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Title: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: teanndaorsa on July 14, 2020, 10:01:04 pm

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesad/the_barn.html
Sbf; teen; insert; gag; hood; bond; corset; cuffs; playroom; captive; dildo; buttplug; cons; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesad/the_barn2.html
Sbf; M/f; bond; barn; table; toys; vibe; cuffs; insert; oral; first; gag; climax; breast; chain; chastity; playroom; clamps; head-harness; cons; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesad/the_barn3.html
M/f; denial; insert; ballgag; blindfold; corset; cuffs; hoist; spreadeagle; susp; playroom; climax; toys; snow; barn; cons; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesad/the_barn4.html
M/f; bond; cuffs; strip; spreader; table; tease; oral; mast; sex; chair; straps; toys; chastity; rom; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: Zephyr on July 16, 2020, 12:53:41 am

Loved it! Great story.

It could stand by itself, but more on what happens in November would also be very nice!

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: MasterKGray on July 19, 2020, 08:47:14 am

Agree with Zephyr, very good story.  Would love to know what happens in November.   ;)

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: TeaSer on July 28, 2020, 01:42:43 pm

This is an excellent story, Bucky!

Well written - that means: Easy to read, good flow, good progress, probable scenes.

Stories can devellop in a dark way or in a light way - you chose the light way. This means that a guy like me sits with some good emotions, but is not overly horny. Still good emotions are also welcome!

Like the other two comments suggests you're in a difficult dilemma now. The story can well be continued, but it can equally well stop here - leaving the continuation to our own fantasy. Whatever you choose, I will respect.

Thanks for the story

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: teanndaorsa on August 04, 2020, 10:06:07 pm

And a part 2 up today.

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: jackierabbit1 on August 06, 2020, 02:03:47 am

Both parts were quite enjoyable, and well written, the characters fun as well.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: drulema on August 06, 2020, 05:40:30 am

Read the 1st two parts of what I anticipate will be more great experiences for Bobbi. Hopefully she will be able to spend more then a night in bondage. Thank you for writing this story!

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: Zephyr on August 06, 2020, 11:03:37 am

Part 2 is excellent as well. Is there more planned?

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: teanndaorsa on September 15, 2020, 09:18:19 pm

And part 3 up today

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: drulema on September 16, 2020, 06:23:43 pm

Great storytelling! I can visualize every move, every expression, everything in the room.
Looking forward to future chapters!

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: jackierabbit1 on October 02, 2020, 09:48:20 am

Part three was enjoyable too, thanks for sharing.

Jackie.

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: Kinkycouple on January 19, 2021, 03:38:54 am

Thank you author!

Amazing story telling.
The equipment and scenarios are amazing!

I really hope more stories are planned. Your dungeon has so many possibilities!

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: teanndaorsa on June 21, 2021, 08:49:41 pm

Part 4 up tonight, enjoy.

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: drulema on June 26, 2021, 08:00:27 am

A little divergence from the "norm" of what I expected, but very enjoyable to read.
Now, my only thought running through my brain at the end of the  4th chapter is "who exactly is "we" supposed to be referring to?" Steven & Bobbie or Amelia & Bobbie?

Title: Re: The Barn by Bucky Goldstein
Post by: TeaSer on July 17, 2021, 10:44:00 pm

What a nice surprice. I haven't been at the Forum for a long time, and now you've put a brand new section of this wonderful story here for me (and for all your other followers, of course).

Thanks a lot, Bucky

TeaSer