a world where race and show ponygirls seem to be rather mainstream. And what other ways it differs, is it only girls or are there also ponyboy leagues? Other latex clad animal play? (Given the openess with the ponygirls I assume it's an alternative world from the Pet Cafe world).

How much research did you do before starting the story, or is most of the technical parts something you knew beforehand?

Thanks! Glad you like the series so far.

I won't developed the world much further in this series. The reason is, ponygirl racing is normal and needs no explanation, if you know what I mean. It's not the same world as animal café, no. Girls and bridle evolves in the 70s. There are no computers or cellphone. Animal café is the present.

Do your remember Athena? The young girl in the village? I'm planning to write a side story about her more focused on the world later. Maybe that will answer some of your questions.

As for research, none. This story was inspired from a friend in UK who was a ponygirl and had hurt her ankle. During our numerous conversations I gathered some mental details, but that is about it. I never were into ponyplay and had never read a story about ponies. This series is only an expression of what I thought it would look like. I'm sure all the real ponygirl in this world probably want to throw tomatoes at me for writing something that doesn't represent their lifestyle. ;)
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: loras pa6 on February 22, 2021, 02:46:13 AM
I did not see that twist coming!
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: teanndaorsa on March 31, 2021, 08:23:41 PM
A new part up today, enjoy!
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: loras pa6 on April 02, 2021, 05:42:52 AM
Another great building chapter! I predicted Stardust's intent.

The closing Pony Food comment had me laughing
Title: Re: Girls and Bridle by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on April 03, 2021, 04:11:19 PM
Another great building chapter! I predicted Stardust's intent.

The closing Pony Food comment had me laughing

Cassy's character comes out of nowhere. She had a minor role in chapter 5 during a flashback, but I needed some sexy scenes in chapter 6 and decided to use her. I loved her so much that she will be very present in chapter 7. She is very cute.