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Title: How I became a Maid-bot by Gromet
Post by: Gromet on October 05, 2017, 08:23:10 am
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.dollstories.net/storiesek/howibecameamaidbot1.html
Solo-F; F/f; FM+/f; roleplay; caught; maid; uniform; servant; college; project; collar; mindcontrol; transform; F2maidbot; programming; controlled; pod; recharge; experiment; cons; X

http://www.dollstories.net/storiesek/howibecameamaidbot2.html
FM+/f; f2maidbot; uniform; servant; project; collar; mindcontrol; program; controlled; pod; recharge; discovery; FF; lesbian; embaressed; reprogram; sexbot; tease; used; mast; oral; sex; anal; cons/nc; X

http://www.dollstories.net/storiesek/howibecameamaidbot3.html
FM+/f; FF; lesbian; f2maidbot; uniform; servant; project; collar; mindcontrol; program; controlled; pod; recharge; discovery; cons; X

http://www.dollstories.net/storiesek/howibecameamaidbot4.html
FM+/f; FF; f2maidbot; uniform; servant; project; collar; mindcontrol; program; controlled; pod; recharge; return; diconnected; maid; uniform; servant; cons; X

http://www.dollstories.net/storiesek/howibecameamaidbot5.html
M+/f; maid; uniform; servant; conditioned; pod; recharge; project; crate; maidbot; discovery; f2maidbot; collar; mindcontrol; program; controlled; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: How I became a Maid-bot by Gromet
Post by: feline on October 05, 2017, 10:09:03 pm
I have just finished part 1, and thought I would post a couple of thoughts before reading more.

Part 1 is well written, and easy and fun read, the characters are well drawn, and her fascination with being a maid from a very early age is well described, and feels natural for her, while also being shown to be something quite unusual, that others may not agree with or approve of.  It is interesting to see how happy her mother is to accept and enable her behaving like a maid, and had no issue with her as she got older.

I do enjoy the different ways the different characters are reacting towards her, and treating her.

Jean making sure to present her in the french maids outfit when her two friends first visited, and then deliberately showing her off.  I wasn't sure at first if this was playful teasing or being subtly mean to her, but near the end, when Jean responds so strongly, pointing out that this is her best friend, answered that question for me.

In contrast there is the sense that Steve is looking at her much more in terms of her physical appearance, as much as how easily and naturally she falls into the role of being a maid.

I am not sure I would call this story sexy at this stage, but it has definitely caught my interest, and I am most curious to see where it goes from here :)
Title: Re: How I became a Maid-bot by Gromet
Post by: Gromet on October 05, 2017, 11:56:03 pm
Thanks Feline, I tried to get a feeling of why she liked being a maid, how she found comfort in wearing the outfit, though I think I dragged on a bit long in the first chapter - this was supposed to be a short story! It just developed itself from there.
Title: Re: How I became a Maid-bot by Gromet
Post by: feline on October 10, 2017, 11:59:56 am
I finished reading the story, with a degree of interest, but I am unsure how I feel about it.  It is exactly what it set out to be, a story about someone becoming a robot, but because of this, our maid's feelings and emotions are very muted.  She is constrained and contained, kept on a narrow path.  As a result, I found it hard to care to deeply about her, or get to involved or invested in her journey.

Very much a matter of personal taste though, and others will prefer this style.

What really shone through for me, and got and kept my attention, was the way the people around her spoke and behaved towards her.  Her best friend put her upto this, treated her like a maid, but for all of this, clearly understood and saw that this was just a part of her friend, not the totality of her friend, that she was still a person, and when she was not working as a maid, she was still her friend and someone she wanted to be close with and spend time with.

Yet in contrast most of the others very quickly stopped seeing her as a person, or even a human being, if they ever did to start with.  Almost instantly the maid went from being a person who had to give permission to a simple object they controlled, manipulated, and did whatever they wanted with and to, as and when they wanted to.

I think it would have been interesting to explore this side of things a little bit more, since there are definitely some fun dynamics to play with here :)
Title: Re: How I became a Maid-bot by Gromet
Post by: Gromet on October 11, 2017, 05:52:43 am
Yes after she became a maid-bot the guys on the projects just used her as an object, whilst the two female characters were off developing their own relationship. Valerie resentful of Jean's friendship with Tracy and taking it out on the poor maid, and also not being used to seeing servants as people just used her as well. Finally ending with the abandonment of Tracy by Jean, now too ashamed that she allowed her friend to be used this way. The boys now having clear access to their object - the maid-bot, Tracy wanting to retreat back into the 'safety' of being controlled as a maid where she feels secure and comfortable.

Thanks again for your feedback Feline, I have some more stories in the works soon.
Title: Re: How I became a Maid-bot by Gromet
Post by: jackierabbit1 on October 29, 2017, 06:22:43 pm
I just binge read all the chapters, really enjoyed this story and the total control of the maid bot Tracy. I liked the chapter length as well, perfect from my perspective as read alone chapters, if that's what one wants to do.
 Owned and used is a favorite theme of mine, and I hope Tracy finds a new home where she can be appreciated, perhaps after an online auction for used college test equipment so the incriminating evidence can be made to disappear.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
Title: Re: How I became a Maid-bot by Gromet
Post by: Gromet on October 29, 2017, 09:42:37 pm
Thanks Jackie, you and I are like minded, being owned and used is a favourite theme of mine too, either being a lovedoll or a maidbot. Tracy was eventually going to be taken in by Jean as another one of her maids, her guilt at turning Tracy into a maidbot now long gone. But I like the idea of her being sold off, maybe Jean could buy her at the auction.

I have another maid-bot story over on deviantart: http://doll-stories.deviantart.com/art/The-Family-Maid-711622029, which will be posted to the plaza soon. Another supposed-to-be short story that turned into three chapters.
Title: Re: How I became a Maid-bot by Gromet
Post by: jackierabbit1 on October 30, 2017, 08:39:04 am
Just read it, very good, but I suspect that some misfortune will occur on the yacht outing. If the boat should sink, or become lost, I could see Stacy the maid bot's older siblings wishing to claim their inheritance all for themselves. Perhaps Stacy was even the favorite child and destine to receive a disproportional sum, the others keeping her in submissive service as the ultimate payback for some perceived favoritism. Or perhaps the maid bot company will simply reassign her some new duties in a new mansion while Stacy's parents are away seeing as how the company is a registered co-owner of the maid bot and the house is over staffed at the moment.

This is a fun story line, thanks for sharing, Jackie.